The Hell of Humanity - Part 2

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One week after Special Operation squad 0-4-00117's disappearance...

Information bot signal has finally reconnected with Special Operations squad 0-4-00117! We thank you for your patience.

Jason wished the mission went as he had planned, with his squad teleporting to a maintenance garage and getting their wasps...

Unfortunately, the enemy had other ideas.

Their teleportation devices were rigged to teleport them to a enemy prison, then his squad was captured and since his information bot lost signal they were unable to contact the American military to tell them about there situation.

"Stupid Stupid Stupid!" Jason shouted while hitting himself. "Don't do that! You will only make a bad problem worse..." Alice said back.

 

"I suppose you're right... Has Tony come out of the washroom yet?"

"I suppose not" replied Alice, who saw Tony locking himself in the bathroom and crying. Even now Tony hasn't come out of the bathroom.

"I'll go open it," said Jason who went to the washroom and opened the door only to see Tony's head in the comoude and his body almost going to fall. It seems Tony fell asleep while doing his toilet-work...

Jason then immediately saw a tiny crack in the wall,he immediately ordered Alice to break it. Alice took her 5 year old wooden machete and started breaking it.

1 hour later...

It was night time, Alice had finally made a man-size dent in the wall ,and Tony had woken up and was mad to hear that his head was in the bathroom. "Alright, we break out of this hellhole once and for all!" All three of them counted to three together, and they broke through. They walked for what seemed like hours,until they finally came to a weapons cache and lab."What is this place? We first though it was a prison but this seems like the hell of humanity itself..."

 

"But the reports said the hell of humanity is small! This is 45 times the size of the White House, also it's underground if you look at those windows, and the hell of humanity was rumored to be underground..."

 

"That's what I'm saying!" Jason was annoyed to see Alice and Tony arguing so he decided to tell them to discuss more important matters but before he could do that he saw some sort of monitor that said "New turret: Results".He went over to the monitor and he only could read the first sentence which said "Shaft:the turret which we have been working on for 20 years has finally been tested!" Before the wall in front of them exploded and two tanks which had the new "Shaft" turret came in.

Edited May 25, 2017 by Blackdrakon30

[Blackdrakon30 2,943]

- Numerous grammar edits

- Several spelling edits

- Changed formatting slightly

- Capitalized title (I assume Hell of Humanity is a specific place, so it should be considered a proper noun).

 

Approved

 

Nice article. You might want to work on your spacing around commas though, you seem slightly inexperienced with that aspect of grammar. Good job though. I apologize if I missed any edits; I was a bit rushed when approving this one.

Edited May 25, 2017 by Blackdrakon30

[maryam98 1,171]

I guessed that was the reason for the hull mix-up..

Great story