A Small Collection of Poems

[C.O.N.Q.U.E.R.O.R 3,845]

Even If

Spoiler

Even if you’re not here with me, if you’re far away on the other side of the world, or if you leave this Earth for a better place, I’ll stay right here for you.

 

Even if I’m too far to hold you, if the narrow rift between us widens into an unfathomable void, or if God Himself forces us apart.

 

Even if you think you’re nothing more than all the mistakes that you’ve made, all the shortcomings that everyone reminds you of, or all the imperfections that you see within yourself.

 

Even if you tell me that you hate me, that you never want to see me again, or that you hope I die.

 

Even if I’m bearing sorrow deeper than the sea, despair more intense than depression, or hurt worse than hell.

 

Even if you think that you’re too far gone, that you don’t deserve to be cared for, or that I should’ve left you long ago because you’re as hopeless as hope itself.

 

Even if you can’t find the right words, I’ll listen to your heart. Even if you doubt your worth, I’ll believe in you. Even if you don’t love yourself, I always will.

 

Hollow

Spoiler

hurt, hurt
so much hurt
what am i?
a wreck, a mess

 

nothing but memories
of a time long past
nothing but remains
of a forgotten self

 

fragile
now shattered
tired
now empty

 

a scream
trapped in my heart
a cry
locked in my mind

 

a hollow voice
to fill the void
a vacant smile
to hide the flaws

 

love
perhaps once
pain
perhaps endless

 

"always"
only a pointless promise
"forever"
only a futile folly

 

hurt, hurt
too much hurt
could someone, anyone, love this mistake, this failure?
i, for one, cannot

 

Somebody

Spoiler

am i anything?
am i anything more than a letter grade?
am i anything more than the value i bring to my family, my friends, my society?
am i anything more than all these accomplishments and achievements that i don't even want?

 

could i be something?
could i be a me that i finally feel like i can love?
could i be the kind of person that i want to be, not the kind of person my family wants me to be?
could i be important to someone?

 

will i ever be somebody?
will i ever be truly seen as a person?
will i ever be understood by someone other than the hateful darkness inside me?
will i ever be loved?

 

what would it be like if someone didn't dismiss me like any other insignificant thing?
what would it be like if someone showed me that i'm not just some thing, showed me that i'm someone?
what would it be like if someone told me that i'm a real, live, important somebody who matters more than a speck of dust?

 

if i'm not anything, would someone show me how to do something right for once?
if i'm not something, would someone show me what it's like to not be ignored, what it's like to be noticed?
if i'm not ever going to be anybody, would someone please make it all stop?

 

 

Edited March 26, 2020 by C.O.N.Q.U.E.R.O.R

[Sacrifice 2,278]

Article Approved

Its okay, you can thank me later for not taking a complete month to approve this, rather just three weeks (Oopss!). 

Where do I start? the first poem features the worlds most beautiful feeling i.e love and that itself made it beautiful. Its definitely a fact, that once true love strikes you, you will love that someone to hell and back and overlook all their flaws. The poem you put forth was just magnificent.

Your second poem features sadness and grief which are both a part of life. From what I understood, you explained your feelings like an empty cup that is empty but yearns to be filled. We all at times feel like we are incomplete and we always yearn for that someone to complete us.

The third poem is close to my heart. I really like the last stanza where it says that if I am wrong, why does nobody correct me. 

Spoiler

 

 

 

 

 

Spoiler

• Minor grammar fixes.
• I capitalized 'I' everywhere because according to my understanding, when used separately, this alphabet should always be capitalized.
• I replaced "ignored" with overlooked in the last poems last stanza. I thought overlooked was more befitting than ignored. It goes with the flow.

 

[ILiveOnTheChatBox123 936]

Thank you for your beautiful collection;

It is a good think it passed the mod's inspection.

If only someone with the outlook of Poem #1, would meet someone of Poem #3

Their situation will likely resolve happily!

[Lose 881]

On 3/25/2020 at 7:31 PM, ILiveOnTheChatBox123 said:

Thank you for your beautiful collection;

It is a good think it passed the mod's inspection.

If only someone with the outlook of Poem #1, would meet someone of Poem #3

Their situation will likely resolve happily!

Alas, we can only imagine the horrors that would occur if it was a bad think

Chaos would ensure, pushing people over the brink.

Let's cheer our good thinking minds

Now I gotta get back to homework, doing the grind.

[ILiveOnTheChatBox123 936]

50 minutes ago, Lose said:

Alas, we can only imagine the horrors that would occur if it was a bad think

Chaos would ensure, pushing people over the brink.

Let's cheer our good thinking minds

Now I gotta get back to homework, doing the grind.

As back to your homework you go;

There is something I want to make sure you know.

When it comes to such ideas its not enough to just view it;

You have to put it into practice and do it.

Yes?

[Lose 881]

1 minute ago, ILiveOnTheChatBox123 said:

As back to your homework you go;

There is something I want to make sure you know.

When it comes to such ideas its not enough to just view it;

You have to put it into practice and do it.

Yes?

At last! It is done!

I have finished; time for fun!

Let's run around,

Jump around,

Have a great time without a frown!

[Guest Potato]

Magnificent! The first poem strook my heart like a bolt of lightning! Solely reminds me of someone special. Thank you. 

[ILiveOnTheChatBox123 936]

On 3/27/2020 at 6:41 PM, Lose said:

At last! It is done!

I have finished; time for fun!

Let's run around,

Jump around,

Have a great time without a frown!

While you are busy thinking of words to rhyme;

Or when you are jumping around and having a great time.

Make sure to include everyone;

Don't make them feel like the narrator of 'Someone'.