Contest [Issue 31] Describe This in 100 Words!

[Kevred 1,586]

i hate those people wich insult my work ,like you stuart !

He's technically not insulting your work.

[danilici852 92]

He's technically not insulting your work.

... yes he did

[danilici852 92]

... yes he did

i just tryed to make a good entry ,i am sorry for my grammar problems but in my country english is not the first language :)

[Kevred 1,586]

... yes he did

He was ~technically~ offering you advice on how to improve your work. 

 

technicalities are awesome

Edited February 5, 2015 by Kevred

[danilici852 92]

He was ~technically~ offering you advice on how to improve your work. 

 

technicalities are awesome

if i have grammar problems you don t read my work ? or i don t have any chance to win ?

[classyplebs 1,786]

I was battling hard, constantly getting knocked down, but I got back up. I suddenly heard a loud siren. When this happened, nothing mattered. Team or no team, friend or no friend. Gold Boxes were a free for all. I was driving around the map with only 1 thing on my mind, finding the drop zone. I found it rather quickly but so did everyone else, I was in for a real fight. We sat in dead silence for 30 seconds, now it was time to mark our territory and stand our ground. I was quickest to react and jumped on top of the drop zone. It was a few seconds but it seemed like an eternity. The gold box was mine.

 

Word Count- 124

Edited February 6, 2015 by classyplebs

[chess155 0]

i hate those people wich insult my work ,like you stuart !

sorry man just trying to help u win :( (I'm Stuart )

[danilici852 92]

read again ..

[BJBlazkowicz 20]

  

Well-known sound pierced me with nonpareil sharpness. My eyes immediately took aim on brief gold box sign. Incoming wave of miscellaneous emotions made my limbs shivery.

 

Dear reader,        

rare chance to grab this jewel chest was within reach.

 

California gold rush has been instantaneously resurrected  in present Tanki.  Walking in the footsteps of the au fait gold hunters, I hit precarious road.

 

Dictator, the Iron fortress, my  "Hobson's choice" for this moment. I struggled along to the marked location dodging bloodthirsty fangs of my enemies. Brawl was unavoidable. But with no peril in fight, there is no glory in triumph.

 

Scrimmage, shock, gratefulness, amazement.

Tyché offered me this inebriating potion of success.

 

Number of words: 112

Edited February 20, 2015 by BJBlazkowicz

[delnina2 1,570]

... yes he did

Dude , He tried to help you ... 

 

Anyway I did upvote for you, to change your reputation to zero . 

Edited February 6, 2015 by delnina2

[danilici852 92]

thanks

[SUP3R_ST4R 1,205]

One day, was roaming in a match.Suddenly a alert came up *Kern* , it was Gold box!!!

 

All searched.After 5-6 seconds..A guy was standing alone then all got to know that it is the place

 

i gone to change my hull.. to dictator

 

All go in ramp house pipe but it wasn't enough!!! All started pushing!! atlast i was waiting to respawn  

 

And God's grace it was too near to Gold box i ran there some one have mined!!

 

my tank just made a back wheelie!!! and the gold is closer to me all pushed!!

 

the thunder and hammer killed me but they are just a fracture of a second late!!!

 

I took the gold and bought my favorite hornet :)                                 

                                                                                                                                                             ~ rockzdx

 

121 words :) 

Edited February 6, 2015 by SUP3R_ST4R

[tony990_Superstar 68]

In an intense Control Points battle, two hammers are heading for the huge battle for a gold box in the middle. A red team straggler gets shot by a blue player, who has just been shot himself and killed. A freezer is trying to push passed the defeated tank to get to the center of the gold. I, the blue player from the bottom of the screen, am a few centimeters from the dropping point. A hammer is aiming his turret at him to shoot. A smoky is trying to get passed me and avoid the hammer as well. A thunder is also trying to cut in. Another smoky has just been killed and is in midair.

[TankCraze_EN 14]

   The garnishing paints flashed in the young boy's eyes. The shimmering Gold Box sparkled above like a spectacle being carried on little wings, gliding effortlessly down to the awaiting tankers. The ruckus strengthened as it dropped farther. Nitros were presented and hearts beat in tankers' chests.

   For only this moment, the battle didn't matter at all for anybody close by. The boy tensed. Not even he knew why this moment meant so much to him. The 1,000 on the box possessed the crowd below as it fell faster now. He used the advantages of his little ol' dictator and glided up top with his rail's knockback. Success! The boy did it! His heart thumped a few more times before realizing he had won it.

 

 

125 words :D
701 characters

 

[doduobird 315]

"Gold Box will be dropped soon."

I quickly self-destructed, ran around looking for the drop spot, and found it. Adrenaline was coursing through my veins, and my heart was pumping faster and faster. I could almost hear it. Then, as I was looking up, I saw it - the Gold Box! For a few seconds, everyone remained still. Then there was pure chaos. Tanks charged towards the drop spot, firing at will. I clambered on top of a Viking, and rushed towards the Gold Box. I was almost touching it. Suddenly, my tank was blasted into pieces. I looked up anxiously at the top of the screen. I had taken the gold box. 

 

Word count: 113

Edited February 8, 2015 by doduobird

[dunes555 368]

 

  I was tasting bitter failure: aiming to hit stardom, but the shot was poor.

It always was.

 

 Tanki screamed:

'Gold box will be dropped soon.'

 

The orange persuaded me, with its promise of gold. I scanned, activating double armour. 

The mark was there. 

I kept my distance. 

 

The cube floated into view like a majestic swan. How was I to earn her affection?

I piloted at full tilt. No ramp to climb, no buddy to drive on. It was all me against those beefy weapons and hulls. 

I released my breath.

 

She was mine! The anticipation and pain had proved worth it! A wave of elation smashed me like a tidal wave, one that was indescribable.  

 

Aiming to hit stardom: the shot is great. 

 

 

124 words

Edited February 7, 2015 by dunes555

[aquafurgle1 95]

kev u should let everyone know its a pro battl. so no drugs... ;)

[Athena369 265]

I was tasting bitter failure: aiming to hit stardom, but the shot was poor.

It always was.

 

Tanki screamed:

'Gold box will be dropped soon.'

 

The orange persuaded me, with its promise of gold. I scanned, activating double armour.

The mark was there.

I kept my distance.

 

The cube floated into view like a majestic swan. How was I to earn her affection?

I piloted at full tilt. No ramp to climb, no buddy to drive on. It was all me against those beefy weapons and hulls.

I released my breath.

 

She was mine! The anticipation and pain had proved worth it! A wave of elation smashed me like a tidal wave, one that was indescribable.

 

Aiming to hit stardom: the shot is great.

 

 

124 words

 

how to plagiarize ok? -.- Hope it will be penalized. Edited February 8, 2015 by Athena369

[ibrahim823 293]

i was playing game the map was Polygon the game was going nice i was on first i was using dictator m3 and rail m3 it was a Pro battle and suddenly i heard the siren of Gold box and saw the orange words on the top i rushed to find the Gold zone when i had found it the enemy hammer killed me when i respawned i rushed to get Gold i saw the Gold my heart beat rose high as my heart gonna come out from my chest it was a box of 1000 crystals with Golden colour i stand on the Gold zone the tanks from all sides started pushing me i  got stucked from all directions and i got Gold box

118 words

 

Edited February 8, 2015 by ibrahim823

[Ambitious 2,084]

Gold-gold-gold! Fall-Fall-Fall! The Big Bad Mammoth goes for the gold! 

 

He tries to find the gold drop zone! The good ole dictator was determined for the gold!

‘Rush and push and rush and push, get the gold!’

The Thunder-Dictator in the background was losing hope!

The gangster firebird told that he was the boss!

A bright yellow flash on the sky, rush and push is the rule!

The Big Bad Mammoth also lost his anticipation!

Some were still searching the zone; others were just brawling for the gold!

The good ol' dictator took a giant leap, ‘I touched the sky!’ and took those crystals in a heap!

The good ol' dictator died happy!

‘I am the best!’ said he! 

 

Total Words: 119

Edited February 8, 2015 by Ambitious

[ibrahim823 293]

when will this contest end

[BJBlazkowicz 20]

when will this contest end

entries are accepted till 22nd february

[Michalus 182]

Entry

 

 

Original text (118 words)

 

 

Polygon, Summer Land

13th Dictator´s tankist divison

Target – Gold box

 

I was again sent to fight in harsh conditions. After hours of fights there were lot of rusty tanks. Enemies were great hidden and control point was taken by them. In one moment , we saw golden shine from the sky and immediately know it´s a gold box. Help given them from aircraft. We needed to take it and bring home for analyse . On box opened parachute and was slowly landing down. Explosions everywhere. I was using my best driving skills and moved in the dropping zone. I have taken the gold box, but 3 projectiles damaged tank and now we are waiting for rescue.

 

Gnsimo. Winner_Of_Turkey

 

 

Edited February 19, 2015 by Michalus

[ibrahim823 293]

who got the prize in issue 30

[BJBlazkowicz 20]

Entry

 

 

Original text (118 words)

 

 

Polygon, Summer Land

13th Dictator´s tankist divison

Target – Gold box

 

I was again sent to fight in harsh conditions. After hours of fights there were lot of rusty tanks. Enemies were great hidden and control point was taken by them. In one moment , we saw golden shine from the sky and immadietly know it´s a gold box. Help given them from aircraft. We needed to take it and bring home for analyse . On box opened parachute and was slowly landing down. Explosions everywhere. I was using my best driving skills and moved in the dropping zone. I have taken the gold box, but 3 projectiles damaged tank and now we are waiting for rescue.

 

Gnsimo. Winner_Of_Turkey

 

 

reminds me good old CoD :D