Contest [Issue 31] Describe This in 100 Words!

[Kevred 1,586]

It's bluelight1209. And it's just 12 words. C'mon. Let me ask @Kevred.

Sorry bro, gotta be under 125 or it's the execution squad.

[Superlative 500]

Sorry bro, gotta be under 125 or it's the execution squad.

:( But it's just 137. 

[Remaine 4,687]

-Anything under 90 or over 125 words will be DISQUALIFIED

[Superlative 500]

 

-Anything under 90 or over 125 words will be DISQUALIFIED

 

I know.

[Superlative 500]

I shrinked it to 126. 

[Superlative 500]

Do you need to count "wasn't or was not" as to words?

Edited January 31, 2015 by Superlative

[Remaine 4,687]

I shrinked it to 126. 

 

-Anything under 90 or over 125 words will be DISQUALIFIED

Do you have a problem reading or something?

[Superlative 500]

Excluding that my entry is perfectly 125 words! WOW! :O 

[Superlative 500]

Do you have a problem reading or something?

@ You: 

 

 

 

Do you need to count "wasn't or was not" as to words?

[Superlative 500]

That Polygon CP rocked even though the opposite team were winning. It was in Summer mode, but there wasn't any other. I could still remember the pulsating nature once the Gold Box notification rung! The teams had stopped brawling, quite depressing as it had been thrilling moments ago. I see a flashy thing come from the top of the building and a treasure box in white wrapped at the edges with gold had landed on an golden "X" figure only here was a image of the thing falling from the skies!I felt a tinge of envy for the guy who had taken it. I should have been on second floor to get a clear shot but still I learned a valuable lesson.

Edited February 1, 2015 by Superlative

[Kevred 1,586]

That Polygon CP rocked even though the opposite team had the point. It was a Summer mode, but there wasn't any other then. I could still remember the pulsating nature once the Gold Box notification rung! The teams had stopped brawling, quite depressing as it had been thrilling moments ago. I see a flashy thing come from the top of the building and a treasure box in white wrapped at the edges with gold had landed on an golden "X" figure only here was a image of the thing falling from the skies!I felt a tinge of envy for the guy who had taken it. I should have been on second floor to get a clear shot but still I learned a valuable lesson. 

 

Blue, one entry per player. Just edit the previous one please.

[opidude 437]

What a boisterous battle it was,
 
seeing deadly fires and fatal beams,
 
Hearing gun shots and the cries of the fallen,
 
were like feasts for my eyes and music for my ears.
 
But then a booming alarm shot.
 
The battlers went barbaric with commotions,

While some already found the mark on the ground,
 
but the moment of glory was yet to come,
 
when a bright gold coffer cleaved down,
 
for one providential antagonist,
 
was bound to receive the precious wad,
 
but combatants knew that it was hopeless,
 
regarding the defunct aggressor's gracious tears,
 
Whilst others weep on the crisp floor.
 
                               the end -Opidude
 
word count: 100

Good luck everyone!!!! I hope i win this... I spent soo much time on this lol

Edited February 25, 2015 by opidude

[delnina2 1,570]

BlueLight . Please edit your posts . 

Edited January 31, 2015 by delnina2

[Truthteller 4,204]

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Edited February 9, 2015 by Truthteller

[LeIouch_Vi_Britannia 6,163]

It was a summery day, 16-tankers were fighting ruthlessly on a ProCP match to make the score theirs to win the hard match.

 

They had Been Fighting for about 3-hours out of 4-hours, and in all of the 180 minutes no gold had fallen and the gold hungry tankers were exhausted as gold was their only entertainment.

 

Suddenly someone said admin gold please!And the players all complained: what a Noob!Admins don’t drop golds!Suddenly the everlasting siren of Gold box came,All the tankers were in surprise because of what happened just a bit ago.

 

Any ways all rushed around the map to find the Drop,they all gathered around it,but only 1-single dictator was able to catch it as he was the tallest and fastest hull around…

 

FIN

 

( I wrote it in word and its exactly 125 words

http://i.imgur.com/q0rpFBV.jpg

126th is the FIN that isnt a part of the story really...)

Edited January 31, 2015 by LeIouch_Vi_Britannia

[greyat 2,972]

A brief introduction: PoV is that of the Thunder-Dictator-Rustle in the background.

 

It was sudden, interrupting

a normal day in the arena.

 

A loud siren erupts.

A ringing silence settles.

 

All knew the meaning of the sound;

it heralded the arrival of jolly ol’ St. Nicholas.

 

With presents for one good little tank.

And death for the naughty ones.

 

Serenely the gift floated down.

All strived for it save three.

 

Me, myself, and I.

Wandering the lonely paths.

Wondering where the gift would come.

 

I noticed, but it was too late.

Alerted by a high velocity shell.

That scorched a trail through the air

Puncturing my tank.

 

As though my tank

is the vessel of dreams

my hope evaporates

like a balloon leaking air

 

The gift was gone, with it

my hope

and the shell’s flaming trail.

 

[exactly 125 words without the introduction]

Edited February 3, 2015 by greyat

[ckim_the_PRO 1]

I was wandering around the battlefield, mourning the loss of my dear comrade Bob, aimlessly aiming at other tanks. I tried to save him. I tried. As I pondered, a loud blaring noise interrupted my thinking, messaging me a treasure to come. Depressed, I found the legendary mark of the box and waited there, remembering how I used to wait for hours for this fortune, jumping with glee, even if I didn't get it. Finally, the rare fortune started to descend from above, screaming to all the other players to come to me, but they could not take it from me. "This one's for you Bob!" I took the treasure, then I joined him in the realm of the dead tanks.

 

- ckim_the_PRO

[Papaya14 481]

Today was a lucky day.

You may think, "what are you saying?"

But you know, some say,

There's an admin that hears our praying!

 

And today, true to word,

in a rumble of Keepers and Pitbulls

(and a Mosquito... that turd),

pushes to shoves, tugs to bitter pulls,

 

We somehow amassed a fund

Of fifty thousand, no more, no less!

All together, our teams gunned

One another, 'till a message appeared; guess!

 

Yes! A gold box dropped!

I knew it was mine, I had it all.

When, outta nowhere, I’m STOPPED!

No! A Railgun stole it! The gall!

 

In my fury, I could only mutter two witty words:

"u noob"

[Quack4444 3]

The story of the Railgun/Dictator

It was a fine day in Tanki Online. I felt the wind in my treads as I entered the map "Polygon". We battled and battled with the single control point! We were battling when all of a sudden A Gold Box Will Be Dropped Soon! I got really excited! I saw the gold box sign highlighted on the ground and drove towards it, trying to not make anyone notice me. I destroyed a couple other tanks while on my way. Then the box started falling! Everyone quickly drove towards it! My gears turned with excitement! I took the gold but I got destroyed! At least I got it! I left the battle with excitement that day!

Edited February 1, 2015 by Quack4444

[EzanK 1,312]

It was a superior day in Polygon, however that would alter as one aphorism at the zenith would modify everyone’s intention. At the peak, it said “Gold box will be dropped soon”.

From offensive to harmony, the tankers who found the blemish waited patiently for the golden box to fall from the heavens. Others went from point A to look capricious consecutively to find the golden blemish on the land.

When the gold fell, the mammoth was at its mark, eager for not a soul to get on the summit of him. The mood transformed from patience to attack. Later to die, the dictator broke the mammoth’s spirit and got on top. Death got him but his goal was reached. The Golden box was retrieved.

Edited February 16, 2015 by EzanK

[boppyeric 30]

Ptatoes

[VarunLegend 4]

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[Superlative 500]

Blue, one entry per player. Just edit the previous one please.

It's got dislikes, would you delete that two posts on page 1, please.

[alexdabear17 10]

The frosty asphalt ground beneath me didn't feel the same. I had heard the mysterious siren over and over, but this one felt different. My adrenaline was pumping.

 

My tracks felt as if they were about to pop off their frame. Minutes later, however, sadness filled my heart. I thought I would never find the drop zone.

 

As these thoughts of despair clouded my mind, I saw many Vikings and Titans huddled around a golden diamond on the ground. Yes! My confidence was back! With the height and speed of my Dictator, I pushed my way through, and...

 

Boom! A strike by the mighty thunder had me destroyed, but the golden anomaly rose up above my tank like an angel in a moment never forgotten.

Edited February 1, 2015 by alexdabear17

[DarthvaderjonGTR 615]

As usual, a multitude of poems :) Let's see where this goes