Tanki Mythology part 1-The dawn

[etha2007_awesome 44]

The Dawn

 

Before Tanki was created, there was something called "Tanks for Two", a game where you build and battle with your very own tank! This Tanks for Two, had an idea to create a better game, because it was slowly dying. So it created "Tanks". This time, it was 3D, had more equipment and it had better graphics! Tanks later transformed into "Tanki Online" which still lives to this very day!

Tanki Online had only one place to live, named "Tribute", Tanki then created another place called "Sandbox", which Tribute married. Once the marriage was done, they had two kids, "Polygon" and "Rio". Rio was played on more than Polygon by the new inhabitants of the Tank world, called "Tankers", so then Polygon became jealous and killed his brother. Polygon, realizing what he had done, killed himself.Tribute begged Tanks for Two (the almighty God) to bring Rio and Polygon back to life.Tanks for Two, taking pity on Tribute, bought Rio back to life, but made Polygon suffer in MultLand for murder. Nowadays, Polygon is still played on but is mostly filled with mults. You might be asking, "ETHA! WHATS A MULT??". Calm down,I'm getting to that now. Mults are traitors to their family by assisting the enemy team, who are often banished from their family and thrown into a map which is now banned called "Labyrinth". Labyrinth was banned because of the gruesome bans it gave to players. Nowadays, mults get the easier way of banning, which is called "Suspending" which just gives them a banishment, no pain at all.

 

Now what happened to Sandbox,Rio and Tribute? Tribute, Sandbox and Rio thanked Tanks for Two for letting Polygon become overcome by mults.Though Tribute first hated Tanks for Two for letting Polygon suffer, she quickly realized how much of  a blessing this was. Tanks for Two came down to earth and said "You are all a kind and gentle family,which makes me, my son (Tanks) and my grandson (Tanki online) happy! But I am about to die,about to fade away,that's why I created "Tanks".So that life could carry on even when I'm dead!"

Tribute, Sandbox and Rio mourned the death of their almighty God. But they were happy as well, because they could start a new and fresh beginning.This was the dawn of the Tanki world,which would be a very successful series with over 31,000,000 "Tankers" playing. But more about Tanki's success later, we are still at the very dawn of the Tanki Universe.

 

There are many more Parts to come, since this story that Tanki himself gave to me is very long. I don't know whether this is true or not, but since Tanki himself came to me in my dreams and told this huge story, we can assume it's real. I feel drowsy now that I've written this, I don't think Tanki wants me to write more right now. Sorry but this is the will of Tanki. So I'm going to stop writing here.

This story is the true life of Tanki,not that nonsense the "Devs" gave us.
And I speak to wake you all up. To show you that the "Devs" are fake. And the true creator of Tanki is Tanks for Two.

 

 

(I don't think these devs are fake,I just said that for the story)

 

 

Edited May 12, 2017 by tweezers

[tweezers 1,034]

Approved.

 

-Completely reformatted. Punctuation was atrocious.

-Spelling corrections.

-Capitalized the names. 

-Added a title. 

 

I'm not sure what you took before writing this, but it can't possibly have been legal. 

[zaintahir 458]

Awesome

[Blackdrakon30 2,943]

I have to second Tweez about this; you really want to work on your grammar and just general sentence-writing. Even now there are a few errors and way more commas than are strictly necessary.

[etha2007_awesome 44]

Approved.

 

 

I'm not sure what you took before writing this, but it can't possibly have been legal.

 

 

LOL

 

I was in kind of a hurry.I had homework so I had to do it quick (10 pages of every lesson for our revision homework)

[Penguin40 1,714]

You don't need to write it from scratch at one time, you could write some at one time, then more, then more. That's how all the reporters do. 

 

And I do need to third Twee and second Drakon now :P don't troll me now 

[marc.jp_44 20,837]

Yeah, sentence structuring is poor. The sentences aren't written in proper English and much of it makes minimal sense. 

[Magenta 5,165]

I'm not sure what you took before writing this, but it can't possibly have been legal. 

 u mean etha took ethano.....whatever.

sentence construction isnt too good, but keep practicing.

[Sl0m0_warri0r 129]

 u mean etha took ethano.....whatever.

sentence construction isnt too good, but keep practicing.

Dont judge ethan in spelling you cant even do capitals.

[pieface101 285]

I'm not sure what you took before writing this, but it can't possibly have been legal. 

*Air horns blare.

 

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Teach me how to roast plz

 

Dont judge ethan in spelling you cant even do capitals.

 

*Don't judge Ethan in spelling you can't even do captials.

 

 

Neither can you, apparently!  :P No? Okay, I'll stop being a Grammar Nazi and leave.

[etha2007_awesome 44]

You don't need to write it from scratch at one time, you could write some at one time, then more, then more. That's how all the reporters do. 

 

And I do need to third Twee and second Drakon now :P don't troll me now 

Thanks for the feedback! I didn't even think about doing like this.

[etha2007_awesome 44]

*Air horns blare.

 

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Teach me how to roast plz <--------------------- *please

 

 

 

*Don't judge Ethan in spelling you can't even do captials.

 

 

Neither can you, apparently!  :P No? Okay, I'll stop being a Grammar Nazi and leave.

[Zenyth 6,494]

 

*Don't judge Ethan in spelling you can't even do captials.

 

 

Neither can you, apparently!  :P No? Okay, I'll stop being a Grammar Nazi and leave.

*capitals

[Mr.Meowth 72]

Capitalization, Punctuation and Structuring. Work on these three and it shouldn't take much time for you to become a PRO.

Also, don't forget grammar ;)