Other [Issue 30] Christmas Poem #1

[Tommy60 406]

 

Snow white bushes cover many a thing

Even a few that can really sting.

I spawn and drive, keeping that in mind,

Trying to keep myself away from such a find.

I pick up a nitro and speed around a bend

And find myself inclined to defend.

A Shaft in a high-off corner seems a bit mad,

But I jump as he takes out my adjacent comrade!

I dive for cover,

Exposing yet another brother.

He too receives quite a blast,

And soon I find myself to be the last.

I stop and peer around a building corner,

As I hope this won’t spell my trip to the coroner.

To my surprise I pleasantly find,

My silent assassin is out of sight, though not out of mind.

I quickly scour the landscape around me,

And find something that truly surprises me.

The “MamontShaft,” is hilariously charging

(though I’d hardly call his presence barging).

As I search for a reason I soon discover,

A glittering box falling behind another structure cover.

Laughing I grab a nitro again,

And go around the same bend.

I come up behind the speeding colossus,

And begin to taunt him like a newbie at the office.

I speed up and slow down,

I can practically feel his sluggish frown.

The treasure now in sight,

Myself, I do not have to fight.

I whip ahead, grab it, and exit with glee,

Thinking to myself

“Merry Christmas to me!”

 

[boppyeric 30]

Nice, but I barely understand anything...as in I unserstand the words but not what your trying to get to...

[DarthvaderjonGTR 615]

Few can appreciate such works :) I am glad to be one of them :)

[ForsakenEnemy 2]

Great poem, always nice to have some poetry in the mix. It's a difficult work to perfect too, so well done!

[Kevred 1,586]

Tommy, you are a natural  :wub:

[Death705 227]

Nice poem!!!

[mdit108 121]

Quite good :)

[r_Quick.Silver0 103]

RUBBISH!!! :angry:

[Tommy60 406]

RUBBISH!!! :angry:

Could you please give your feedback on what lead you to think this?

[de_dust_GTi_9000 0]

Could you please give your feedback on what lead you to think this?

Coz you've got a blurry point, mate.

[Truthteller 4,204]

Few can appreciate such works :) I am glad to be one of them :)

[olaf-iceman 0]

i like it nice job 

[newrohan 1,040]

Nice! :D