Nightbreeze: Story #1

[Possibility 282]

Nightbreeze

 

 

I'm known by many, many names, but mostly I'm known as Nightbreeze. I am Tanki Online's most notorious criminal, the most wanted criminal, and the most dangerous. The only reason I'm writing this is because I want you guys to know what really happens to Tanki Online. Have you seen those skull faces on castle maps like Wolfenstein and Cologne? Those are all of my acts. Have you seen how damaged the Rio tower is? That was my idea, after I got enraged and decided to destroy Tanki's most iconic building. But we're getting ahead of ourselves. Lets start.
 

 

 

9/19/17

1700 Hours

Madness

 

I'm male, 13 years of age, 5 foot 10, American, white, 139 pounds. Right now, I'm sitting on the highest point in Madness, with my best friend and associate Jamie next to me. We're eating hotdogs, laughing at each others jokes. If I remember correctly, he just told me the cheesiest joke ever: What do you call cheese that's not your own. "Nacho Cheese," he said, laughing. I just rolled my eyes. We're so into our conversation that we don't notice the policemen that came up the ramp. "You're under arrest," one of them shouts while the other start to corner us. I hop into my tank, Firebird with Wasp, and drive as far as I can, screaming for Jamie to hide. I get to a safe point and turn around. Jamie is up there, looking at me helplessly as the police take him away. I scream, tears already welling in my eyes. I turn into Railgun and put on Double Damage. I shoot the Brigadier, who is  the highest ranking officer that is taking Jamie away. He explodes, and the rest of the platoon turns towards me. They all shoot at me, but luckily, they all have Freeze, and I safely escape with minor injuries. I feel my face burning. I can't believe I put my own life in front of his. I'm raged. I want to punch everyone that comes in my face, but luckily nobody does. I go to Industrial Zone, get out of my tank, and sleep in a random building. 
 

 

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9/20/17

0900 Hours

Industrial Zone

 

I didn't get a good night's sleep, but I drag myself out of bed. I'm still angry, and it feels like a raging inferno inside my heart. I get out of this map, and start to go to another map, unsure of what I want to do. 
 

9/20/17

0910 Hours

Rio

 

Rio. It used to be a beautiful map, but right now, it seems like hell to me. I don't know why, but I want to take my anger out on this. I turn into Magnum and start shelling it from all sides. Then I turn into Striker and start hitting it with that too. Lastly, I use Firebird, and start putting the building on fire. Then I go and hide. 

 

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A few minutes later, I hear sirens wailing and lights flashing. The firefighters, I realize. I see them shoot the tower with their water hoses. I cannot believe that I just did this. I caused all this damage because of what they did to my friend. To Jamie. I remember a night long ago, when we had first met. I had sworn to always put him first, even in front of my own life. And I had broken the oath. I get angrier. I start to shoot the firefighters, one at a time. The building's fire is under control. It's over. For now...
 

~~ Anger is the force that crushes down the skyscraper you built ~~ 

Edited September 22, 2017 by Possibility

[Blackdrakon30 2,943]

- Tweaked font color (The dark red was pretty hard on the eyes, so I gave a dramatic orange shade)

- Slightly altered spacing between paragraphs.

 

Approved

 

Nice story start! 

[zaintahir 458]

Loving it so far.

[Pyre 3,485]

Nice!

[Possibility 282]

Nice

 

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Why Nightrise and not Night-Sisters :P?

You gave me a good idea. Thanks! Watch out for it in the next story .. 

[Possibility 282]

Lol :D Glad to have been of help xD

Just saying Nightsisters helped me a lot 

[bes146 281]

wow gr8 start to a storyy1!!

[Magenta 5,165]

Just saying Nightsisters helped me a lot 

You mean the person or the name? The person is very helpful indeed... except that paint  <_<  :unsure:  :wacko:

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Nice stuff, but, in-case you were trying to exhibit how irl criminals feel, this is a bit off-track.

Edited September 23, 2017 by Magenta

[g-force 1,000]

OMG, this is nice!

[Mrbro 241]

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[Possibility 282]

You mean the person or the name? The person is very helpful indeed... except that paint  <_<  :unsure:  :wacko:

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Nice stuff, but, in-case you were trying to exhibit how irl criminals feel, this is a bit off-track.

What do you know about criminals... Unless you... No, that's impossible... 

[Magenta 5,165]

What do you know about criminals... Unless you... No, that's impossible... 

Let's just say I have read a plethora of books (not the ones which are about peeps kissing) and watched an abundance of movies.