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Questions could get answered if they wait long enough. Now I wonder: how can a question get answered?
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Tankoin Containers are in the game? Well, I've got to log in and see how to get them! Have you bought one of those new containers?
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dont worry about that i enjoy any stories :) esp short stories
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sorry sir i do not statistics come back next year to find out!
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no puedo leer
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Woah... that was great. Words cannot describe how I feel. I have been struggling with my mental health for the past two and some years, and this just basically wrote out what I was thinking. All my friends were gone and the only person I could have depended upon just kept calling me too negative. Thanks for saying what I couldn't ever write. I was also reminded of 1-800-273-8255 by Logic (great song, I memorized it in a week).
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Hrmmm, grading scale looks very familiar *wink wink*. Yeah, I agree the spoilers are highly bothersome. Also, it could do with a touch of color, and maybe the descriptions could be lengthened in some cases. It felt a little brief in my opinion. Overall though, great work with the guide, might go ad try playing with shaft.
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welp i thought u was ganna ask me for joining the leaky mult. welp i guess not its fine im busy too. good work, i cant humor.
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Niceeee, I like the song and the parody is just as good, if not better. However, maybe you could put the original lyrics in a spoiler so readers can reference it easily and differentiate between the two sets of lyrics.
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one of the songs that i memorized during the second week of school, helped me cope with life.
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Well, reading through this topic was a real workout compared to SAT reading *wink wink*. (Oop, I was supposed to be studying but my discipline didn't quite hold up as expected). :P Thought you had some great stuff there, lots of excellent description and high quality advice for readers. It was rather lengthy, as I had mentioned earlier, but I enjoyed the mix of story and guide. However, I'd maybe consider splitting it up because while it's entertaining, I would rather have a separate guide for the map and another for the story and personal experiences expressed in a map review or something of the sorts. Another suggestion I have here is to combine the gamemode info with the preferred loadout to make it easier for readers to access one at a time, however, you can also keep it the way it was originally formatted, it's up to you. As others have suggested, I'd also recommend adding more images (you're free to use any of my imgur links, just DM me if you need a specific one), like when you say DM, Shaft, Hornet, for instance, it would also be great to add the corresponding image. Usually, that will make it easier to inform readers quickly of where you are. Another thing I'd recommend fixing is the point of view. You have a fresh new first-person POV, and I actually really enjoy that. However, most of the time, guides would work more effectively as third-person (for the sake of being more objective and making the article a little bit more focused). Though keep the image commentary, it's what I can't get enough of. :) Adding on to what @Viking4s said, I would also highly suggest using the imgx command to size images to their desired sizes. (One thing to watch out for: sometimes the size becomes a little not what you wanted, so make sure to try out various pixel measurements before you get the perfect resolution that fits just right) Ahh, time to end my own little text wall. It's time to study, and the SAT is waiting to eat me up in my nightmares. Great article, I can't wait for the next!
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uhhh maybe the fact that no one realizes when I'm speaking in metaphor i was being surprised and i said a metaphor and then people took it literally
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hahahaha i still managed to consolidation while chem joking.
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I think you meant HTML5. The 5 is important. What is your favorite number?
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Editorials The Authoritative Guide to Wasp
Person_Random replied to Person_Random in Newspaper Archive
Sorry if i made a bit of an exaggeration, kind of channeled a little too much figurative language to make a snappy line or two. -
one new way to earn some extra views :ph34r: Hey, nice work! I enjoyed the poem (and you know, I have a bit of bias against poems due to past experiences). I thought the poem worked out well, but if you were to have a more uniform structure (lines about the same, unless you intend to make them different lengths, then ignore this) and a bit better formatting (big title up top, try to have uniform boldness as it distracted me a little bit when the font suddenly changed from bold to regular and then back) it would be great. Otherwise, great job! I can't wait for another poem from you.
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[Forum games] "I wish people realized that -" Complete the sentence!
Person_Random replied to Sacrifice in Forum Games
I wish that people realized that if you don't help them when they are feeling down, then they won't help you back. -
Nice work! (Fun fact: there is a kid who calls themselves Mr. Swedish Fish that makes me very annoyed. I hate this kid so yeah the lil subscript at the bottom.) Can't wait for the next issue! ANNOUNCEMENT: Anyone who wishes to be part of the official TWNC server join here. Please also check out our other issue here!
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Tanki Updates are so hard to keep track of. When can people stop being so mean?
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Editorials The Authoritative Guide to Wasp
Person_Random replied to Person_Random in Newspaper Archive
I'll get to work on it soon - exams are always in my way! Unless for parkour, but otherwise yes. Parkour still balances out at some points. Me gusta parkouring. -
did you answer any maybes or third choices? I think I'll consider many of the options. Thank you (all of you) for the support. I knew there was still a community out there I could reach out to.
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