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nice work but u shud check over, lots of spelling/grmmar issues

I get that i comment here, and in PMs. What can I say, not so good at Spelling or grammar. But I'll try my best to fix them. :)

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ARTICLE #5 IS OUT / ABOUT ARTICLE #6!


Hey tankers! Article #5 is finally out and waiting to be read by you! As you may know, this latest article (Article #5), is a part 2 of article #5, Also known as 'The Rabbit Tanker - Part 2'! Also two new characters appeared in the story today: The well known leader of Meepz, @R3Z0GNATE, and a good old friend, @I-Iero! But don't think that because this is a part 2 it's the last part. Yes you guessed it, some time next week, 'The Rabbit Tanker - Part 3' will be launched! Will part 3 be the final part? Well to tell you the truth, I have absolutely no clue, so stay tuned!

 

If you would to be a character in 'The Rabbit Tanker - Part 3', feel free to PM me. But please keep in mind, that by PMing me you're letting me know that you would like to be in the story, but there is no guaranty that you'll be added to it though.

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You have exceptional talent at writing, it looks like you put a lot of work into those articles. I personally think you should apply for a spot in the news paper squad /reporter!


Love the articles! Keep up your special talent, I'm waiting for more! 

P.s: Grammar issues, Punctuation,Commas and others... 

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You have exceptional talent at writing, it looks like you put a lot of work into those articles. I personally think you should apply for a spot in the news paper squad /reporter!


Love the articles! Keep up your special talent, I'm waiting for more! 

P.s: Grammar issues, Punctuation,Commas and others... 

Thanks! ^_^ Nice to hear I'm good at write. I actually have applied for a Reporter a while ago, but I got rejected because they did not need new reporters at that period. But now, as some of you may have noticed, a new topic popped up in the General section of the forum, it's called 'English Newspaper staff needed'! So I applied, and I can't wait for November 3rd, when they announce who has been excepted and rejected. Really hope I don't get rejected...

And yes, I know. I need a little improvement on English... Trying my best to get stuff fixed! :)

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I can help you with your grammar issues, And how to use all the punctuation. (I'm Fluent English ^_^ ) 

No worries, found a way to fix it now :P All grammar, spelling, and punctuation mistakes should be fixed by tonight.

Thanks for offering though. Much appreciated.

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JUST A LITTLE INFO


A Little About the Characters or The Rabbit Tanker.

Hey tankers! While you're waiting for part 3, I thought I'd tell you a bit about the characters. First of all, if you guys haven't noticed, ajaytonymathew2 has changed his in game name to @I-Iero. Secondly, when part 3 comes you might notice that all the '@super703's will be changed to @45_tails's. Why, well that's a long story I rather not say, all I'll say is it's still the same tanker, just a different name.

 

A Drastic Change is Coming Our Way!

Tankers, a drastic change is coming! Is it a good or bad change? Well, that is all up to you and your comments! I have been thinking, and I realized I enjoy writing stories a bit more than articles. But I'm not here to satisfy myself, so that's why I would like you all to comment or PM me what you enjoy reading more, articles, or stories. If the majority of people like reading stories better, I'll ask a Mod/Admin to change the word name of this topic from 'Yisroel.Rabin's Articles' to 'Yisroel.Rabin's Stories.

 

News About Article #6.

Also a bit of news about when the next article/story will be out. 'The Rabbit Tanker - Part 3' will probably be out on Tuesday or Wednesday. If it unfortunately won't be out by then, it won't until Sunday since I won't be able to get to my computer from Thursday - Saturday night. Let's hope for the best and that it will be out by Tuesday or Wednesday!

 

That's all for today tankers. Don't forget to give this topic a like, that is if you actually do... Stay tuned!  :) 

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JUST A LITTLE INFO


A Little About the Characters or The Rabbit Tanker.

Hey tankers! While you're waiting for part 3, I thought I'd tell you a bit about the characters. First of all, if you guys haven't noticed, ajaytonymathew2 has changed his in game name to @I-Iero. Secondly, when part 3 comes you might notice that all the '@super703's will be changed to @45_tails's. Why, well that's a long story I rather not say, all I'll say is it's still the same tanker, just a different name.

 

A Drastic Change is Coming Our Way!

Tankers, a drastic change is coming! Is it a good or bad change? Well, that is all up to you and your comments! I have been thinking, and I realized I enjoy writing stories a bit more than articles. But I'm not here to satisfy myself, so that's why I would like you all to comment or PM me what you enjoy reading more, articles, or stories. If the majority of people like reading stories better, I'll ask a Mod/Admin to change the word name of this topic from 'Yisroel.Rabin's Articles' to 'Yisroel.Rabin's Stories.

 

News About Article #6.

Also a bit of news about when the next article/story will be out. 'The Rabbit Tanker - Part 3' will probably be out on Tuesday or Wednesday. If it unfortunately won't be out by then, it won't until Sunday since I won't be able to get to my computer from Thursday - Saturday night. Let's hope for the best and that it will be out by Tuesday or Wednesday!

 

That's all for today tankers. Don't forget to give this topic a like, that is if you actually do... Stay tuned!  :) 

cant wait.....

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ARTICLE #6 IS OUT!


Hello tankers! I'm back with part 3 of The Rabbit Tanker! Some news about the well known new character, who appeared in part 2, @I-Iero, there's been a switch with sides. In this latest part, part 3, Hero decides to make a little switch from Code to Rabbit. Want to understand more? Read the story on the main page! Hurry up, 'The Rabbit Tanker - Part 3' is waiting to be read by people like you! Enjoy!

'The Rabbit Tanker - Part 4' will probably be out some time next week.

Stay tuned Tankers!

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Words From the Author

Hello tankers, while you tankers are waiting for the next article/story to come out I thought I'd tell you a bit about myself, my articles and stories, why I write them, and more. I've been playing Tanki Online for about a year and one month, although I'm slow in ranking, I still have fun battling with friends... Well most of the time. Some people asked me how I write my articles and stories. Well the answer to that is a bit interesting... The way a write my articles and stories is, I PM (Personal Message) my alternative account (Yisroel.R) and write all my articles there. If I haven't finished the article or story in one whole shot, (which usually is the case,) there is no need to worry, I would just simply save the post in the PM and continue it later. Now for the question of lots of peoples lips, why do I write these articles/stories? That's a good question, some people think I just want to be a reporter and have a 'fancy shmancy' paint, but that isn't the main reason. After all, the reporter paint isn't to 'pretty'. The main answer is, because I remember how my older sister used to write stories for me and make me laugh, so I decided to pass on that laughter to you guys by writing stories that you'll enjoy, well... At least I hope you do. As most of you know, I have applied to be a reporter recently, and I would like to thank Hero (I-Iero) for telling me about the topic 'English Newspaper Staff Needed'. I would also like to thank all of those who gave this topic a big up-vote, and those who supported me throughout my Tanki life! Thanks for reading!

@Yisroel.Rabin


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