What do you think of current descriptions of turrets and hulls?

[semyonkirov 29,038]

Dear players, currently we are thinking of changing descriptions of items in Garage. We'd like to know what you think about this. Today we are going to discuss Freeze. Which description do you like more?

 

1. A unique weapon for close combat. Slows your enemies down. When used properly allows you to destroy other tanks without getting any damage. Can stop tanks from burning. It's better to use Freeze with light and medium hulls. 

 

2. The idea of Freeze weapon system was born in the desolate Russian village. Using old broken refrigerator "Sever" and vacuum cleaner "Buran" local inventor made "freeze thrower". Professional engineer who had been fishing near the village noticed this invention and brought it to the Zhukov Research Institute. There clumsy freeze thrower became formidable Freeze gun. It showers enemy with the chemical composition based on freon. Victim takes damage and all its movements and processes become slower. Though a flow of fire can unfreeze a target.

[Raphael2 3,263]

2,

[GeneralPie 603]

I like #2.

[DanTheKiller1 2,889]

2,it`s more funny

[adil.pk 212]

2

[r_T.H.U.G0 79]

#2, although the first one is more helpful.

[robke866 2]

Agree. Second one is more detailed. But first one has more useful information in the game. Choose 2 nd tho. 

[GoldRock 6,165]

Description 2, easily. But there are a few grammatical errors:

 

2. The idea of the Freeze weapon system was born in a desolate Russian village. Using an old broken refrigerator "Sever" and vacuum cleaner "Buran", a local inventor made "freeze thrower". A professional engineer, who had been fishing near the village, noticed this invention and brought it to the Zhukov Research Institute. There, the clumsy freeze thrower became the formidable Freeze gun. It showers the enemy with a chemical composition based on freon. Victims take damage and all of their movements and processes become slower, though a flow of fire can unfreeze a target.

Edited July 4, 2013 by GoldRock

[AngeIs.And.Demons 1,988]

2

[MUQUNI 0]

2

[Meliora 1,652]

2, the first 1 is poorly phrased and abrupt.

[Joonges 9]

If i were you, i wouldn't say this: It's better to use Freeze with light and medium hulls. 

If people read this they all take 'standard' combo's !

[jokjinari 160]

Yeah, number 2 is way better. I think people like a bit of funniness. 

[FederalBureauFBI 2,881]

2

[robbie56ja 31]

2. There are enough guides where you can read the things of number 1.

[DARKNMK2 0]

2

[jjoovviittaa 1]

2

[Scientist 4,224]

2

[eraser911 5]

WE CAN SAY ALSO............    PARALYSIS  ?? OR silencing shot OR silencing until death

[platonas_respect 2]

1 is useful

[BFM 414]

sure 2 ! ;)

[asdfghjkl_1234567890 0]

1  :D  :P  ;)  :)

[RampagingVenom 554]

No 2 As No1 comes across as quite cold & clinical whilst 2 injects humour which is important & raises a smile or 2 :)

[TakUrciteee 54]

2... ;)

[VeskoKurtev135 2]

2