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Hi Guys , this is my 1st TWG work !!

In this poem , i've tried my best to describe each of the reporters .

Hope you Enjoy ^_^

 

                                                              A Poem to Reporters

To keep the forum beautiful ,

the Admins are dutiful.

The First one is Lhamster ,

Who is the Main Topic Hackster.

The other one is like a Cannon ,

who is the Great Conan .

 

Lets go to the Arabian Edge ,

starting with JL6H.

The Reporters are Diplomatic ,

Like D_Y_N_A_M_I_C

The Edge ends with our multi-tasking producer,

I Introduce you he is the Law-Enforcer.

 

No Happenings of Violation ,

When MadDog21 is in Contemporation.

Articles wil be never nasty ,

Due to the Quality of Tommy 60.

 

People who are Chicken-free,

are surely enemies of Hogree .

You cannot imply the word Quarrel,

when there is Fen-Harel .

 

V-LOG Analysis flows like Canopy ,

given by the works of TKP .

The Team has a wonderful Gem,

He is none other than the Great Rem .

 

To Prove newspaper has the word justify ,

I Introduce you Mcmonkey25 .

Creativity has no end or block ,

You can see it in Works of Goldrock .

 

The Team has a fun bread and ninja ,

who are Kevred and Shedinja .

One of the members in Generalissimo hall ,

is our reporter Vikingsrall .

 

Ponyland status are given free ,

given by stratus a.k.a sonofchrysalis3

Action-Packed stories are Guaranteed ,

when the works are fully TNT'ed .

 

Tanki wars depend on kills .

To do that , you need Just.Skills

 

                                                                                                                                                  ~Thunderous

 

Source : Reporters

 

Suggestions are welcomed :D

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This is actually quite good - your English grammar and stuff could do with some work, but you can improve that with practice and experience. But the poem itself is pretty solid in terms of its structure (e.g. the syllables work), which is impressive considering poems aren't all that easy to write well. Nice one!

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Best thing I've seen in the Unofficial Paper

Aww.. you , Thanks Hog ^_^

 

how did you make a poem? because for me, it's impossible to make

I Make poems that rhyme well so you readers can get comfort , i do with simple words atmost due to the fact that i don't know hard words or more stylish words

It's a Natural thought that was in my mind to make this poem since i was devoted to the Newspaper Section more that anything else

 

Good job, Thunder.

Thank you , Rem :)

 

Nice

Thank you :)

 

This is actually quite good - your English grammar and stuff could do with some work, but you can improve that with practice and experience. But the poem itself is pretty solid in terms of its structure (e.g. the syllables work), which is impressive considering poems aren't all that easy to write well. Nice one!

Thanks for the suggestion bro , i am trying to improve by looking in the articles of reporters . Words Like Contemporation was never knewn to me before rem's garage analysis article . I Try on that part to learn some new words . Cheers :D

 

I... I have tears of utterly inexpressible emotions in my eyes right now... *sniff*! Very well done! Very... oh, *sniff*.... 

Nice to hear that . Atleast I Mentioned your homeland :P

 

 

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Turning back to this poem, I feel that this and Bigtimerush's guide to Midfielding are actually pretty good stuff - I even read them twice. Keep going like this, and the TWG will prosper. 

 

;)

Aw, thanks TNT, that really means alot to me.

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