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Keep on writing and you will improve :)

And Good Luck with your next article

 

I'm just a kid might do the Unity thing in two years. Next article will be about food and how it affects the human body; the greatest machine ever. Edited by joe123_Superman

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Nicely written. :) I do enough on the exercise side of things, jogging, pumping weights & yoga 6 days of the week. B)

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Try not to include a lot of science. Talk about it in an informal way to make it interesting to read :)

Sorry, I do that.

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Instead of telling me my mistakes, can you tell me what I should improve on amd if it is good or bad.

Take some time before you post. Do proofreading yourself or some of your trusted friends. Before posting,  click preview post to point out any typo's.

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Nice!

 

 

Sorry I didn't read the article as soon as it came out, it's really hard to keep up with all these articles!

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Umm... I don't understand, what's the point of this? Even though, good article, Joey, not considering that the topic is, something quite different.

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Umm... I don't understand, what's the point of this? Even though, good article, Joey, not considering that the topic is, something quite different.

Well, first of all we can do Non-fiction articles. The point of this is to try and encourage people to go out and be active.

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How come you haven't said anything about the genitals?! :P ok, jk, jk. Good article :)

*Punch*. Health is bad enough.

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Ahum, wasn't this article made to get to know your body...?

Yes, however, I am hoping people know enough about themselves to NOT need that topic. 

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When I saw this, I thought it was going to be one of THOSE articles, if you know what I mean... ;)

 

Btw- Gold is lying about it's gender. All 3vil beings like Lhamster have no gender, as well as being able to transcend time and space. Run while you still can!!1!11!1

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How come you haven't said anything about the genitals?! :P ok, jk, jk. Good article :)

Yes, well kids play this game we should have a group where certain ages can read articles then if that was possible I could have talked about it.

 

Yes, however, I am hoping people know enough about themselves to NOT need that topic. 

(*SIGH*) 

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