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    Tanki World Records

    This record used to be there (I'm not sure if it still is) but I think I am the winner for least amount of players on the forum at a time. My record is 1 person, just myself. https://imgur.com/gallery/WLiH9zX
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    Molly's - Chapter 9 [Taniverse Fanfic]

    I fixed it, but I'm not sure why it just turned into a massive text wall. I suppose you slipping and me not catching any minor errors is a sign of me slipping up.
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    Molly's - Chapter 9 [Taniverse Fanfic]

    Approved! Another very well written piece! There was a formatting error (or a glitch) which caused all of your text to be lumped together. I might have messed up the structure compared to what you may have in mind, so my apologizes. Grammar-wise, I didn't notice anything.
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    Give 3 reasons why tanki is still a good game

    You'd like just three?
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    Math

    Now I'm completely lost.
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    [Issue 79] Give a Speech

    The first section of your speech was alright (not as good as the latter part of your speech however). It basically embodied that your team has been fighting for a while and struggles to go on any further part of things particularly wells and effectively set up the context to the following part of your speech, as opposed to other speeches. Your descriptions also weren't limited to the somewhat over dramatized "we have to win or thousands of crystals down the drain". As is with your stories, your vivid imagery really made your speech a great one, not to mention that you stated "don't lose hope; we gotta keep fighting" in a very unique way which didn't sound artificial (I get that this contest is artificial, however realism was one of the few qualities I sought out in a speech, other than that the criterion was imagery, uniqueness and goosebumps, which I get is kind of strange but that's how you, Dyslexia and Person_Random managed to come in the top 3). I'd analyze all the speeches, however that'd take a long while, so if there's anything specific you'd like to ask about or if the author of a speech would like to ask why they got the place they did (if they got a place), then I'm more than happy to help!
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    [Issue 79] Give a Speech

    I get that, but since many tankers are teenagers, gore is unlikely to motivate them particularly well. Argueably, some teenagers play CS:GO or other games with such weapons, but even still this number isn't big enough to mean that it would work great. No worries; I'm here to help as much as possible! Please ask any questions you might have and I will try to give you my best answer. I get that the contest is a bit unrealistic, but I wasn't trying for realism. My bad, I'll make sure that I clarify that in the future. They aren't the kind of speeches, you're right, which might be given eight hours after an intense battle, but that was the goal when creating the contest.
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    [Issue 79] Give a Speech

    Yours was akin to a cosine function. It started out good and well, but soon diminished in motivational quality, only to reach its minimum and eventually become alright again. In less metaphorical language, there were a few errors in your grammar. Not to mention, your speech also felt kind of like you were saying "use your supplies endlessly and we win ok?". Lastly, the gore really took away from your speech. Gore generally isn't particularly helpful in motivational speeches. Sorry if that felt a bit blunt. I didn't and don't mean to be rude.
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    Math

    I see.
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    Math

    Was that supposed to be a little song you made?
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    [Issue 79] Give a Speech

    Your speech, I'm afraid, started of a bit strangely as opposed to many speeches. I mean to say that the inclusion of the very first sentence you added seemed quite bizarre to me. Besides that, I felt that it in general it didn't have the vivid imagery which would make a winning speech in comparison to the rest of the entries. Your speech most definitely was not bad, however I felt that those things let it down.
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    [Issue 79] Give a Speech

    I took the entries down without looking at the author, jumbled them up and then chose. I hope that convinces you that I didn't chose based on who wrote it.
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    Demote noob Legends to Marshal

    I'm not a mult. This change wouldn't fix a thing nof would the developers even consider it. Nevertheless, seeing as you wish to feel that it would and that our conversation leads nowhere, I'll stop trying to convince you.
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    Demote noob Legends to Marshal

    This change wouldn't improve the game for all. Only a certain few like yourself.
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    Demote noob Legends to Marshal

    Well then isn't it easier to leave them?
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    Demote noob Legends to Marshal

    That comment seems quite sexist. You can want to win, but you cannot avoid defeat every single time. Losing matters. The pain you feel makes you much more motivated and stronger. There is no such thing as "being a man" because of the infinite definitions of being a man.
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    Demote noob Legends to Marshal

    More than that, defeat is a part of life. You cannot just say "I only want victory and those who don't support me should be punished." Why? Well, the pain of defeat helps you endure much more than the euphoria of victory.
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    Tanki Online Guide to the Shop

    A small note to readers, I messed up the article originally and therefore there are no pictures. Many apologies to the author.
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    Tanki Online Guide to the Shop

    Approved! Interesting to see someone write about the shop, it's uses and a guide to it. That being said, I found a few errors in your article Repetition: Not the good kind, I'm afraid. You used the words "buy" and "while" too many times. I would suggest using an editing software like Grammarly to fix this or perhaps just try to be more creative and find synonyms for words every time you want to mean one thing. Grammar: Not that significant, but you said things like "buy an premium account", which would be incorrect. The topic of your article: I personally was a bit underwhelmed by the article. I feel that guides should provide at least some level of implicit information which everybody might not know. Unfortunately, your article detailed information which could already be seen on the Tanki Wiki (although to clarify, there was no plagiarism involved. It was just that the information your articles brings to light can already be found easily. Other than that, it was written well!
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    Demote noob Legends to Marshal

    Punished, I suppose. But taking away the years possible, which someone has spent on their account just so that someone can feel superior is not a good idea. Maybe a 10 minute cool-down which prevents you from playing Matchmaking battles is a better idea.
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    Demote noob Legends to Marshal

    But at the end of the day, some players take Tamki very seriously, while others do not. The easiest way to solve this without taking away someone's work worth years just for up to 1000 crystals, is to find a bunch of people who take Tanki very seriously and play pro batles with them.
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    Demote noob Legends to Marshal

    But nobody should decide who "deserves" to be a Legend.
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    Molly’s - Chapter 8 [Tankiverse Fanfic]

    Approved! Another great addition to your articles. I didn't find any mistakes, but I am a bit tired so if I missed any, please do notify me.
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    [Issue 79] Fear the Nipah: Targeted

    Thanks! I intend to write a 4 part series.
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    [Issue 79] Give a Speech

    If yiu are interested in knowing why, I found that your speech was of good quality however it was a bit violent. I realize that speedhes in the army can be like that, however Tanki is largely played by people of around 12 to 18 years of age.
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