Contest [Issue 31] Describe This in 100 Words!

[BJBlazkowicz 20]

who got the prize in issue 30

http://en.tankiforum.com/index.php?showtopic=237914

[XENI0 43]

The map polygon was engulfed with the ear piercing sound of pure violence. Tanks spitting bullets that annihilate the opposition; piercing their armour. Then the eerie sirens of the ‘Gold box’ silenced the map, wailing and firing. The raw steel of the tanks clashed and intercepted each other. Sparks of shrapnel flying everywhere. Bullets smacking air. Plunging themselves into the heat of the battle. From the corner of the screen the gold box is visible. Their respect dropped like luxuries in a yelling alarm. The sheer power of the tanks blockaded the way. Scrambling impatiently, one tank reached out and touched, suddenly it evaporated into thin air.

 

107 words

[billy_sharp 0]

Speedy dreams

 

I was just lying there as an speed drop zone watching the battle ah great times. Tankers would just pick up my speed and fly off and DIE. But once in an while an show off comes down and gets everyone hearts beating trying to search and find the drop zone to bear 1000 crystals. Then it comes there's was hornet's and dictator's are figthing to the DEATH as I'm laying down being jealous of this GOLD box floating down. That's how my life goes my dream to be an gold box and get fighter over oh that's the dream.

 

I tried to be original

 

 

100 words :D

 

Edited February 8, 2015 by billy_sharp

[michael470 13]

My adrenaline surged as the Headquarters called, ‘Weapons down. Gold box will be dropped.’ I forgot about the war and sneaked through the battlefield to track my opponents- lurking vicious serpents staying motionless under cover. As a gold box elegantly dropped, the hungry serpents went alive. Boom! I narrowly escaped a smoky blast while I stepped closer to the spot.

The shiny chest was literally inches beyond reach. I felt I was in control, but sheer joy lasted merely a second. Just then I realized this was a deception- the enemy’s shrewd strategy. The gold box signal was fake, and the precious casket was an illusion. Meanwhile, some hiding enemy troops managed to secure their control points throughout the drama and stole the ultimate victory.

 

125 words

[IVIr.Blue 865]

MY GOLDEN DAY

It was an other luminous day in the world of tanki online.I was the most persistant and accomplished member of my team.I departed from my base towards my rival's base.The opponents were soo compelling that no one in my team had anticipation and I felt disintrested but.I Reacquried all my spirts when I heard the mystifying sound from no where I immediatly recognized the sound.it it ..was the GOLDBOX.my heart stopped pumping blood.finnaly I saw tanks gather near the ramp which was very unusual i knew that those tanks were covering the dropzone  and  I rushed towards the box, I could barely see anything a VIKING obstructed my sight I felt as if all the tanks of the world were right there.I started firing in the thin air till I realised that my fate turned out to be great that day the box landed on me.the notification read "NISHANTH36 has taken the goldbox"I shut my eyes In happiness I was the blessed one. GREAT TIMES.

word count: 122

Edited February 12, 2015 by IVIr.Blue

[chess155 0]

Speedy dreams

I was just lying there as an speed drop zone watching the battle ah great times. Tankers would just pick up my speed and fly off and DIE. But once in an while an show off comes down and gets everyone hearts beating trying to search and find the drop zone to bear 1000 crystals. Then it comes there's was hornet's and dictator's are figthing to the DEATH as I'm laying down being jealous of this GOLD box floating down. That's how my life goes my dream to be an gold box and get fighter over oh that's the dream.

 

I tried to be original

 

 

100 words :D

 

oh nice idea I'm sure kev will like that

[malikashfal 2]

It was very good day at Arena Summer Night and i was playin playing and playing.It was of 1 hour battle i was so bored i was thinking that it should be ended till now but it wasent i had 2089 score and we were winning from 165-111 our team was red we were playing the Control Points match i was so bored suddenly i said gold didnt drop till now i went down to heal a peron suddenly on the i heard the sound of sirens i went up to take and i took yess ^_^ O_O *_* %_% #_# :D

I think 100 words plz tank staff accept It plzzz

Good luck

Regard malikashfal

[stuartb 234]

Speedy dreams

I was just lying there as an speed drop zone watching the battle ah great times. Tankers would just pick up my speed and fly off and DIE. But once in an while an show off comes down and gets everyone hearts beating trying to search and find the drop zone to bear 1000 crystals. Then it comes there's was hornet's and dictator's are figthing to the DEATH as I'm laying down being jealous of this GOLD box floating down. That's how my life goes my dream to be an gold box and get fighter over oh that's the dream.

 

I tried to be original

 

 

100 words :D

 

oh very original I like it :D

[fighter310 67]

''Move, you fat tank!'' I yelled as I ran through the battlefield.  With all these medium and heavy tanks in the way, Polygon is cramped!

 

Anyway, the gold box is about to drop. But where exactly? Running around the battlefield won't help me anymore, for I am out of luck. I decided to

trust my instincts. Nearby, I see a group of tanks clustered around the houses and near the elevated heights. 

 

There it is - I see the box falling!  I pushed forward. I was battered by Hammer, frozen by Freeze, and thawed out by Firebird. But I have faith in my Dictator. Astoundingly, I took the gold just as I was finished! What do you know, miracles do happen! Don't give up! 

 

124 words

[Athena369 265]

I'm so not going to win this contest :D good luck to all the others participating anyway :D

[i..0R4NG3 745]

                                         The Lucky Gold

 

I was in a polygon battle with some people from the tanki world, it was a good sunny day where I can kill and get some XP half way to 2M.

 

All of a sudden I was playing until I heard a loud sound coming out of nowhere, I look up on my screen to find

Gold box will be dropped soon, I was having a heart attack when I saw the notification, I ran and ran with my Dictator to find the Drop Zone, then I find  a crowd of tankers and know the gold will drop there, so I rush and rush and there it is falling!

My powerful Dictator touched the gold as soon as I died, I was wondering about that Dictator+Thunder+Rustle what was he doing all the way over there? '~' as I respawn.

 

 

                                                                                               The end

 

118 words!

                                                                                                                                                                                         

                                                                                                                                                                                         Zibrahamz

Edited February 14, 2015 by i..0R4NG3

[Athena369 265]

 

I was in a polygon battle with some people from the tanki world, it was a good sunny day where I can kill and get some XP half way to 2M.

 

All of a sudden I was playing until I heard a loud sound coming out of nowhere, I look up on my screen to find

Gold box will be dropped soon, I was having a heart attack when I saw the notification, I ran and ran with my Dictator to find the notification but since I was a bit slow I pressed Page Down key on my keyboard and next thing I know was the other tanks were standing in one place which I realized the gold was going to drop there so I immediately got up the ramp and i see the gold dropping I slid down on the right of the long ramp and suddenly lag a bit causing my Dictator to get up on all the tanks then this guy with hammer shoots me and makes me back up another to where I was not on the tanks, but my Dictator is tall which made me get the Gold box I was proud of myself even tho its only a 1000 crystal box but i thought to myself its worth it tho...

 

 

                                                                                               The end

 

216 or 214 words not sure if i missed any words I counted them like 7 times already.

                                                                                                                                                                                         

                                                                                                                                                                                         Zibrahamz

 

your entry should be below 125 word limit.

[i..0R4NG3 745]

your entry should be below 125 word limit.

Forgot that XD thx for reminding me.

Edited February 11, 2015 by i..0R4NG3

[Kevred 1,586]

your entry should be below 125 word limit.

The goddess saves the day again.

[Athena369 265]

The goddess saves the day again.

:D

[i..0R4NG3 745]

I am so gonna lose this.... If it was up to 270 it would be better my entry was better then :(

[BJBlazkowicz 20]

I am so gonna lose this.... If it was up to 270 it would be better my entry was better then :(

have hope, you got still  a lot of time to remade it to perfection if you want to :)

Edited February 22, 2015 by BJBlazkowicz

[Bert_The_Ace 0]

Yawn, um, time to...wait today's Saturday. Yes!!! Squeaky, Squeeky, Stomp! Where'd I put those pants, forget it I'll put on my robe. Tanki first,  chores after noon. Gold combo and Control point today. Okay, focus. We need another gold. Okay, I'm in. Yawn, help the team be ready for that gold. Do do dum da do, hey dude....really psh, dude, I'm on your side. Isida, Isida whew "Thx bro". Heh, bye bye Mammoth. Gold! Yes, Yes, Yes, Yes! Okay, Okay, stay calm there's the zone. Okay wait for it. NOW! Cmon cmon, uh...Yes! Yes! Woohoo. Wow, who needs coffee, Them golds hype you up, and they're caffine free too! 

[IVIr.Blue 865]

as usual hoping a prize but wood never get it,every tym writing cntest no luck fr me anyway i loved it

[Mr.Eswar 188]

polygon map is filled with players red team captured the points all were focusing on the game , at once gold box dropped all came rushing to take it thinking that they will take the gold but poor mamoth with hammer was left behind because of its weight and dictator with hammer and jejus paint was confused and hammer with dictator ,needle paint was so late in searching gold box drop zone ,Boom , all were fighting there ,blue team destroyed one red team player , everyone was every exited in them alll only one is the lucky guy a blue team player took the gold in the black mist and the gold box images disappearrs in the sky....

 

 

 

 

please some count my words and remind me plz im sick lying on bed

Edited February 13, 2015 by Mr.Eswar

[snipe3000 678]

polygon map fillled  with pro players red team captured  the points all were focusing on the game , at once gold box dropped  all came rushing to take it thinking that they will take the gold but poor mamoth with hammer and jejus paint was left behind because of its weight and dictator with hammer and jejus paint was confused and hammer with dictator ,needle paint  was so late in searching gold box drop zone ,Boom ,a lot of smoke appeared at the gold box drop zone  all were fighting there ,blue team destroyed one red team player , everyone was every exited  in them alll only one is the lucky guy a blue team player took the gold in the black mist and the gold box images disappearrs in the sky....

 

 

 

 

please some count my words and remind me plz im sick lying on bed

130 edit it or else it will be declined oh and whats funny is I'm actually sick today  :(

[PetertheGeniusGamer 74]

oh nice idea I'm sure kev will like that

I had 100 words too.

[beaku 2,656]

The heat of the battle was intense and the ground was burning beneath my tracks as I dawned the once most feared combination in the world. With my near impenetrable armor of dictator and deadly railgun , I was slaughtering enemy tanks.

As if the battle wasn't keeping me excited enough, the words (Gold box will be dropped soon) appeared which, even though I had seen countless times, pumped up adrenaline throughout my body. We saw where it was going to fall and stood there in unspoken truce.

Then we saw the shimmering gleam breaking in through the sky and all hell broke loose. Many were killed trying to reach it. Then, I saw my chance and with a proud neck, caught that Gold. 

The End

 

 

Thanks DidYouKnowThat for helping me out

No. of words – 125 (Excluding “The End”, obviously <_< )

 

 

Edited February 13, 2015 by beaku

[r_DidYouKnowThat0 1,662]

@beaku: 194 words.

The restriction is 90 words to 125 words, so you're going to have to omit anywhere from 104 words to 69 words. . . .

Omitting 104 words will put you at an exact 90, while shortening it down by 69 words will put you at an exact 125. . . .

 

Been working on my entry since day one, and I found this one to be more fun than the last.

Especially since the picture (in my opinion) is much more difficult to describe given what a mess it is, with all of the tanks piled

up for gold. Though I found a way.

 

About nine more days until this contest is over.

Edited February 13, 2015 by r_DidYouKnowThat0

[beaku 2,656]

@beaku: 194 words.

The restriction is 90 words to 125 words, so you're going to have to omit anywhere from 104 words to 69 words. . . .

Omitting 104 words will put you at an exact 90, while shortening it down by 69 words will put you at an exact 125. . . .

 

Been working on my entry since day one, and I found this one to be more fun than the last.

Especially since the picture (in my opinion) is much more difficult to describe given what a mess it is, with all of the tanks piled

up for gold. Though I found a way.

 

About nine more days until this contest is over.

Thanks. Damn this is irritating :(