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[Issue 17] The Crisis - Finale


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I think you had the grasp of the "Right idea" to start the story, and a great ending. I'm a (sortta) writer, I write the first thing that pops up whithout thinking, and that is easy because I do not think about it, no brainpower needed. In this way you will not be eager to finish the story, like homework (speaking of wich...) therefore you have a better ending, thus, a better story all and all. I feel like you had a good grasp of that, especially in part 2. Now I've got to go do my math homework :(.

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Why didn't you use my pic which i did for you!???

It had some touches to finish up with and you weren't online... Worry not, I can still use your help some other time :)

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Val! Please don't stop writing this beautiful piece of literature! It's amazing! Write it for the people who love it, write it because you enjoy it! If you don't enjoy what you write, than why write in the first place? Please! I'm begging you to continue on writing! 

 

Meanwhile, the picture was icing on the cake, it was superb, and created that part of the article! Great job, Lhamster!

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