Contest [Issue 30] Describe This in 100 Words!

[X_Champ 145]

@Kevred is 150 word ok?

[GUARDIAN-4.NG3L 9]

@Kevred is 150 word ok?

Task was around 100, I think you wont be disqualified or however its spelled, but i think texts that are more around 100 will be prefered

Edited January 9, 2015 by GUARDIAN-4.NG3L

[flae88 948]

I don't see how the picture is indescribable, the contrary actually. You can get inspired just by going through the previous posts. If you still can't write perhaps you misunderstood what I told you to do? You don't have to exactly DESCRIBE the picture (e.g. there is a viking and a freeze), more like write a short story out of it (which is why I put the "some" that you've underlined). However, I think that is not the case, as it's pretty easy to "describe" this picture.

 

P.S. there are easier ways to highlight or underline phrases ;)

Na that post was just cuz pic was boring imo xD

[X_Champ 145]

Task was around 100, I think you wont be disqualified or however its spelled, but i think texts that are more around 100 will be prefered

hmm well i pm'ed him now so hopefully he says yes

[Ambitious 2,084]

The picture describes the mood of a tanker when he/she fails to stop the enemy, when his/her team does not cooperate. The battle had no life at all. It was a silent one. We feel that the Railgun-Wasp guy was trying his best to stop the enemy. In the background of the picture we see two tanks, one on the other, most probably they were trying to parkour. This explains a very low level of teamwork. We can see the Railgun-Wasp is very frustrated. It still had some hope, it thought that he will be able to stop the Thunder guy, he tried, he shot but failed. The happy thunder had no difficulty at all capturing the flag. So, from this picture, we get to know the frustration of a tanker when his/her team does not cooperate. We often face situations like this one, in our day to day life. We smash our keyboard, we punch the screen but we do enjoy when the other team faces situations like this one.

[Warriors-Union 5]

The picture describes the mood of a tanker when he/she fails to stop the enemy, when his/her team does not cooperate. The battle had no life at all. It was a silent one. We feel that the Railgun-Wasp guy was trying his best to stop the enemy. In the background of the picture we see two tanks, one on the other, most probably they were trying to parkour. This explains a very low level of teamwork. We can see the Railgun-Wasp is very frustrated. It still had some hope, it thought that he will be able to stop the Thunder guy, he tried, he shot but failed. The happy thunder had no difficulty at all capturing the flag. So, from this picture, we get to know the frustration of a tanker when his/her team does not cooperate. We often face situations like this one, in our day to day life. We smash our keyboard, we punch the screen but we do enjoy when the other team faces situations like this one.

not a descptive essay just write what was going around in the picture

[muniba_XXX 1]

                                                                 Tanki Warriors in Kungar

 

 

Warm battle is going on between tankers in kunger. The thunder player with hornet is going to capture the flag but the railgun player of his opposing  team is trying to kill him and recover its flag.He made a shot but he missed.The player with rechochet  and viking are protecting there flag and the person with enemy flag.This tells a good coordination between players of red team as some players are defending and some are attacking.Thats a tough battle.

Edited January 9, 2015 by muniba_XXX

[aakash.100 0]

The notification

 

The notification had appeared. Perhaps they all were supplied with tons of drugs. I don't feel that it made a much of a difference for me as, maybe this is what I longed for since the notification.

 

The sun was hidden behind the clouds but day was still bright. Silent streets and the awful but familiar smell of gunpowder, rusting metals and the soft sings of the grass just made it look like a wonderful day in Kungur. Just then a notification appeared it read ‘round might end early.’ The other team stared to drug to lessen the gap between their red team and our blue team. One such tanker took our flag. I thought of chasing him and before I knew it I was in a pursuit with him. Knowing the advantage of been faster than hornet and having Smokey, a long range weapon I could aim him from far but then I was blocked by a freeze. There was a railgun trying to aim the thunder with our flag but he shifted him aim to somewhere else at the last moment. I guessed he wanted the battle to proceed as normal and I was happy he didn’t aim at the flag. The hornet and thunder was finally able to capture are flag and there was another notification ‘gap closing in, battle may proceed as before.’ Everything remained normal until there was again another notification ‘gold box will be dropped soon.’  ……….    

[X_Champ 145]

The notification

 

The notification had appeared. Perhaps they all were supplied with tons of drugs. I don't feel that it made a much of a difference for me as, maybe this is what I longed for since the notification.

 

The sun was hidden behind the clouds but day was still bright. Silent streets and the awful but familiar smell of gunpowder, rusting metals and the soft sings of the grass just made it look like a wonderful day in Kungur. Just then a notification appeared it read ‘round might end early.’ The other team stared to drug to lessen the gap between their red team and our blue team. One such tanker took our flag. I thought of chasing him and before I knew it I was in a pursuit with him. Knowing the advantage of been faster than hornet and having Smokey, a long range weapon I could aim him from far but then I was blocked by a freeze. There was a railgun trying to aim the thunder with our flag but he shifted him aim to somewhere else at the last moment. I guessed he wanted the battle to proceed as normal and I was happy he didn’t aim at the flag. The hornet and thunder was finally able to capture are flag and there was another notification ‘gap closing in, battle may proceed as before.’ Everything remained normal until there was again another notification ‘gold box will be dropped soon.’  ……….    

plzz make this shorter it should be around 100-130 words not 243 cuz you will get disqualified 

[ArcticCow 454]

@kevred pls tell me if my entry was short enof.

[Rob42_BENCHES 8]

As I fly through the air, as if floating, I brace myself for the impact of an approaching railgunner.

 

As I touch down, I feel the cold energy from its shot slam into my hull and shut off my systems and I begin to flip.

 

I wonder if I will capture the flag as I veer off to the left.

 

My vision becomes tunnelled as I focus on the flag and my health is drained.

 

Then the cold turns to an immense heat as my health falls to zero and I see an orange light engulfing me.

[trainman2002 0]

From the diary of trainman2002:

It was just an ordinary day of CTF in Kungur.  With my trusty hornet and thunder combination, I successfully acquired the opposing team's flag.  As I raced through the streets, I was nearly hit by a deadly freeze and hornet combo.  But luck was on my side.  I dodged him and drove around a house. I was just about to capture the flag when PIIIING! a deadly railgun shot narrowly missed my turret.  My teammate quickly eliminated the threat with his ricochet and viking, while I captured the flag.It was a successful day.

 

I included the heading as part of the 100.   

[keithchua 0]

let me put my answer in song:

 Let me tell you about... a tanki online battle

I got the flag and decided:run

I was running for my life.

I did not look back despite the shots hitting my ass...

I will capture the flag and rank up now

It was pure torture and I almost died

But against all the odds I survived

A yellow railgun beam barely hit

I dodged and escaped with 1 health now

come on speed up

let me capture that flag

let me capture the flag

 

I tune to "when can I see you again"

[KIngJack21 1,923]

Hello Everyone!Welcome to the beautiful map kungur  of tankionline.

As you can see it's capture the flag battle where every player using different combo as their choice .

Some players have Freez, Railgun & to defect them some players 

using thunder ,riochet weapons .This image is very live i feel like i am playing in that battle.

 

So now let's take a look at battle situation. Humm!! The red player with blue flag is just one 

step ahead from capture & the blue guy trying to retrieve the flag.The match is 

more interesting with one mysterious result.

Edited January 10, 2015 by KIngJack21

[Pegasus318 5]

There   we were in the scorching sunlight trying to take victory in our hands.we didnt know how today will be will we taste the sour defeat or the yummy victory and we were well on our way when he cam godmode equipping the deadly thunder and hornet we were left in despair as he rushed in and took what was rightfully ours. with the flag with him we chased him hoping to flip him atleast as there was no time left we chareged our tanks at him with the ballistic nitroz and we kept firing at him one by one  only 10 seconds left  we had no choice we called in the last shot which was right in the way and suddenly from no where a mystical light came and shooted my laptop in to little ashes and we were never to know what happened on that day who won the war the  blue warriors or the red soldiers

[Smoke_Smokey3.0 2]

Oh,no they are keep stealing our flag,we cant give up like this lets steal their flag . And then we are making some strategy to steal their flag then we found a good strategy = We put a guard near our flag  its Thunder+Viking  and we put few guards near the entrance of base its near the bridge and 1 in the road and that strategy is working! so we can try to steal their flag and slightly increase our score but they seems going to make a strategy and attack back and they starts attacking but they left no guard on their flag so i steal their flag easily and then im hiding behind my teammates and they protecting me and we start to make a plan for taking back our flag so i still in the base with few guards and our teammates is attacking them and they got the flag. Unfortunately they was attacking my base and my hideout is so far from the flag point and the enemy is so close to our flag point then i use my double speed supplies and speeding up to our flag point then i said 'This was it...the final flag!' and then a not suspected Railgun is try to shoot me but luckily the shot miss me! and i capture the last flag and the battle end. And our team got victorious and we got many crystals.And...Hip..Hip..Hurray!!! We Won!!! :D  :lol:  :fire_r:  :tank:  :fire_l:  :lol:  :D

[abeersaqib 17]

There is neither happiness nor misery in the battle; there is only the comparison of one enemy with another, nothing more. He who has felt the deepest grief is best able to experience supreme happiness. We must have felt what it is to die, Morrel, that we may appreciate the enjoyments of life.by saying this the red ones with their sad faces went for looking hope . 
Suddenly at the last moment the captain came with victory in his hands and said Live, then, and be happy, beloved children of my heart, and never forget, that until the day God will deign to reveal the future to man, all wisdom is contained in these two words, 'Struggle and Hope' . 

[Raredust 454]

Hey Kevred, do the entries that are closer to 100 words than others get extra credit?

[FaaiqBilal1 795]

There is neither happiness nor misery in the battle; there is only the comparison of one enemy with another, nothing more. He who has felt the deepest grief is best able to experience supreme happiness. We must have felt what it is to die, Morrel, that we may appreciate the enjoyments of life.by saying this the red ones with their sad faces went for looking hope . 

Suddenly at the last moment the captain came with victory in his hands and said Live, then, and be happy, beloved children of my heart, and never forget, that until the day God will deign to reveal the future to man, all wisdom is contained in these two words, 'Struggle and Hope' . 

Sure you wrote that by yourself? Took me no time at all to prove otherwise.

https://kaceybolin.wordpress.com/2014/10/17/facing-death-finding-life/

 

Be wise, this isn't a copy-paste competition.

[abeersaqib 17]

Sure you wrote that by yourself? Took me no time at all to prove otherwise.

https://kaceybolin.wordpress.com/2014/10/17/facing-death-finding-life/

 

Be wise, this isn't a copy-paste competition.

i copy pasted the qoutes not the story if you have eyes you can read :)

also qoutes are taken from the GoodReads an official site for qoutes

Edited January 10, 2015 by abeersaqib

[snipe3000 678]

 

 

​I THANK WARRANT OFFICER 5 KEVRED

 

*third luitenant*

 

 

[snipe3000 678]

There is neither happiness nor misery in the battle; there is only the comparison of one enemy with another, nothing more. He who has felt the deepest grief is best able to experience supreme happiness. We must have felt what it is to die, Morrel, that we may appreciate the enjoyments of life.by saying this the red ones with their sad faces went for looking hope . 

Suddenly at the last moment the captain came with victory in his hands and said Live, then, and be happy, beloved children of my heart, and never forget, that until the day God will deign to reveal the future to man, all wisdom is contained in these two words, 'Struggle and Hope' . 

disqualify this entry copied 

 

 

 

https://kaceybolin.wordpress.com/2014/10/17/facing-death-finding-life/

 

 

 

nice find

 

 

 

i copy pasted the qoutes not the story if you have eyes you can read :)

also qoutes are taken from the GoodReads an official site for qoutes

and you didnt quote it you took it as your own

[abeersaqib 17]

Before rejecting me show where it is written in the rules that you cant write any qoutes ?

Show me if there are rules for it ?

Edited January 10, 2015 by abeersaqib

[raultanker2 0]

That picture it's took on the map Kungur, and it's a good one. I see seven tanks, that one with Thunder and Hornet it's going to capture the flag. One enemy thank is going to him. The other enemies are in defense. Just two of them are in attack. One friend is hiding in the bushes. A tanker with Railgun and Hornet is hiding too. This picture is hard to describe because it has lot of action and suspense. In this picture you feel in the middle of the action.

So per total it's a interesting picture.

[serialkillerx 3]

it was a day very fine where my tank gave a great shine ,

i was playing from argentine in my hand was a glass of wine,

then the roar of smoking engines and the great rattle of kungur's track,

my tiger moved foward blowing dust from his back

 

my weapon recoils and discharge his ricohet's load,

in the distance my tanks target are seen to explode

 

ricohet is now to prey the only tank we fear,

hunting thunder pumping canon from my tanks brutal flair,

 

suddenly he came seeking our flag to his town,

trying to cap our flag all the way down;

 

but vengeance is swift the thunder swirl away,

few tanks crawl back dripping blood all the way

 

but today it is over without no fortunate name

                                                                                                                                                                     

 ,but tommorow more players will play the same deadly addicting game :tank:

Edited January 10, 2015 by serialkillerx