Club "Happy Dragons" [H.D.]

[Blackdrakon30 2,943]

Hey guys, can you please help me with english homework? (askin here cuz all some of  you r in AWC club :ph34r:)

My homework is to write about a dish. Can anyone pm me and tell everything about your favorite or your country's tradicional dish? Pls.

I will ro write about a dish when I'm not on mobile.

[Tofu 6,773]

Extra Savage

with pepperonis

[gabriele02 3,813]

I will ro write about a dish when I'm not on mobile.

No need aready -_-

 

Btw its all I wrote yet.. What should else shall I write? (took me a hour to write all dis) :(

Edited December 14, 2016 by gabriele02

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One hour for 3 sentences + a picture lol

[gabriele02 3,813]

One hour for 3 sentences + a picture lol

yes im pro

[Total_SkiIl 1,983]

rise=rice waw

[gabriele02 3,813]

rise=rice waw

lol thnxs

[Tofu 6,773]

I predict a Draco Malfoy or limit reply

Edited December 14, 2016 by Tofu

[gabriele02 3,813]

I predict a Draco Malfoy or limit reply

They r typing for a hour like meh :ph34r:

[Tofu 6,773]

They r typing for a hour like meh :ph34r:

Waw lol

[PracticeParkourStunt 2,542]

No need aready -_-

 

Btw its all I wrote yet.. What should else shall I write? (took me a hour to write all dis) :(

How to write a great article of a dish:

 

 

Give a starting, a catch one, like, "Sushi -Tastier than your Mom's dinner. Why? Because (....)" This line will give a short description, like from which country it is, and what is (fish or salad, something like that).

 

Then give an introduction, the introduction will summarize everything. But since your first line is already a summary, an alternative will be to write a history about it. Like where it started, how, when, where, and to what degree. If you are making this paragraph an history, than, when you start this paragraph, write 'Firstly', as in "Firstly, we should know the origin of Sushi. Sushi was found in (country) during the (time) ages (blah blah blah....)"

 

Then comes the first or second para. IF you made the paragraph ^^ before a history, then in this paragraph, you should start with "Secondly", but if you made the paragraph above an introduction, then type "Firstly". This paragraph should be about the history IF you didn't make the paragraph above a history paragraph. If you made the paragraph above a history, then make this paragraph about its taste, how it is cooked, etc. So, the starting line should look something like this: "Secondly, sushi tastes raw, but it is easy to cook and gives a soft taste. It is cooked by (blah blah blah...)"

 

Later on, the third paragraph (this will be the third paragraph if you made the paragraph above talk about how it is cooked and its taste). In this paragraph, write about the foods' facts -is it healthy or not? In what tradition is it eaten mostly? etc. Since this will be the last paragraph, start the front sentence with 'Lastly', so it should look something like this, "Lastly, let us know something about it. If you are to travel here, the first thing you may be wondering about is, 'is it healthy?' Well, we have all of your answers (blah blah blah...)"

 

At the last will be the conclusion. The conclusion will re summarize everything, but don't just copy the front introduction. Use different words. Use synonyms. Here is a good site to obtain synonyms: http://www.thesaurus.com/ . Start the conclusion by: "To conclude, blah blah blah..."

That is all

 

 

 

And you may use my short announcement as an example.

 

btw, I expect a thank you cuz I used up 15 minutes of mine for you.w

[mydoom.exe 5,154]

I predict a Draco Malfoy or limit reply

Filthy mudblood

[LIMITFULL 1,793]

How to write a great article of a dish:

 

 

Give a starting, a catch one, like, "Sushi -Tastier than your Mom's dinner. Why? Because (....)" This line will give a short description, like from which country it is, and what is (fish or salad, something like that).

 

Then give an introduction, the introduction will summarize everything. But since your first line is already a summary, an alternative will be to write a history about it. Like where it started, how, when, where, and to what degree. If you are making this paragraph an history, than, when you start this paragraph, write 'Firstly', as in "Firstly, we should know the origin of Sushi. Sushi was found in (country) during the (time) ages (blah blah blah....)"

 

Then comes the first or second para. IF you made the paragraph ^^ before a history, then in this paragraph, you should start with "Secondly", but if you made the paragraph above an introduction, then type "Firstly". This paragraph should be about the history IF you didn't make the paragraph above a history paragraph. If you made the paragraph above a history, then make this paragraph about its taste, how it is cooked, etc. So, the starting line should look something like this: "Secondly, sushi tastes raw, but it is easy to cook and gives a soft taste. It is cooked by (blah blah blah...)"

 

Later on, the third paragraph (this will be the third paragraph if you made the paragraph above talk about how it is cooked and its taste). In this paragraph, write about the foods' facts -is it healthy or not? In what tradition is it eaten mostly? etc. Since this will be the last paragraph, start the front sentence with 'Lastly', so it should look something like this, "Lastly, let us know something about it. If you are to travel here, the first thing you may be wondering about is, 'is it healthy?' Well, we have all of your answers (blah blah blah...)"

 

At the last will be the conclusion. The conclusion will re summarize everything, but don't just copy the front introduction. Use different words. Use synonyms. Here is a good site to obtain synonyms: http://www.thesaurus.com/ . Start the conclusion by: "To conclude, blah blah blah..."

That is all

 

 

 

And you may use my short announcement as an example.

 

btw, I expect a thank you cuz I used up 15 minutes of mine for you.w

Awesome English Writing Structure plan...  I could have used that a few years ago!

 

 

REALLY

OY - I keep getting that lately also.  ESPECIALLY since our pages are racking up faster the past few days...!

Go Go #SpamBrozz...!!

 

 

No need aready -_-

 

Btw its all I wrote yet.. What should else shall I write? (took me a hour to write all dis) :(

There were a couple of English spelling errors.  I've re-written below...

Sushi is one of the most famous dishes in the world, and is a Japanese national dish.

It is made of rice and combined with other ingredients like raw seafood, meat (no need to say fish, as this is seafood), vegetables or tropical fruits.  You can find this dish in almost every restaurant in Japan.

 

I predict a Draco Malfoy or limit reply

Uh oh, are you tracking my timeline for replies?!?

 

And what's all this marriage stuff?!?  Aren't some of the posters still talking about school?  Who gets married at 14 or 16?  Or just the arrangement has been set, your wife has been picked, and the parents have exchanged goats and gold to settle the deal?  Now just another 5 or 10 years needs to pass??

And I'm starting to have some gender confusion on some of you..!  Not that boy/girl matters.  How you play in the game gets my respect!

[Tofu 6,773]

True love is unstoppable

[PracticeParkourStunt 2,542]

True love is unstoppable

Until you find out that raising children is hard :P

[gabriele02 3,813]

Awesome English Writing Structure plan...  I could have used that a few years ago!

 

OY - I keep getting that lately also.  ESPECIALLY since our pages are racking up faster the past few days...!

Go Go #SpamBrozz...!!

 

 

There were a couple of English spelling errors.  I've re-written below...

Sushi is one of the most famous dishes in the world, and is a Japanese national dish.

It is made of rice and combined with other ingredients like raw seafood, meat (no need to say fish, as this is seafood), vegetables or tropical fruits.  You can find this dish in almost every restaurant in Japan.

Thanks!

[Penguin40 1,714]

Ooh, Yiper-Flabs duel ended? Someone wanna do a similar one with me? :P Abs' first writing piece of the duel here reminded me perfectly of WoT, :P xD 

[PracticeParkourStunt 2,542]

Thanks!

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[gabriele02 3,813]

gab ignoring me.

 

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No, But you help me a lot... Today is lux's turn lol

Edited December 14, 2016 by gabriele02

[PracticeParkourStunt 2,542]

No, But you help me a lot... Today is lux's turn lol

(~_~) furious (~_~) 

Then why did you ask for help then!!!!! I wasted 15 minutes of mine! And now you say that You don't require it!? 

rage comic #1 : P 

[gabriele02 3,813]

(~_~) furious (~_~) 

Then why did you ask for help then!!!!! I wasted 15 minutes of mine! And now you say that You don't require it!? 

rage comic #1 : P 

cuz im pro

[PracticeParkourStunt 2,542]

cuz im pro

And you like to break other's heart :(

[Tofu 6,773]

This is more romantic than romeo and juliet

[PracticeParkourStunt 2,542]

This is more romantic than romeo and juliet

[Tofu 6,773]

 

This is more romantic than romeo and juliet

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