Other [Issue 25] Poem: Explosions

[Tommy60 406]

                  Explosions

 

 

I still remember day one.

You walked through the door, and found me there, just sitting.

You weren't sure what to make of me, if I would suit your needs or not.

You were skeptical,

Much like your mindset when you meet other people.

I knew that, and quite a few other things, as well.

 

You tried me out.

It took some time for me to get to the first one.

I was trying to find my way.

When I finally rounded a corner and arrived, you opened your drowsily closing eyes,and woke with a start.

You tried to get used to me, and like everyone else, you did, after the first few times.

You were conservative - I liked that, not dying much for crazy reasons and all.

We did well most of the time, and after a little while, you decide to treat me to some goodies.

You bought me things that made me better, and every time I changed a little on the outside,

I felt a little better on the inside- My character was developing, and I hoped it was in the direction you liked.

 

A few times had passed by both of us, we were spending a lot of time together now.

You never talked to me though - I don't think you know how good our conversations could have been.

I know all about you, from what you've been saying to others while I've been around.

Maybe it's better this way- at least I'm not scaring you.

 

I've been doing all the work, and you've been doing all the thinking.

I don't tire easily, so I don't mind, especially since you've still been giving me things.

I take the abuse, you take the responsibility.

I get the Explosions, you get the bans.

 

We played with each other for a long time;

We had seen each other through a lot of times, good and bad.

I guess the former outruled the latter, since I don't see you anymore.

I just stay here, in the same room you first found me.

This dust feels heavier than it looks.

 

But I wait for you.

Always hoping.

Always dreaming.

Of explosions.

 

 

 

Edited July 31, 2017 by Hexed

[Tofu 6,773]

1st and nice :D

[Guest Maserati]

quite cool

[nexx_mowarek 35]

Nice

[B.R.A.V.E 734]

Great Work :D

[lordmostafa 3,821]

I enjoyed it, it was nice :)

[snipe3000 678]

NICE! i like it

[jack2b111 130]

love it

[donut70 97]

Very well done, I really enjoyed this poem. keep up the great work.

[r_gamewizard0 18]

ok u r expecting a bad comment butt i really like this.

[iron-man_0007 73]

Dude Is this related to Five night's at freddy's song?
Cuz It is making me sound like that but Nice work :)

[iron-man_0007 73]

Please don't lock us away

We are not what you thinking

 

I like the song of Five nights at fredd's

[iron-man_0007 73]

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Edited September 18, 2014 by iron-man_0007

[Truthteller 4,204]

Well done, Nicely written Good read

[scralnax849 19]

Amazing poem, how come I don't see these in the newspaper anymore??? :(

[scralnax849 19]

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that my friend is deep.