Ink Splash:The Regrets of an Experienced Tanker

[marc.anthony 101]

Here's a thing I have to write,

To tell you,"Don't give up the fight!"

Keep at it through thick or thin,

Even if you never win.

I was once a tanker,shy,

No backtalk,just do or die.

Once you've got the highest rank,

And got your favourite M3 tank,

What will you do if you're like that,

Stop playing Tanki,just like that?

I want to be called a poem writer,

Not some damn Rebalance fighter.

See,when I was young like you,

I was foolish(stupid too).

I fought against the things I should've,

But never really understood.

Now that I'm an older tanker,

I wish I'd been a little franker.

Listened to the older tanks,

Those with all the High-Up ranks.

Then I would've been the wiser,

Spent more cry,not being a miser.

I'd heal more people,get less gold,

Listen and do what I'm told.

Stand up taller,Be more bold,

Take the flag and run for home.

Go and help the ones in need,

Forget about my selfish greed.

But now I can't,so why don't you,

Read these words and help a few?

|\/|@r( @|\|t#0|\|¥

Edited May 30, 2013 by marc.anthony

[TitaniumRyan 33]

Does'nt seem like a poem at all, maybe just a little but

[marc.anthony 101]

I will put more poems in,by request.

[GoldRock 6,165]

Nice, good to see there aren't any forced rhymes in there ^_^

[gocac 17]

really nice :)

[Meliora 1,652]

Love this :D.

[Dadisbetterthanyou 2]

Wow! That must've taken a lot of time! Great job and keep up the good work!

[marc.anthony 101]

Thanks.If you want more poems request here

[TitaniumRyan 33]

did'nt realize it was a peom until i read it half way

[tiger_of_malaysia 271]

how to read a poem in english (tone etc.)? im not familiar with it...

[r_flae90 28]

Nice poem

[lizerdgirl108 397]

i liked it :)

[Atakhan 1,229]

nice one marc.. :)

[marc.anthony 101]

Thanks.

I can write more if you want,just give me the topic of the poem you want.

[Atakhan 1,229]

Thanks.

I can write more if you want,just give me the topic of the poem you want.

team work :)

[Zero-nl 36]

The minute before, and the gold box falling. Might be interesting to write a whole stoey about that. (If you don't, I might do it)

[marc.anthony 101]

Ok.Give me 1 or 2 days

[icerugby 1,886]

Nice poem.... Kinda long but good in fact :D

[marc.anthony 101]

When you hear the Siren calling,

and you see the Gold Box falling,

Don't just waste Nitro to take it,

Cause you can't be sure you'l make it.

Sneak up on the from behind,

with your calm and peace of mind.

For if you're in a hurry,

You'll get shot in all the flurry,

And the battle very soon will end (For You).

Edited June 3, 2013 by marc.anthony

[marc.anthony 101]

Ode to Koolwalky:

There was once a tank called koolwalky,

He was young(and strong,and free)

The he changed names to AdvocatusDiaboli

(I can't tell you why,that's a long story)

And I don't have the means(or time,or strength)

To tell you all these things when I always meant,

To tell you all about his life story,

But I don't know 'bout that,So it'll be boring.

:D

Edited June 5, 2013 by marc.anthony

[marc.anthony 101]

How do you like the Gold Box thing?It's not exactly what you asked for,But.....?

[Playep 355]

Wow! That must've taken a lot of time! Great job and keep up the good work!

+1,and P.S. @ @marc.anthony can you make an acrostic poem?

sample:

Parking in a war zone

Aiming its fierce enemy

Navigating the sodiers

Zooming all over the city

Endangering the passer by

Roaring everywhere it can be.

Word: PANZER (Tank)

Well,this didn't cost me a lot of time,and its bad.

Can you write something like this?

Edited June 5, 2013 by Playep

[marc.anthony 101]

Ok.

[marc.anthony 101]

+1,and P.S. @ @marc.anthony can you make an acrostic poem?

sample:

Parking in a war zone

Aiming its fierce enemy

Navigating the sodiers

Zooming all over the city

Endangering the passer by

Roaring everywhere it can be.

Word: PANZER (Tank)

Well,this didn't cost me a lot of time,and its bad.

Can you write something like this?

Not Exactly what you wanted but:

 

I step out to the enemy camp,

There's no other sound but "Tramp,Tramp".

The sound of our feet on the ground,

With the cannon shells that pound.

We have been marching into battle,

For so long we feel like cattle.

All I think is why are we,

Fighting when we could be free?

We could stop and the make friends,

Whenever this damn battle ends.

If we stopped all this fighting,

Then ,instead, we would be writing,

Books and poems that are for,

Everyone to stop all wars.

But that won't happen in real life,

There's no peace,just stress and strife.

They say that we'll have victory,

But even then,will we be free?

Shouting,Spying,Killing,Crying,

Though we live,inside we're dying.

What about those ones we've killed?

Have they now got their own free will?

What about me?When I die,

Will I be branded as a spy?

Even after we are there,

The place of which we've dreamed and dared,

to dream,We'll still have nightmares,

Of those people who have dared,

to fight,The ones that we have killed,

The ones,on ground,who's blood's been spilled:

After the war by us has been won,

The war for us has just begun,

The war against the crimes commited,

The fatal shot our guns emitted,

To kill those human beings.

 

I hope this explains why I bumped this.

[Royalworld 1,269]

very good