Contest [Issue 30] Describe This in 100 Words!

[aperaiderpistol 459]

With somebody on our team approaching with the flag

Another victory is in the bag

During the battle, everybody had suffered serious damage

But with our drugs and skill, we were able to manage

We had set a hard-to-beat score

Although, towards the end, the battle was a bit of a bore

Another awesome victory for team red

And with that, the opposing team (blue) fled

Before I won, I thought I saw a light

But it turned out to be a M3 Railgun, which gave me a fright

An awesome team, epic battle and amazing efforts.

[Kevred 1,586]

Great to know people are enjoying writing entries for this contest! After all, contests are for fun, right? 

[boppyeric 30]

My entry :wub:

 

The tarmac ground to a fine powder beneath my churning tracks as I sped recklessly across the bridge.

 

"Do not trust to hope, for it has forsaken us" My captain's melancholic voice echoed in my mind as my railgun glowed. I grit my teeth and aimed at the tip of the flag carrier's turret, bracing for the moment when lightning struck thunder.

 

That moment never came.

 

I watched in dismay as my projectile whizzed mere millimeters past its target. The end was near. I could feel it. I could see it. The capture was inevitable. Hope had forsaken me. I was but a lone, spent force, dashing straight into the heart of the heavily fortified enemy base. There was no way out.

 

Picasso would have been proud of his masterpiece. I on the other hand, the chosen one, the prodigi, had failed miserably. I closed my eyes in despair, my wasp grinding to a halt, a moment frozen in time.

Darth.... this was in the halloween poetry. You copied the part where it said a moment frozen in time, why?  :huh:

[r_Firingsniper0 1,215]

Predict, flip, return. Predict, flip, return.

I repeated in my mind these words whilst driving on the bridge. I saw the enemy wielding our flag, its wheels rotating fiercely. I planned to predict when the enemy shows his speedy tank, shoot him with my powerful Railgun with the tremendous impact force - in hopes to flip my foe. I came near the end of the bridge... I saw him coming up the ramp. My Railgun was loading to shoot, and it shot. However, it hit the walls before him, his mighty tank had too much speed. I didn't even have a moment of despair, the match ended right after.

 

The enemies started to make fun of my shocking mistake. All I could say was, "GG".

[DarthvaderjonGTR 615]

Darth.... this was in the halloween poetry. You copied the part where it said a moment frozen in time, why?  :huh:

Check this out "A Moment Frozen In Time"

Edited January 4, 2015 by DarthvaderjonGTR

[snipe3000 678]

The Comeback 

 

        The match was brutal, people dying everywhere. The score was 7-1 their favor and time left was 2 min we had to make a comeback. If we had any chance of winning we would have to drug and attack as hard as we could. By the time the match was almost over it was 8-8, We needed one more flag. We were about to capture when a railgun shot the flag carrier we were so close! there was 21 seconds left I had just equipped my M4 wasp. I went for the flag, full drugged, took the flag, and got out with plenty HP to spare. I got back to the flag and that same railgun shot me! I got flipped. time was running out 5… 4… 3… 2… 1… someone pushed me and we captured 0…  WE WON We made the comeback!

Edited January 18, 2015 by snipe3000

[jazz2O 0]

Yes! I'm about to cap this flag. This will definitely lengthen the gap between me and 2nd. Those two shafts far off near the sign weren't able to hit me. They had awful aim. Oh well, they don't matter now. I was being followed by that one guy but I'm pretty sure my freeze buddy has got that covered. Hey, 4 of my teammates are at the base. Yup looks like this flags in the bag. Oh shoot there's that wasp rail guy. Whew he just missed me. If I were here a second earlier, I would be a goner.

this description is supposed to represent what goes on inside the mines of people right before they catch a flag.

[Reiyer 1]

Another sunny days in the land of Tanki. Frolicking around the map, I saw many different tanks. Ricochets, Freezes, and Railguns! Ahh, the colour of the paints shone brightly in the bright sun. But, while these others were strolling around, I took my chance. Using my speed as Hornet, I quickly was able to dash through the scopes of the Shafts. I stealthily took their flag in daylight, and was almost at my base! I could see my flag. Fluttering in the wind, just waiting for the other. As I pushed my engine to its limits for the final stretch, I saw the one weapon I dreaded the most.

 

The Railgun

 

As I approached my flag, I swerved left and right, aiming for the ramp. This was the moment of truth. Will the Railgun hit?

 

I flew into the air. I saw the Railgun charge.

 

3.

 

2.

 

I close my eyes, it's to the RNG gods to decide the outcome.

 

1.

 

I brace for the impact. However, to my great surprise, it does not come. I yell out a shout of glee, and quickly am able to capture my flag. Later as the battle ends, I take a sip from my tea. Another battle well done.

Edited January 4, 2015 by Reiyer

[Aumritash 396]

My desperate loss...

 

We were in a ultimate clan war.The fight was between super duper muper vs lalalala lo.I was running for my life I could not find anyone around to give my flag.Then when i was slowly coming out from my hiding place with my thunder m3.Alas!I saw a freeze m3 who could take the flag for me. I said him by dropping the flag"Go, capture the flag its the leaders order!". But then he replied"your flag buddy. You are in full life. Go and capture". But suddenly he pushed me towards the flag and attacked the person behind who was ready to attack. So i ran to our flag and i found some ricochet m3. He didn't even thought that he was near a railgun m3 who was gonna kill him!!!The railgun m3 changed his mind and shot me.I said your m3 rail is no match for my m3viking.I was going to capture happily but i didnt know the time finished

Edited January 4, 2015 by Aumritash

[Penguin40 1,714]

Since the moment the flag disappeared, I knew we were in trouble. I knew the solution, too. I sped to the enemy through the bridge. Every moment I spent on the bridge, I felt the bridge would explode. Before I could even reach the middle of the bridge, I saw our flag, held by a Thunder, close to the ramp. I went close, and charged my Railgun. The enemy was on the platform too quickly. The charge took too much energy that I felt that I would explode. The shot had only one result. Failure.

 

My energy, my health suddenly decreased. Then I exploded. Moments before I respawned, I saw the Thunder shooting me. And then I witnessed failure. I could not destroy the picasso tank. And I lost.

 

(I'm sorry for writing a too long one. The word amount was around 120)

[Truthteller 4,204]

Good Luck to all contestants   ^_^

 

I tried doing one: 

 

 

 

 

It was a 60 flag game ( Which meant we needed 60 flag captures to win), I was a Thunder+hornet I had bought my hornet just 2 minutes ago and was surprised by the amount of speed it possessed, The timer was 0:8 less than 10 seconds. I saw a teammate with Thunder+viking defending the base,  All of a sudden I saw a glimpse of a railgun+wasp, My heart was pounding as if a Goldbox worth 10 000 crystals fell, My teammate who had Ricochet+viking with prodigy who had seen the railgun+wasp saw that he was about to shoot he tried to block his shot but he failed doing so, This is it I thought ill  never make it, all of a sudden the railgun shot

IT MISSED

Taking advantage of his reloading time I captured the flag and we won 60-79.

 

[Aumritash 396]

Its only 120

cut off.

My desperate loss...

 

We were in a ultimate clan war.The fight was between super duper muper vs lalalala lo.I was running for my life I could not find anyone around to give my flag.Then when i was slowly coming out from my hiding place with my thunder m3.Alas!I saw a freeze m3 who could take the flag for me. I said him by dropping the flag"Go, capture the flag its the leaders order!". But then he replied"your flag buddy. You are in full life. Go and capture". But suddenly he pushed me towards the flag and attacked the person behind who was ready to attack. So i ran to our flag and i found some ricochet m3. He didn't even thought that he was near a railgun m3 who was gonna kill him!!!The railgun m3 changed his mind and shot me.I said your m3 rail is no match for my m3viking.I was going to capture happily but i didnt know the time finished

[Kevred 1,586]

 

Good Luck to all contestants   ^_^

 

I tried doing one: 

 

 

 

 

It was a 60 flag game ( Which meant we needed 60 flag captures to win), I was a Thunder+hornet I had bought my hornet just 2 minutes ago and was surprised by the amount of speed it possessed, The timer was 0:8 less than 10 seconds. I saw a teammate with Thunder+viking defending the base,  All of a sudden I saw a glimpse of a railgun+wasp, My heart was pounding as if a Goldbox worth 10 000 crystals fell, My teammate who had Ricochet+viking with prodigy who had seen the railgun+wasp saw that he was about to shoot he tried to block his shot but he failed doing so, This is it I thought ill  never make it, all of a sudden the railgun shot

IT MISSED

Taking advantage of his reloading time I captured the flag and we won 60-79.

 

 

 

Are you using this one or the previous entry?

 

 

Guys, friendly advice, color doesn't make it better.

[IVIr.Blue 865]

LAST RESORT

 

 

 The enemy team needed one more flag to win.I SAW A ENEMY HORNET. IT RUSHED TOWARDS MY BASE it drugged so  POSSESSED VERY HIGH velocity and it vanished in a wink of my eye. I was a persistent and accomplished ​member of my team. I departed from my base and i finally found that hornet with our flag.I demolished a wasp and rushed towards my objective.THE CLOCK COUNTED 4 SECONDS.

 

 

         The enemy captain  lost control over his hornet I took advantage of this contingency and TOOK A ESTIMATED AIM for the tank.

           I saw the tip of my Rail gun glow ,I failed my target and it was all over ,the hornet captured our flag. I saw the enemy tanks celebrate.I shut my eyes in despair and then all of a sudden a quote flashed in my head 

                          "only those who fail greatly can                                                                                       ever achieve greatly"  

 

 

   - NISHANTH36

 

 

​I THANK THIRD LIEUTENANT KEVRED( Forum Newspaper Moderators EN)FOR GIVING ME THE  OPPORTUNITY.

Edited January 22, 2015 by IVIr.Blue

[Shaloo7 1,216]

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Edited January 4, 2015 by Shaloo7

[Shaloo7 1,216]

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I had to rank up, get crystals before 3 days for sale. So I entered into a 500 flag Kungur battle with Viking, Isida to earn score fast. At first it seemed easy, we were defeating them by 245-200 and 458-456 later. We were almost victorious. I had the most score. My heart started beating faster than ever when I saw them ahead of us. They were very strong. I tried to help. I changed to Railgun Wasp Prodigi. Both teams were at 499-499. Their flag was in our hand and ours in theirs. Suddenly, their flag got returned. I rushed over to the bridge – flagger was approaching, I shot him… I lagged and all of a sudden, he captured our flag.

 

THE END

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Sad ending? Yes, I like it better ^_^ Edited January 4, 2015 by Shaloo7

[Truthteller 4,204]

Are you using this one or the previous entry?

 

 

Guys, friendly advice, color doesn't make it better.

What previous entry?

[Kevred 1,586]

 

 

 

It was a 60 flag game, I was a Thunder+hornet, the timer was 0:8 less than 10 seconds. I saw a teammate with Thunder+viking defending the base,  All of a sudden I saw a glimpse of a railgun+wasp, My heart was pounding as if a Goldbox worth 10 000 crystals fell, My teammate who had Ricochet+viking with prodigy who had seen the railgun+wasp saw that he was about to shoot he tried to block his shot but he failed doing so, This is it I thought ill  never make it, all of a sudden the railgun shot

IT MISSED

Taking advantage of his reloading time I captured the flag and we won 60-79.

 

 

This one, there are some differences

[canadarules 1,938]

can we edit the picture to help the reader understand the situation

[Kevred 1,586]

No, sorry

[Shaloo7 1,216]

Can we exceed 100 words? :)

[Kevred 1,586]

Yes, just not too much. I'd say 120 is okay.

[Shaloo7 1,216]

Yes, just not too much. I'd say 120 is okay.

Oh.

[Tanker1928374655 133]

 

 

Buzzer Beater (167 words Sorry that I wrote too much >.<)

 

The score is 9-9, there is only a minute left until the battle ends. As I rush towards the enemies flag, I get pummeled by enemy fire. I struggle to take the flag, and attempt to deliver the flag. The enemies, however are reluctant to give up. Other tanks join the persuit, and begin firing their turrets out of desperation. I push my tank to its limit, stomping on the gas pedal as hard as I could... Suddenly, I felt a sudden jolt of energy. My tank flips and explodes; the battle was over for me. My teammates rush to retain the flag before it gets returned. The timer reads "0:10" now. My teammate's tank is almost helpless, smoke is fuming from his tank. A enemy railgun fires his turret... we all close our eyes. As the enemy's shell merely misses, the timer reads "0:01." The teammate rushes towards the flag... and all of a sudden the score board reads "10-9." Our team had done the impossible.

Edited January 5, 2015 by Tanker1928374655

[kayake 82]

Ok so can we use only 80 words is that enough

Edited January 4, 2015 by kayake