The End (Part I)

[BlueDragon_tamki 3,204]

The End (Part I)

"Hey Asif, how are you doing?" I asked him.

He was walking towards me in the playground area when I spoke. Everyone was either running around or doing barbecue outside. But he didn't say a word which worried me a bit.

"Are you okay? Is there anything wrong?"

No answer. Something indeed was wrong but I couldn't figure out what. Then I saw a line of blood coming from his mouth: he was injured. But to my horror, that wasn't the case. He then fell to the ground on his stomach, blood spreading around him and died.

"Asif!!!! No!!!" I yelled, upset.

Who did this to him? How did this happen? When? Why? My friends would never do that to him. Even though they fought a few times, it wasn't as severe as this. I suddenly felt a cold chill down my spine like if someone was behind me. So I turned around and someone was really behind me. I screamed then jumped back. It was me, well not exactly. His eyes were red and the area of the eyes was black instead of white. My logo, clothing and shoes were blue; his, however, were kinda darker and the dragon logo eyes matched his eyes. He then smiled at me which was creepy; when I looked at his left hand, it had blood on it. I started to get angry.

"So you're the one who did this!" I shouted. "I'll avenge his death and take you down!"

"I would like to see you try..." he replied, giving me an evil grin.

So I fought him but he neither moved a muscle nor took damage. How was that even possible? I continued to punch and kick but it was useless. I have no choice but to use my strongest attack. I said to myself. I put my metal gloves on then teleported about 50 miles away from where he was standing and I ran towards him with great speed. I put my hand in front of me and my fist behind. When I got near him, my glove was charging then I punched the other me with great force. There was smoke in the area I was in. I was also too tired to fight after using that attack. When the smoke faded, the other me grabbed my neck with his left hand and said, "Hmm, that wasn't a weak attack there: but not strong enough to stop me." He squeezed my neck even tighter and I could hardly breathe. I lift my left foot but he caught it which was the part of the plan. I then kicked his face and slammed him to the ground so he could let go of me; I was catching my breath for a moment. He laughed then said, "Not a bad attack there. And you're standing on your feet so I'm going to enjoy this little fight."

"Fool!" I replied. "Do you really think I am here to give you entertainment?"

"Who knows?" he asked.

Then he launched towards me with great speed that it was to see him: he was bouncing everywhere while punching me and I started to feel dizzy. We fought but he proved himself irresistible. I was about to use my strongest attack against him again when he suddenly appeared behind me and somehow stretched his arm while twisting it. Impossible! Nobody can stretch their arms like that! He smiled at me then said, "Gumo Gumo no... " We're in One Piece?! Oh great, that's nice to know. What's next, a flying chicken acting like Superman (=Superchicken)!? His arm turned into metal and got caught on fire. "...Rifled Red Hawk!" I tried to defend with my force field but his punch was so strong that it broke through it. He punched me with a powerful blow that I spat a lot of blood and fire came out of my back, then I flew through a few building and finally a big community center. I crash landed on the floor. I was bloody on my chest and stomach. In the room I crashed into have tables and chairs standing (except for the damaged ones laying around me) and this room looks like it came from my school. This is the cafeteria. I said to myself. There were three doors: two main doors (one leading to the bathroom and the other to the other rooms) but one of them was destroyed since the other me made me bust through it and the floor had a brownish line going to the center of the cafeteria. He came and was a few steps in front of me and said, "I thought you were stronger than that; I'm starting to get bored with you..."
He started to walk towards me. I was too weak to move, even too weak to speak. He then grabbed my neck and looked at me. I looked at one of his sleeves and it said "Nephtali.EXE". What in the world is .exe for a person. He laughed and said, "It seems like it's your turn to die and I don't even need to use one of my strongest attack a second time to kill you. I hope you can greet Asif for me when you see him in the afterlife."

"But how-" I tried to ask but I was hurt so bad that I had problems finishing my question.

"...can I do that?" he said. How did he read my mind!? "Remember this: any superpower you see in movies, clips and videos, I can absorb it and use it..."

He lifted his fist and punched through my chest. My eyesight was blurry, I could hardly breathe or move and I have a hole on my upper body...

I suddenly woke up and I think I screamed too. I was sweating like crazy and I was afraid to go back to sleep. Neither my stomach or my chest were feeling good: I was feeling a bit sick. I checked my clock: it was 4 o'clock in the morning. I threw my blanket off of me and I went to the bathroom to wash my face and I looked at the mirror. I was kinda pale; I was also taking deep breaths.
I started to have a chill down my spine. How can that happen if nobody else is near me??

"Nephtali..." a voice suddenly said.
I jumped then quickly turned around, frightened and saw Malik in front of the bathroom door. I took a deep breath and the whole house fell down. "Quit making people jump out of their skin by frightening them! You'll kill an old granny in her sleep!" I whispered to him.

He gave me a funny look. "One, I was not trying to scare you this time. And two, are you that serious? How can that kill an old granny?"

I was speechless on that part and asked him, "Why are you awake anyways?"

"Why are you awake?" he asked.

"I asked first, Malik."

"Well I was wondering what was all this stomping in the hallway like if Big Foot came in or something and I decided to see what was it coming from: I wasn't expecting it would be you..."

"I am not Big Foot! I'm up due to a strange dream, ok?"

He didn't reply for ten seconds since he was tired. "Ok." he answered. "It's best if we go back to sleep..."

So he went back to bed. I went back to my room and sat at my desk. I struggled to stay awake because I was afraid but my sleepiness was winning. Still struggling, I managed to get a pen and paper. What did this "Nephtali.EXE" say about superpowers again? I said to myself quietly. Oh yeah I remember. I wrote it down what he said then one question leapt in my head: what about animes? He didn't mention anything about animes. I barely watch them but my sister sometimes shows me some anime parts. Rifled Red Hawk was unfamiliar to me: I don't know that kind of power. I tried to think of something but I couldn't. Then I suddenly dropped my pencil and when I was about to pick it up, I collapse to the floor: I finally fell asleep...



Edited August 12, 2016 by BlueDragon_tamki

[tweezers 1,034]

-Spaced paragraphs and removed the italics 

[need.higher.rank 3,491]

Finally

[ToHoYoNTaDa 1,147]

Good.

[F.I.N.I.S.H.E.R 2,397]

Great!

[gabriele02 3,813]

nice! ^_^

[BlueDragon_tamki 3,204]

Thx everyone

[asifmehmood 1,576]

Wow Awesome , but I died in start -__- , enjoyed much first story I have completely.............

[fightermalikio20115 374]

Nice,cant wait for the other parts :D and I wonder who that character called malik is :rolleyes:?  hmmm....

[BlueDragon_tamki 3,204]

You'll find out in the last part

 

That part will reveal it :d

[gabriele02 3,813]

You'll find out in the last part

That part will reveal it :d

Cant wait.. ^_^

[BlueDragon_tamki 3,204]

Cant wait.. ^_^

:d

[anuclearbomb 220]

I like your style, not even a hundred words in and already someone has died. Looking forward for the next part.

[LeIouch_Vi_Britannia 6,163]

Nothing too great really, you emphasize too much on the "strongest attack" thingie,

"I wanted to use my strongest attack again"

"I don't even need to use my strongest attack the second time"

And all that, you making a Bollywood movie script?

[BlueDragon_tamki 3,204]

Nothing too great really, you emphasize too much on the "strongest attack" thingie,

"I wanted to use my strongest attack again"

"I don't even need to use my strongest attack the second time"

And all that, you making a Bollywood movie script?

i what?

[LeIouch_Vi_Britannia 6,163]

i what?

You literally based the story on that "my strongest attack" thing.

Edited August 16, 2016 by LeIouch_Vi_Britannia

[BlueDragon_tamki 3,204]

You literally baes the story on that "my strongest attack" thing.

oh that part

Sorry but it's kinda hard for me to get actions into words: it takes a lot of time

[LeIouch_Vi_Britannia 6,163]

O RLY? ARE bollywood movies scripts that bad? HH

yea kinda

 

the boy gets shot several times near his heart, smashed by a car, into a building, then the building succumbs onto him

and he is supposedly dead but when someone wants to hurt his gf it all goes slow motion, going on the faces, and then he rushes and beats all of them while this cringy music is playing

[BlueDragon_tamki 3,204]

I only heard of Hollywood o_o

[LeIouch_Vi_Britannia 6,163]

Y U WATCH THOSE NUB MOVIES?? Such ik are nub but there are few good too. Not every one's script is like that :s.

I watched some when I was 8 :lol:

[BlueDragon_tamki 3,204]

bollywood is Indian Film Industry.

kk

[arnav0506 2,777]

Nice article nephtali!

[BlueDragon_tamki 3,204]

Nice article nephtali!

um Idk Nephtali :p

Thx

[DragonOfStorms 2,706]

yea kinda

 

the boy gets shot several times near his heart, smashed by a car, into a building, then the building succumbs onto him

and he is supposedly dead but when someone wants to hurt his gf it all goes slow motion, going on the faces, and then he rushes and beats all of them while this cringy music is playing

I've never watched a Bollywood movie, so I don't know how accurate your statement is, but the way you said (typed?) that made me laugh. Thank you :P

[BlueDragon_tamki 3,204]

I've never watched a Bollywood movie, so I don't know how accurate your statement is, but the way you said (typed?) that made me laugh. Thank you :P

lol