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For many days it occurred - window open, cups on the ground and such - until it got more hostile. The window and cups started having cracks on them. Ethan didn't think much of this, though.

 

He walked through a forest and past the road to get to work. On his way, he heard the crunching of leaves and snapping of twigs behind him. He span around to see nothing except a few trees and bushes. He had to work late that day in his office; that was his boss' idea, mind you. All of his employees were now in their homes, eating their warm, cooked food. 

 

Ever since his wife passed, Ethan was victim to the dark monster us humans called depression. He completed his work and got ready to get home. He packed up all his stuff, let out a sigh and went out of the building. During the walk home he couldn't help but feel paranoid. The streets were empty, shops were all closed and all the light came from streetlights. He was about to enter the forest which was completely dark... He entered the forest. He heard the same noises that he had heard early in the morning. Ethan spun around to once again, see nothing. He now turned his average walk into a steady jog. "It's just the lack of sleep" he thought "It's getting to me."

 

He stopped in his tracks when he heard a sound which sounded like metal clashing against wood. He looked back to see a silhouette of a figure, and he dropped his bag and ran in the opposite direction. The figure followed behind him. Ethan wasn't fast - the lack of sleep and the stress made him slow, weak and vulnerable both physically and mentally.

The man was faster than him. Ethan tripped on a hard stone and fell to the ground, knocking the remaining air out of his lungs. He looked back to see the figure. It was the most horrifying thing he had ever seen. The man was around 7 feet tall and had pale skin, his eyes were bordered in black and were emotionless. And his smile. Oh god, his smile was long, it was unnatural. It was impossibly long.

 

Ethan let out a terrified cry. But he was soon silenced by Jeff... The Killer.

 

"Breaking News," the reporter said, "Dead Body found in Pruffin Park, victim identified as Ethan Jacob. Reported to be stabbed to death and found dead at the scene. His friends say it was a possible suicide due to the passing of his wife, but this was dismissed when no knife or any object of the sort was found. Local police have concluded it was a murder, the seventh one in the town. Police are actively in search of this criminal. We will keep you updated on the case as it happens, Fox News."

 

"Shh... Just go to sleep..."

 

NOTE ; This is a story I did not create, I just found my own way of writing it. Will possibly write more in the near future, thank you for reading :)

Edited by GoldRock
Completely edited to correct all grammar and phrasing.
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Yes the story is different in the CP version of it , Jeff The Killer is my fav creepypasta and I could not resist writing once myself :)

 

Please credits to creepypasta
And one more on slenderman and smiles.jpg

Oh yes I will make more stories like this soon , hopefully I will come up with good ideas

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I've completely edited this article to correct all incorrect grammar/phrasing, without changing the content. It was mainly just all those commas and capital letters - only capitalise letters at the start of sentences, and use full stops! Apart from that, well-written story, I liked it  ^_^

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Thanks for giving me a little inspiration for my next story. Creepypastas look fun to write!

oh you have no idea , there are about 2000 creepypasta's to write!

Although the most famous creepypasta is Jeff The Killer

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Yeah. Jeff The Killer is a good creepypasta .maybe even a real one. Freaks me out sometimes thinking of that face so much that i can't sleep.and then i worry that hes gonna get me

Don't worry he isn't real  ^_^

According to the story he burned off his eyelids , This would surely blind him because if a living thing doesn't blink for too long it will go blind , also when he cut a smile into his cheeks they got infected

 

So even if he exists ... he's probably dead lol

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