The Rise of the Abandoned : Part Two

[g-force 1,000]

The Rise of The Abandoned

Part II

 

At the Tanki Online Head Quarters

 

"All Tankers, please report to Deck 9, Sector 7 for an emergency meeting. I also request the community manager to come for this meeting as it is extremely important." said the speakers. There were many tankers in the lobby. Some were in their flashy XT equipment, some had legendary paints like Veteran, Gladiator, and Acid, some were just being mults and the others were probably busy searching TankBook about the incident of g-force with the mysterious tank from 2.0. The Head Quarters was an amazing place. There were some crystal vending machines around, a small museum that hosted some of Tanki's most memorable moments and many cabins for the scientists of Tanki Online to work.

 

A tank in bright golden colors, probably because of the premium paint, entered the lobby. He was equipped with Thunder XT and Viking XT. He was , the community manager of Tanki.

 

"What's all this crowd about?" he asked.

"There seem to be mysterious appearances of tanks from TO 2.0." replied the crowd.

"What's that?" the CM asked. "I'm sorry, I'm new to this world."

A tanker from the crowd cried "You don't know about TO 2.0 and you are the CM? Who elected you?"

 

A lead scientist intervened and the crowd was silenced. "It's not important now. What I want you all to know is, there's some serious issue in the fusion of the abandoned TO 2.0 world with the current one. This shouldn't have been possible. It must be the work of an insider."

 

Suddenly, the door burst open. A tanker sped up to the crowd. He looked terribly injured as though he had fallen from Rio's tallest tower a hundred times. It was @ZanarkTheWiz.

 

"Who's he?" the CM enquired.

"Dear sir, if you saw this transmission, you would know." replied some random tanker.

 

"@ZanarkTheWiz, what had happened? Where's @g-force and @sparkl_awesome? Any idea where they are?"

 

He replied, "I'm not sure, but what I do know is that he ran to Osa. The tank from 2.0 gave him a really hard pursuit. I was helpless. I ran in the other direction. But I have some terrible news. Actually, the tank we encountered at Kungur was not the only tank that had glitched into this world. There are more. I encountered with two more tanks. What's weirder is, all the tanks we had come across were Wasp and Thunder. The only difference was that they had a different color. Also, their specialties were different. The blue tank we encountered at first had a force field, but the one I confronted whilst escaping was pink and had no force field. However, this tank was able to regenerate every time I tried to damage it. The other tank I encountered was metallic white and had invisibility powers. I suffered a huge damage from that tank. I somehow managed to escape."

 

"Uhm... this situation is really getting out of hand." said the trembling CM.

 

"Zanark, were you able to get any pics along the way?" asked Destrod, a newspaper reporter.

 

"You think I'd have time to take a photo while in a fight? Hmm... let me think, I'll just go to the tank that wants to kill me and say 'Oh hey there! Can I have a selfie with you?'"

 

"Sorry. I was just asking so that I could make an interesting article."

 

Something strange began to happen. The big LED display in the vestibule started to light up.

 

"Transmission from @g-force..."

 

 

To be continued...

Edited October 19, 2017 by g-force

[tweezers 1,034]

Approved. 

 

-Rephrased a few sentences.

 

Always capitalize the names of turrets, hulls, and paints, since they're nouns as well.

 

Very nice. Good use of the cliffhanger too, torture your readers a bit :P

[Magenta 5,165]

"What's all this crowd about?" he asked.

"There seem to be mysterious appearances of tanks from TO 2.0." replied the crowd.

"What's that?" the CM asked. "I'm sorry, I'm new to this world."

A tanker from the crowd cried "You don't know about TO 2.0 and you are the CM? Who elected you?"

You might've escaped Tweemult, but there's no escaping me.

[S-H-A-R-V-A-N 84]

Nice article buddy!

I'm getting back to this soon  ;) 

[Stratosphere 2,234]

You might've escaped Tweemult, but there's no escaping me.

You might have escaped Tweezerman and g-force, but there's no escaping me.

[Magenta 5,165]

You might have escaped Tweezerman and g-force, but there's no escaping me.

But people escape you all the time. Neil Armstrong is a famous example.

[InfamatiEtObliterati 182]

But people escape you all the time. Neil Armstrong is a famous example.

Someone pour some water on him. Hot damn.

[LIMITFULL 1,793]

Nice GF!!  Love how HD is getting featured roles!!