Approved! Edits: - Two punctuation errors fixed. - Link added as requested - Remember to capitalise all hull/turret names. - Changed a word that didn't flow. - "Halving" not "Halfing". Another nice review TTK. Cedric mentioned in the original announcement that the range for the "ZERO" supplies was 10 metres. I don't think this feature did completely balance "Druggers" and "Non-druggers" as you say. People that use supplies will make more kills faster and thus gain more experience (filling their ZERO button) faster than their non-drugger rivals, meaning they would reach 100% before the other players. But this feature definitely made battles more balanced. I suffered a lot while using my "camper" alt during the celebrations because of this feature (I mentioned this in Gnat's article). Nice work anyway. Looking forward to the next one!

That's what happens when I attempt to respond to a post at 2 AM. Nice catch.

Approved! Edits: - One grammar error. - Two punctuation errors (end speech with a comma if you follow the quotation with "he/she/I said" etc, not a full stop). - One spelling error corrected. - Replaced a word. - Capitalised "Mars" twice. Tragic. It's like 13 Reasons Why all over again. I like the concept and I can acknowledge the brutality of the ending, but I wish there had been more backstory (though you obviously didn't have much time to create one). I like to see a death occurring after the reader has begun to become almost "attached" to the character, but maybe that is just me. For the most part, your story is well-written. Goodbye my friend! Thank you for being a part of this project! But stay clear of any missions to Mars please.

Take care mate! Pity, I'd just added you to the AWC Distinguished Member list...all my hard work wasted.

Please PM them to me instead.

Approved! Edits: - Removed spoiler. - Changed a word. - Corrected 2 typos. - Made sure that some of the rhyming made sense. - Removed random capitalised letters. I like it! I think it's even better than your previous poems. Though I must say, there is a fine line between reality and poetical fiction, so to speak. Even if you require two rhyming words, make sure that you don't stray into sentences that don't make any sense. But the length is good. No need for a spoiler in the future though!

Sounds like a Reporter.

Approved! Edits: - 4 typos corrected. - 1 grammar error ("How did you find it?" not "How did you found it?"). Very interesting. I personally had no idea about who this "new" eSports Moderator was, so I definitely feel enlightened after reading this. A very nice interview! Nice formatting and your usage of colours is notably good (we don't like bright flashy colours around here).

Good luck!

while the Moderator

No, because "Valor" is the American spelling of "Valour". I use English spellings.

:ph34r:

Ok mom, I'm sorry :(

A review of the May Day 2017 event, fresh from the printers!

Approved! Edits: - Changed font to Trebuchet MS, size 14. - Corrected 2 typos. - Rephrased 1 sentence. - Capitalised several hull/turret names. - Removed indents. - Made font size consistent. - Edited title. Interesting. It's nice to hear about other peoples' experiences using 1 combination. Well-written, though you could possibly be more formal at times. I forgot there's a Savage kit, Tanki must have named it after me...

Nice work Tousif! I might get you to create me a Duelist logo eventually.

No. The "Crystals Obtained" is the number of crystals that you have earned (overall). The "Supplies Used" is the number of supplies you have used. Surely it's fairly obvious?

Nu. Don't go. This could be the start of something spectacular.

Approved. Edits: - Size to 14. - 1 punctuation change. - Added speech marks. Dayumn, I like your style of writing. A very nice-n-concise review in my opinion. Try to add some images in the future perhaps, but your English was almost 100% throughout (from what I can see). Thumbs up from me.

Easier on the eyes, especially for guides.

Guys, I understand how overjoyed you must be to discover that your archenemy has now become a Helper. However, it would be nice if you could remain on topic. Please do not post irrelevant material here in the future and yes, I am looking at you HD members.

There still isn't.

Approved. Edits: - Changed font to Trebuchet MS, size 14. - Removed a contradictory sentence. - Corrected typos. - Added colour and made sub-headings more defined. - 2 sentences rephrased. - Punctuation errors fixed. Nice! I've tried numerous times to do a "Road to Legend" and failed almost every single time (this account isn't even Legend anyway). It feels a little disjointed at times and the information is slightly patchy in my opinion. Focus more on attention to detail in the future perhaps. But a very good first attempt and welcome to AWS!

1 game, a 15 minute Parma CTF. 3 Gold Boxes, I took 2 of them (1 was a double gold, so I couldn't catch both). I was using Hammer/Firebird + Hornet XT. Gold 1: Gold 2: Battle end:

-702 :)