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Review of Jupiter :@iron-man_0007

Hey guys

 

Today I will take the review for jupiter

Lets start then

 

Jupiter is the 5th planet of the solar system and is the largest planet.It is a gas-giant mass 1000 of the sun but is 2 and a half times of the mass of all other planets in the Solar system.

It's our solar system's vacuum cleaner. Its gravitational pull cleans the solar system from asteroids.
Without a gas giant, there's almost no chance for a solar system to have life. Too many asteroids will hit the planet and destroy the life every time it "appears". We have many has giants - Jupiter, Saturn, Neptune, Uranus (the last two are very far, but still important). So we're the lucky ones   :P
Scientists at NASA think there may be life on Jupiter's moon Europa. It has ice cracks on the surface, meaning there's an ocean underneath it. And the ocean probably is made from water. Io - another moon of Jupiter has oceans on the surface mostly from methane (CH₄).
And Titan - a moon of Saturn has volcanoes, meaning there is circulation of CO₂ (carbon dioxide).
 

It's not that cold. Its gravitation creates heat in its core. Also it has the biggest and fastest tornadoes in the solar system. The giant red spot, for instance, is more than three times the size of Earth. 
And with no masks? Man we can't even stand on Jupiter. It's a GAS giant, made mostly from gas (97-98%)   ;)

Jupiter has total 65 or maybe 2 are comfirmed moons so 67 moons

I do not know much about Jupiter moon names :-

1. Io 
2. Europa 
3. Ganymede 
4. Callisto 
5. Amalthea 
6. Himalia 
7. Elara 
8. Pasiphae 
9. Sinope 
10. Lysithea 
11. Carme 
12. Ananke 
13. Leda 
14. Thebe 
15. Adrastea 
16. Metis 
17. Callirrhoe 
18. Themisto 
19. Megaclite 
20. Taygete 
21. Chaldene 
22. Harpalyke 
23. Kalyke 
24. Iocaste 
25. Erinome 
26. Isonoe 
27. Praxidike 
28. Autonoe 
29. Thyone 
30. Hermippe 
31. Aitne 
32. Eurydome 
33. Euanthe 
34. Euporie 
35. Orthosie 
36. Sponde 
37. Kale 
38. Pasithee 
39. Hegemone 
40. Mneme 
41. Aoede 
42. Thelxinoe 
43. Arche 
44. Kallichore 
45. Helike 
46. Carpo 
47. Eukelade 
48. Cyllene 
49. Kore 
50. Herse

 

Jupiter 

 

   ''Jupiter is not suitable for us with no masks''

 

If you like my review  :)

For helping me  :)  ;)  :D

 

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Review by Based on mercury

Rating 100%

Composision:

 

• 42% Molecular oxygen (O₂)
• 29.0% sodium
• 22.0% hydrogen
• 6.0% helium
• 0.5% potassium
• Trace amounts of argon,nitrogen, carbon dioxide, water vapor, xenon, krypton, and neon

 

Wikipedia

 

 

Mercury is the first planet of our solar system. It's the closest to the Sun, so it moves very fast - 47km/s. I put the link to Wikipedia so you can read about it and get any info you need, but I do not want to be just a copy-paster, I'll tell something interesting. Mercury is very heavy compared to its size and a research suggests that Mercury is reach in iron (Fe). But how can a small planet like that be rich in iron? Iron is so heavy that you can find it in planets' cores (because of its density). It's suggested that Mercury once was a lot bigger - ~2.5x the current size, the it started losing its atmosphere and a lot of mass due to Sun's gravity or from an impact with an object about 1/6 the size of Mercury (so now its iron core is left). 

 

Facts about Mercury:

• A year in Mercury is just 88 days long.
• It's the closest planet to the Sun, but due to the lack of atmosphere's it's not the hottest planet.
• The exact date of Mercury’s discovery is unknown as it pre-dates its first historical mention, one of the first mentions being by the Sumerians around in 3,000 BC.

Because Mercury goes round the Sun so quickly, the planet was called after the messenger of the Roman Gods.

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Artical name as Queen of the hills by iron-man_0007

 

 

 

Sent 08 Sep 2014 - 20:24

The regoing of Muree is Pakistan's most popular hill station and a holiday resort.It is a week end hop or day trip especially for the residents 1 of Rawalpindi  and Islamabad as It is situated  at a distance of 50  Km from Islamabad and people can easily go by riad.

The name murre is taken from''Marhi' meaning high place.It is situated on the southern slopes of the Western Himalayas foothhills

as 5 they climb u to the northeast towards Kashmir,It is at hight of 2,300M (7,546) above sea level.It is called Queen of the hills.

Work to do 

Desert of tanks(Story)

I am doing more work

Enjoy! :)

 

For what you can do:-

Make a story of your tank and  Write at least 50 words or up(For practise to write :))

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Edited September 16, 2014 by iron-man_0007

[shadewarttt 3,350]

Not another one...

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Review of Planet  Earth B) 

 

 

Earth is our home.It is our mother planet,It is also known as World,Earth is the 3rd planet from Sun,the densest planet in the Solar system,Earth has untold number of species It is upper then billions of humans,We are divided into 200's of Independent states that interact through diplomacy,travel,trade.

According to the evidence from sources such as radiometric dating. Earth was formed around billion years ago.

• Has One moon
• Over 7.000 billions or up
• Age 4.54 billion years

I made this short because many of you know about Earth :)

Edited September 10, 2014 by iron-man_0007

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Edited September 16, 2014 by iron-man_0007

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For those whom are having curiosity about this, another topic, it is made so that 'Writing Team' would avoid from creating topics each and every time they plan on publishing a new article/review. Hence a specific topic for that was assigned to Writing Team. Thats about it. No more extra topics ;)

[williew 1,999]

1:- Any problem?

2:- Think before you post stupid comments

I don't want to be so rude but you need to think before you comment

Replying to yourself right? If not, this critism is given for a reason. Show some good work instead of a lot topics (IMO).

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Didn't i see this topic somewhere else before?  :huh:

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Review

Review of Jupiter :iron-man_0007

Hey guys

 

Today I will take the review for jupiter

Lets start then

 

Jupiter is the 5th planet of the solar system and is the largest planet.It is a gas-giant mass 1000 of the sun but is 2 and a half times of the mass of all other planets in the Solar system.

It's our solar system's vacuum cleaner. Its gravitational pull cleans the solar system from asteroids.
Without a gas giant, there's almost no chance for a solar system to have life. Too many asteroids will hit the planet and destroy the life every time it "appears". We have many has giants - Jupiter, Saturn, Neptune, Uranus (the last two are very far, but still important). So we're the lucky ones    :P
Scientists at NASA think there may be life on Jupiter's moon Europa. It has ice cracks on the surface, meaning there's an ocean underneath it. And the ocean probably is made from water. Io - another moon of Jupiter has oceans on the surface mostly from methane (CH₄).
And Titan - a moon of Saturn has volcanoes, meaning there is circulation of CO₂ (carbon dioxide).
 

It's not that cold. Its gravitation creates heat in its core. Also it has the biggest and fastest tornadoes in the solar system. The giant red spot, for instance, is more than three times the size of Earth. 
And with no masks? Man we can't even stand on Jupiter. It's a GAS giant, made mostly from gas (97-98%)    ;)

Jupiter has total 65 or maybe 2 are comfirmed moons so 67 moons

I do not know much about Jupiter moon names :-

1. Io 
2. Europa 
3. Ganymede 
4. Callisto 
5. Amalthea 
6. Himalia 
7. Elara 
8. Pasiphae 
9. Sinope 
10. Lysithea 
11. Carme 
12. Ananke 
13. Leda 
14. Thebe 
15. Adrastea 
16. Metis 
17. Callirrhoe 
18. Themisto 
19. Megaclite 
20. Taygete 
21. Chaldene 
22. Harpalyke 
23. Kalyke 
24. Iocaste 
25. Erinome 
26. Isonoe 
27. Praxidike 
28. Autonoe 
29. Thyone 
30. Hermippe 
31. Aitne 
32. Eurydome 
33. Euanthe 
34. Euporie 
35. Orthosie 
36. Sponde 
37. Kale 
38. Pasithee 
39. Hegemone 
40. Mneme 
41. Aoede 
42. Thelxinoe 
43. Arche 
44. Kallichore 
45. Helike 
46. Carpo 
47. Eukelade 
48. Cyllene 
49. Kore 
50. Herse

 

Jupiter 

 

   ''Jupiter is not suitable for us with no masks''

 

If you like my review   :)

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Vote up :)

Edited September 11, 2014 by iron-man_0007

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Queen of the Hills

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The region  of Murree is Pakistan's most popular hill station and a holiday resort.It is a week end hop or day trip especially for the residents 1 of Rawalpindi  and Islamabad as It is situated  at a distance of 50  Km from Islamabad and people can easily go by road.

The name Murree is taken from''Mar-hi' meaning high place.It is situated on the southern slopes of the Western Himalayas foothills

as 5 they climb u to the northeast towards Kashmir,It is at height of 2,300 M (7,546) above sea level.It is called Queen of the hills.

 

 

This was Information :)

Complete :)

Edited September 11, 2014 by iron-man_0007

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Iron you spelled "Articles" wrong on your pictures. 

[jdrjdr 7]

Good luck but wait

Is this the real page...?

Is it edited?

 

Oh lol I got it

Just for articals

[shadewarttt 3,350]

Where's your team? You seem to be the only one doing the writing part. 

Edited September 11, 2014 by shadewarttt

[williew 1,999]

That's right, I totally agree. Also: Why are you so unfriendly to that other writing team? Downvoting their topic etc. are you serious about that? I don't like the articles written so far and then I didn't said anything about the maturity of the writer.

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Some people behave bad, yet they can fix it any time. It's pointless to object.

[iron-man_0007 73]

Please don't comment in this page :(

I need to finish my work in the first page 

[iron-man_0007 73]

Where's your team? You seem to be the only one doing the writing part. 

I have a team called writing team

[iron-man_0007 73]

Some people behave bad, yet they can fix it any time. It's pointless to object.

Yes you are right But you are also rude 

[iron-man_0007 73]

That's right, I totally agree. Also: Why are you so unfriendly to that other writing team? Downvoting their topic etc. are you serious about that? I don't like the articles written so far and then I didn't said anything about the maturity of the writer.

As you can see their

I hate when they post comments like failing and trying to Insult them in front of every one So I do not want  them to do that and I have enough with them judging others,Others know what are they doing

So please And yes down voting doesn't means so objection after all also he down voted my page So I didn't mind after all cuz that wasn't so stupid

He did what he wanted so It is great(No mind at all)

[Superlative 500]

As you can see their

I hate when they post comments like failing and trying to Insult them in front of every one So I do not want  them to do that and I have enough with them judging others,Others know what are they doing

So please And yes down voting doesn't means so objection after all also he down voted my page So I didn't mind after all cuz that wasn't so stupid

He did what he wanted so It is great(No mind at all)

Oh, yah about that. The mouse went a bit too right. I'll make it up to you with my alternate account if you want.

[iron-man_0007 73]

Oh, yah about that. The mouse went a bit too right. I'll make it up to you with my alternate account if you want.

Make up what :O?

[Superlative 500]

Yes you are right But you are also rude

How rude ? I haven't intentionally done anything.

[iron-man_0007 73]

Yay I won :) 

A I am promoted

Edited September 11, 2014 by iron-man_0007

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Diary 

Edited September 11, 2014 by iron-man_0007

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What ?

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