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The Orc - Part 1


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In a hole in the ground, there lived a good orc. It was a dingy hole, not fit for worms, but it was home to the little orc, Marndo. Each day, he’d put on his hat, and trudge out to work in the mines of Frinelgy Bangofort, the richest orc in the country. Most of the orcs lived in filth, not caring for their own hygiene one bit, but Marndo was an exception. He kept his hole as clean and neat as the living conditions in Jerfeg allowed.

 

Marndo heard that Gerwin Lerh, Jerfeg’s orc king, wants to conquer a planet called Earth in which he can make his empire bigger and stronger. Marndo loved peace and tolerance; he’s not like the other greedy orcs, he’s different and that’s why most of the orcs hate him. He didn’t want Earth to be conquered by anyone – he wants it to be a separate free planet. He went to the king’s castle to tell him that but he refused. He got nervous and said:

 

“Did I ask you for your opinion? no, I don’t care what others say. This is my planet, my rules and I do what I want! Guards, get this annoying thing out of here.”

 

The guards grabbed Marndo and threw him outside, and have closed the castle doors. 

 

Marndo got mad so he went back home and slept, as it was night. 

 

The next day, Marndo woke up and went to work in the mines of Frinelgy Bangofort. His job was making steel which creates swords that are used for battling against any enemy. 

 

“Marndo, you got to find a way of getting to Earth” said Frinelgy Bangofort.

 

"What? I gotta find a way of getting to Earth!" the orc muttered. 

 

He managed to fuel the ship, using a pack in it. He then sped towards Earth, quickly escaping from space and into the atmosphere. But another problem - thunderstorms. He covered the ship and sped down, quickly landing right on one of the runways of the Los Angeles International Airport. He jumped out, and was met by shrieks from people, followed by investigators coming forward. 

 

"Who are you? Why have you come?" the investigators asked.

 

"I am here to warn you. The rest of my greedy species are about to invade you," Marndo said.

 

"Take him to the court. He's an intruder, and America will never allow that!" an investigator said.

 

"Stop right there, Tom. This is a conspiracy, and that orc is not involved. He came to warn us from danger, as he is saying," someone else said.

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I love how you based the introduction on The Hobbit! Great work!

Well, I really never knew that...

 

Thanks, btw (I wrote the second half :P)

 

And wait a second, Darren, you cut part of the story....

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wow darren but why not much posts .

Please don't revive old dead writing pieces that have been dead since the start of AWC, just for the sake of nothing. We don't need to hear nostalgia or looking into the past.

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Please don't revive old dead writing pieces that have been dead since the start of AWC, just for the sake of nothing. We don't need to hear nostalgia or looking into the past.

I actually missed out on this one. I never knew about this topic. Darren quit tho.

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