Contest [Issue 30] Describe This in 100 Words!

[tankyman12 10]

The bright sun shone over the corrupted city, Kungur. The building towered over the tanks that went past it, providing cover for them. The cobblestone base of which the main building lay was owned by the team of red. The beautiful hilly background cast even more shadows, and with each shot fired, another bit of the landscape was destroyed. The agile hornet was jumping for the flag, the powerful railgun missing his shot, costing his team. The huge bridge covered tanks, Including the bulbous mammoth with no trouble, while the building were doing the same. Walls where blown to bits, structured had many holes in them, some collapsed... All was wrong in this city.

[Bob-1138 0]

Is there A maximum amount of words??

~100 words

[Bob-1138 0]

 

It was just another game of cat of mouse for me, until things got serious. The score got relatively close, they took the lead. Their people stormed out base, and took most of us out. We were awfully enraged, they took eight of our men. We couldn't let them get out of this one alive, the reds.. We gathered the best of us and explored the midst of the map, to or best extent we tried to pay them back, but they were just so.. THEY KILLED MY FRIENDS! Everything became so dank, I was blargh. I decided to make my move to their base, and I moved slowly, very slowly. I saw a red team rico leaving his base, that gave me encouragement to move in. I made the fastest run I could, running right through their ranks, I absconded from their base with excitement.. I got their flag and set to rest while I was pretty edible for the red team. 

 

I moved slowly through their powerful tanks, two of them near the Advertisement, they did not notice me. I went on the bridge and jumped off it after alerting myself of the railgun/wasp there. I took a detour avoiding hornet/freeze shooting at the walls, I think he was possessed. Everything became concentrated and there was danger all around, with my hardwork I avoided a bit of it. I was now thinking of how I would capture the flag. Our base was heavily guarded with ricochets. Arrgh, ricochets those cheeto(s)-chets.

 

Everything was slowing down, I had to think of a plan. With that ricochet moving closer to me, I had to do something fast, the blazing will of fire inside of me raged harder than ever! IT WAS NOW OR NEVER! I decided to just do it, I sped like never in my life and made a beautiful jump, the wasp noticed me and took aim.. It was almost all over until.. HE MISSED.. I was an inch away from victory, from happiness. I did it, I CAPTURED THE FLAG. 

 

That day was victory, the kind I will never forget.

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I am sorry if this is too long? 360 words.. too much? Please reply staff.

 

From Kevred in previous posts: "...Don't worry, longer is better than shorter. Just make sure it isn't a 200 page story, and you're good." "I'd say 120 is okay."

[asdfthe2nd 0]

The day I lost everything!!!!!

 

I get back to my precious rail-gun and wasp, after using the bathroom only to see a thunder take our lazy teams flag. No one was going after him except me. WHY DID I EVER JOIN THIS LAZY CLAN. I shoot him once while he is still close to our base, and use a speed boost to catch up. I am about to shoot again. I stop press the space bar and I aim. WHAT DO YOU KNOW A FATAL ERROR HAS OCCURRED. I am sure I missed and my team lost the battle but I never knew because tanki never worked again. I tried everything but then america was bombed and my house blew up.

THE END

 

P.S

OF EVERYTHING 

[asdfthe2nd 0]

sorry its a little long

[proffesor_theo 48]

first try so don't complain :3

 

 

It was a nice summer day; I spawned in kungur, “what a nice day” I say to myself smiling. And then out of nowhere I heard a tremendous explosion “boom” a thunder /hornet with Picasso popped out of nowhere, he moved in a haste accidentally bumping in to me “good morning sir how about some  cover” I wasted no time and equipped my freeze/Viking combo and said “no problem my friend, I wish you good luck in your travel ahead” and so I helped him destroying the enemy chasing him and became a hero which nobody knew off. :(

 

 

hope you like it for my first try

[ForeverSkilled 1]

The flag grew heavy on the adolescent hornets top. Its health was dwindling, and it knew the end was near no matter what the outcome. Rounding the final corner, the majestic tank knew it had only a hill until its final destination. Making a perfect drift, the hornet gracefully rounded the turn and stared at the intimidating and monstrous hill. After a few consecutive leaps, the hornet made it onto the final plateau. No more ominous a sight exists in Tanki online than the charging up of the M3 railgun, pointed right at your tank. Time seemed to stop until the little hornet realized the rail had whirred right above his head! A miss! Alas, the little hornet weak and tired captured the flag for his team.

[GUARDIAN-4.NG3L 9]

 

I am old now, but at that time i was a young tanker. I am the Wasp/ Railgun with Prodigi, I remember like it was yesterday. I just needed one shot. My whole concentration went on that critical shot, if i miss,  five hours of playing would be totally useless. My Team counted on me and some of my friends shouted at me on Skype. Then i pushed shift..... and?- Oh man, everything for nothing. The Hornet Thunder was faster.

The moment before capturing was worst, because i still was hopeful, that some of my friends could get him. 

Oh god!

 

100 WORDS

Edited January 9, 2015 by GUARDIAN-4.NG3L

[GUARDIAN-4.NG3L 9]

When the winners will be published?

[Kevred 1,586]

When the winners will be published?

Next issue

[Kevred 1,586]

Is there A maximum amount of words??

Anything over 200 will be disqualified

[Kevred 1,586]

 

It was just another game of cat of mouse for me, until things got serious. The score got relatively close, they took the lead. Their people stormed out base, and took most of us out. We were awfully enraged, they took eight of our men. We couldn't let them get out of this one alive, the reds.. We gathered the best of us and explored the midst of the map, to or best extent we tried to pay them back, but they were just so.. THEY KILLED MY FRIENDS! Everything became so dank, I was blargh. I decided to make my move to their base, and I moved slowly, very slowly. I saw a red team rico leaving his base, that gave me encouragement to move in. I made the fastest run I could, running right through their ranks, I absconded from their base with excitement.. I got their flag and set to rest while I was pretty edible for the red team. 

 

I moved slowly through their powerful tanks, two of them near the Advertisement, they did not notice me. I went on the bridge and jumped off it after alerting myself of the railgun/wasp there. I took a detour avoiding hornet/freeze shooting at the walls, I think he was possessed. Everything became concentrated and there was danger all around, with my hardwork I avoided a bit of it. I was now thinking of how I would capture the flag. Our base was heavily guarded with ricochets. Arrgh, ricochets those cheeto(s)-chets.

 

Everything was slowing down, I had to think of a plan. With that ricochet moving closer to me, I had to do something fast, the blazing will of fire inside of me raged harder than ever! IT WAS NOW OR NEVER! I decided to just do it, I sped like never in my life and made a beautiful jump, the wasp noticed me and took aim.. It was almost all over until.. HE MISSED.. I was an inch away from victory, from happiness. I did it, I CAPTURED THE FLAG. 

 

That day was victory, the kind I will never forget.

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I am sorry if this is too long? 360 words.. too much? Please reply staff.

 

Waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaay (that's a way with lot of a's) too long

[ckim_the_PRO 1]

It was the perfect getaway - or so I thought

 

There was an era of peace in which neither side dared to venture into unfamiliar territory. But it was only temporary.

 

I had rushed the enemy base when I thought no one was watching, I had timed it perfectly so as to inform the enemy that I had stolen their treasure right when I wanted to. But alas; I had not checked the time left in the battle.

 

Thankfully, there were no hostile confrontations on the long journey across the wide plain. I flew up the final ramp in victory - until it was cut off by a Railgun shot. I thought all hope was lost, until I found that I was unscathed. False alarm. 

 

Then the real game-stopper arose.

 

0:00.

[beaku 2,656]

The battle was intense. My hornet thunder combination with Picasso seemed to be working just fine. As the battle came down to last few minutes I decided to go for the enemy flag. I activated my double armour. At the same time a nitro dropped and I wasted no time in picking it up . I took their flag and ran as fast as my wheels would carry me. No one seemed to be following me which was rather too good to be true. However like all good tankers I remained alert. Just as I entered my territory I sensed someone pursuing me.... however my fellow teammate with a freeze slowed him down. As I was about to reach my flag my heart gave a skip as I saw a gleam of light which I very well knew to be a precursor of the most dangerous weapon. By stroke of luck the wasp missed me by inches and I captured the enemy flag.

Edited January 18, 2015 by beaku

[ghano_Dz 7]

 The most bad day in my life

   It was a bieutiful sunny day i was with a railgun a wasp.In the battle we had a tie (49-49)flags.I was searching for a plan to take the enemy's flag then...i didn't find any idea i tried to attack and take enemy's flag but it was hard.Accedently i heard a sound i saw the phrase in the top of the screen (-an enemy- has taken our flag) then i said -oh noo- but i didn't give up i puted the nitro and went to the enemy's flag base with my max speed is saw the devil enemy with our flag thunder and hornet m3 he was coming so fast i shooted him with my last bullet but (he has captured our flag) -_-

[adpadp 4]

I meet Godmode_ON

 

I joined that battle at the start it was intense. The flag limit was 17 and it was 16:15 at amount of flags captured we were leading. The enemy was carrying the last flag I had railgun and hornet.In the last second they took our flag.I attacked on the left side of the picture that thunder and freeze went for me. Me and my teammate with railgun started shooting at the same time he missed but I hit the one with the flag  and after a few seconds the battle was over and I save the day. 

[trollface.jpg 538]

Found a good battle on a Sunday morning in which I can play for hours and get the good amount of fund. Finally the moment of winning comes and suddenly the score ties and the enemies have the flag, me being the mid have to stop that dangerous Thunder/Hornet from capturing our flag and waste our free time on a Sunday morning just to lose a match with high funds. As I won't be able to kill that Thunder/Hornet, I had to risk my self trying to flip him upside down with the help of that awesome new update and get my team to a victory and show my clan that I'm no more a n00b, but I missed!! Only if my teammate had told that he was already -1 before I could've killed him in 1 hit, I didn't have to take that risk, I could've easily killed him and got my team to a victory. My teammates and my clan mates lost all  hopes on me and now I'm alone with no friends to play with.

 

Roughly saying that its somewhere around 150-160, sorry m8 for a little extra words and I know I spoiled english k

 

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Regards,

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Edited January 8, 2015 by trollface.jpg

[X_Champ 145]

The Hornet/Freeze (not beside the barrier the guy who is shooting with his freeze in the middle of those houses)

 

As me and my teammate rolled out to get the flag i saw a bunch of mammoths defending the flag i said to my teammate to take cover while i go freeze them as i went closer to the base they spotted me and here comes the bullets, flames, nano bots and projectiles i damaged the team but my teammate was left alone he went to their base and with his majestic thunder one shotted the defenders he grab's the flag and he ran, ran that no tank could ever have as i respawned i looked back the vikings, wasps and mammoth's i was able to block them off but the clever wasp made it to the base and as he shots the moment of truth....he misses and the sound of victory could be heard.

 

(135 words not to bad :D)

 

yes i did make it shorter :P

Edited January 9, 2015 by X_Champ

[attack123456 1]

This picture.....

Has thunder with Viking, ricochet and Viking, blue flag, red flag, rail gun, golden laser, houses, streets, the sky, clouds, mountains, bushes, sniper in bushes, freeze, hornet, doors and windows on the houses, emerald paint, the color green, the color gray, the color blue, the color white, the color brown, the color peach, tile, cracks on floor, a water tower, a broken water tower (top left corner), trees, dirt, grass, a sewer drain, a concrete bridge, concrete walls (also top left corner) ten tanks (according to the view) and of course.... THE MOST AWESOME BATTLE GOING ON HERE

 

Hope this was great!! And hope you all liked it!!!

[attack123456 1]

The Hornet/Freeze (not beside the barrier the guy who is shooting with his freeze in the middle of those houses)

 

As me and my teammate rolled out to get the flag i saw a bunch of mammoth's defending the flag i said to my partner to hit them while i go freeze them as i went to the flag they spotted me and here comes the bullets, flames, nano bots, and projectiles. i damaged the team a lot as i died my teammate made a run for it one shot with his majestic thunder and boom defender's die and my teammate gets the flag and he ran, ran until no tank could ever have, as i re-spawned i saw my teammate running and as i looked back the viking's wasp's and mammoth's i was able to block them off but the clever wasp made it to our base from the other side and as he shoot's...the moment of truth he misses and then the sound of victory could be heard.

 

(150 words not to bad :D)

nice but that's alittle over 100 UR supposed to be around it like maybe 110 wouldn't matter

[X_Champ 145]

nice but that's alittle over 100 UR supposed to be around it like maybe 110 wouldn't matter

nope cuz look vv so yea 150 is fine :) hmm i might ask him just to be on the safe side

 

Anything over 200 will be disqualified

Edited January 8, 2015 by X_Champ

[classyplebs 1,786]

When do we have to be finished by?

[I.Devastation 2,053]

This picture is amazingly indescribable, so much so that I give up.

 

 

ok before ppl insult this amazing entry ok bye i go be bored somewhere else

 

[cornierauto 9]

A MOMENT In time

I will get there and i will not be failed;I thought in my mind as i  was tapping on the keyboard. A moment after ,i had the flag of the enemy,with starving sights of the enemy i managed to escape and now i was on my way to get back. i knew time was running short just 2 minutes  to got and it was 1-1.the moments were sharp as i was moving to my base like a jet escaping the railgun shoots and with my team mates who were fighting like warriors and defending me .My strength was on the worst where i felt to be the victim of all.Winning the tournament would offer us with a handy 14000 dollars which  was worth it .In the climax m Now i find my self  near to the base with my heart come to normal and i felling a very good felling in my head 

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150 words 

[Kevred 1,586]

This picture is amazingly indescribable, so much so that I give up.

 

 

ok before ppl insult this amazing entry ok bye i go be bored somewhere else

 

I don't see how the picture is indescribable, the contrary actually. You can get inspired just by going through the previous posts. If you still can't write perhaps you misunderstood what I told you to do? You don't have to exactly DESCRIBE the picture (e.g. there is a viking and a freeze), more like write a short story out of it (which is why I put the "some" that you've underlined). However, I think that is not the case, as it's pretty easy to "describe" this picture.

 

P.S. there are easier ways to highlight or underline phrases ;)