Ripping the battle field (story)

[Deathsfire 10]

well i know it has been a while sence i made a story so in this one i will make a special two sided story, this is my first attempt with two sidded so bear with me

 

Red team: As my mammoth thundered down the road I looked to my left over at the to see a three squad tank going for the flag, a two Hornets and a Dictator. As natural reaction I spedded over to the flag, as the hornet grabbed the flag it passed by my side, at first i thought they would get our flag sence my gun (ricochet) turns slowly, but an idea hit me I turned to the right knocking the tiny tank over the edge. Almost instantly they opened fire on me I returned firen then an allied mammoth came to my aid and we "crushed" those tanks, I looked over the edge and saw the hornet falling to his doom but out of shock his turrent was "looking" at me. Once he reached the no return mark he died leaving the flag behind his corps, I couldent help but feel bad for his mistake that costed his team to lose. After that mistake everyone on our team went full alert and we all went baserk and ripped the battle field tanking the flags which made us win I knew i should have felt happy but something told me not to feel it.

 

Blue team: Watching the gun fire rain over our team mates made me feel scared but we were winning 6/22, I came up with an idea, I typed in the chat box for 2 tanks to come so we can raid the enemy base. As soon as the message reached the line a fellow Hornet and Dictator came to the flag where i was at. I gave them the plan and we headed off not knowing what what about to unfold. Once we were down the long ramp i had a bad feeling that someone had seen us. I quickly told them somthing might be wrong, thay said ignor it, i tried. As we turned to corner the a red building next to the flag a nightmare was staring me in the face, a Mammoth. I turned on a nitro because I was out matched I grabbed the flag and zoomed by him, and just like that he turned his massive hull sending me over the edge as i fell backwords i saw my team mates being ripped apart by the reds. As i was starring up i saw the mamoth look down at me and Boom I died. Once i respawned i know thier was nothing i could have done because after that the red team went all out killing us taking the flag every second. They wouldent even give us a fighting chance. After the slaughter I looked at our score feeling bad that because of us we lost.

 

well please comment and tell me what your think, as i said before this was my first double story so please dont be mean about it :-) tanks for reading

 

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[chriswu 25]

When you're falling you can't "look" up. You can only look down.

[Deathsfire 10]

When you're falling you can't "look" up. You can only look down.

 

figure of speech the tanks hull was facing towards me the guy couldent see me but his hull was facing up

[russia102010 14]

Nice Death!

[Seemefly 4]

I don't want to read due to the BRIGHT COLORS!

[Deathsfire 10]

I don't want to read due to the BRIGHT COLORS!

 

ok then i will take the colors off i just put them so u dont get confused who is who

[Ranger7 75]

Good job dude!

[Deathsfire 10]

thanks guys