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[Issue 12] Part 1: The Attack


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Yup that shudder is no foreign feeling to me too... Ive worked out that the best tactic is to feed him Swag for dinner. Swag doesnt really agree with him, and you get rid of two competitors in one go.. :lol:

thanks for the laugh you two.

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Thanks for the feedback, I'll be continuing this series over the next few issues, hopefully.

 

 

 

Well, I felt like it would add to the story in this case. I don't usually like them either, but I wanted to shock the reader at the end. If you feel sad, then I've achieved my aim *insert evil laugh here* ^_^

I actually liked it and could deal with Leonid dying because of him turning out not to be the main character, tip for any story (with the exception of R.A.Salvatore's Saga of the First King series(really good story)) never kill the true main character.

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