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                                                                            The Resignation

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How Will You React If Someone ill-Treats You ? Will You Suffer Silently? Or Will You React? Here's A Story That Narrates How A Poor Clerk Handled Such a Situation

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An office clerk a dump creature. glare at a labourer and he will glower back at you. Speak rudely to a coolie and he will throw the load off his head and walk away. Reprimand a beggar and he will stare angrily at you and turn away.Even a donkey,if mistreated,will kick back.But the poor clerk !! Scold him, abuse him and he will not so much as frown. He is the picture of contentment, tolerance and obedience - the epitome of the noblest of human qualities

 

Even ruins have their better days of glory. On the night of Diwali (An Indian Festival) they are lighted up. During monsoons, they have green moss on them. They reflect the changing moods of Nature. The poor clerk never changes. His pale face never lights up with smile. The rains do not bring relief to his dry as dust existence.

 

Lala Fatehchand was one such clerk. It is said that a man's name affects his fortunes.This was proved wrong in the case of Lala Fatehchand. His name meant Winner.But it would not be an exaggeration to call him Haarchand(Loser). A failure in office, a failure among friends, he had faced only setbacks and disappointments.

 

Fatehchand had no sons;only three daughters. He had no brothers, only two sisters-in-law. He had very little money but a heart of gold.He was kindness and tolerance personified. Cheated by many, he had not one true friend with whom he could with whom he could share confidences. He was in poor health. At the age of thirty-two, he had salt and pepper hair. His eyesight was poor, so was his digestion. His complex was pale, his cheeks sunken. His neck was bent and heart empty of courage. He would go to office at nine and return at six. He did not have the heart to go out in the evening. He had no knowledge of what was happening in the outside world. His entire life revolved around his office. He constantly worried with religion nor with the poor. He had no interest in arts, literature, stage, the cinema or in sports. He could not remember when he had last played cards.

       

                                                                                                                                           End Of Part-1

 

By Doncru

 

 

 

 

                                 

 

 

 

 

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Well it's better than some of the stories actual reporters do hhh. Your vocabulary and plot development were superb in my opinion, you should have applied to be a reporter. Make sure you do next time.

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Guys, stop making issues; you're not reporters.

Make a Creativity thread and post it there.

Stop acting like a mod wannabe. Don't you know impersonating a mod is against the rules? Annoying hugh? 

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Stop acting like a mod wannabe. Don't you know impersonating a mod is against the rules? Annoying hugh? 

Let's see; hi Wiki-goo or evil-kinevil.

The only reason why I said that was because many people have been making issues, ranging from parodies to genuine stuffz and it's annoying because they're calling it issues like they're real reporters. Here's something funny; you've just accused me of acting like a mini-mod yet just after you say I've broken a rule; mini-mods don't break the rules. You've tangled yourself in your own web. Anyways, I'm not incessantly posting that on every thread; I've done it just the one time. In what way does posting something technically correct once that make me a mod wannabe lol 

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Let's see; hi Wiki-goo or evil-kinevil.

The only reason why I said that was because many people have been making issues, ranging from parodies to genuine stuffz and it's annoying because they're calling it issues like they're real reporters. I'm not incessantly posting that on every thread; I've done it just the one time. In what way does posting something technically correct once that make me a mod wannabe lol

But this isn't the first time you've done this. When you lie, at least try and cover it up.

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But this isn't the first time you've done this. When you lie, at least try and cover it up.

Where else have I said "Guy, stop making issues; you're not reporters. Make a Creativity thread and post it there"

You're a weird child.

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Where else have I said "Guy, stop making issues; you're not reporters. Make a Creativity thread and post it there"

You're a weird child.

You know I wasn't referring to that alone, countless times you have told people how useless their threads are, it's about time somebody told you to shutup.

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Maybe he is convinced he is a reporter, and in my opinion, he should be.

Lol, this proves you've run out of things to say; dude, you know he knows that he's not a reporter. Sure, he's pretty capable of being one; it was a nice story.

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You know I wasn't referring to that alone, countless times you have told people how useless their threads are, it's about time somebody told you to shutup.

Be more specific next time, dude. And you can tell me to shut-up; do you think I'll listen though? And I've seen you say "noob thread" and stuffz like that which is essentially the same sort of thing; hypocrite alert.

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Be more specific next time, dude. And you can tell me to shut-up; do you think I'll listen though? And I've seen you say "noob thread" and stuffz like that which is essentially the same sort of thing; hypocrite alert.

Check your posts, and go to the doctor, I think your suffering short and long term memory loss.

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Guy's calm down.... Yes and there is a topic for Poems and Storys... Anyway's I got permission for my [Newspaper]English community's opinoned Newspaper.

So calm down.

Don't worry; the debate won't be continued here anymore. 

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