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  1. I read this during church service and this inspired me to write again.  Thank you very much.

    Now on to the evil critique.

    I loved the description, it was very well written.  However, you might want to work on formatting (Titan-Magnum over Titan+Magnum or describe the hull and turret without explicitly stating it.  If you are upset about this, you can critique my next article.  I promise it has many spelling and grammar errors!  Until then...

    im glad i inspired you to write some more and honestly im not mad at your critique, i feel i need it to make my stories better

  2. I agree with that. Also, great story again!

     

    Approved. nice continuation ;)

     

    Edits:

    Minor fixes, like capitalization of few hull names, few commas added.

     

    Also not a mistake, but I think numbers in the text are better in the written form, so not "2nd" but "second", etc.

    thanks both of you!  :)

  3. I have two accounts and I don't have even hornet m0 in them. Hornets are hard to control(they drift) and compared to wasp, a hornet is useless to me. And anyway after dictator, wasp is the best hull for gold hunting. Hornet just goes under tanks, Which is simply useless in gold drops.

    agreed on every point right there

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