Nightbreeze: Story #2

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Nightbreeze

 

Lost Temple. 

9/22/17; 2300 hours. 

 

 

I'm in Lost Temple, in the shadows. I'm still sad, and also ashamed that Jamie got captured. I will help him escape. I've been trying to find out what map they've put him in. I've tried the smaller maps, but that'd be too easy. I've been to Sandbox, Garder, Sandal, Island and Duel, but they haven't put him there. This is the first big map I've chosen. Lost Temple seems lost. There isn't anybody here. I decide to leave, because I've already been around the map several times. 

 

 

 

Dusseldorf. 

9/22/17; 2310 hours.

 

 

I decide to go to Dusseldorf because if I was a policeman, I would probably choose the map that can contain the most soldiers. I go into Dusseldorf, and start to move around. The corners don't have anything. I realize there will be more soldiers in the middle if they were to create a jail or want to protect him. I change into Railgun and Wasp as I head toward the middle. I stop at every house to make sure I don't run into soldiers. But almost every eight houses, I forget. It's not really all that bad until a few minutes later. There is a soldier that is using Mammoth and Shaft. I immediately turn into Titan and my Twins. We fight each other, I am going around him with my Twins, shooting him, while he turns his turret trying to catch me. His tank explodes. I beat him! Then, I realize what I've just done.

 

The other soldiers have probably heard my Twins. I change back into my Railgun-Wasp, and start to run. I see a Hornet with Railgun and the white paint. I shoot him. He dies. Another tank comes toward us. I shoot him. He shoots me. I shoot him once again - he dies. I go into the middle. There is a line of soldiers waiting for me. 'What a bunch of idiots' I think, as I get my Double Damage and shoot. Four of them go down, as five remain. They are the only things standing between me and Jamie. They all start to shoot me. I immediately get my Double Armour and get my Mammoth. Damn. I barely have any health left. I get my Repair Kit. I shoot everyone in the row, but I accidentally hit Jamie. I have now killed every soldier. "Jamie! Jamie!" He turns toward me. "Why'd ya hit me?" he asks. "I'm sorry," I told him, "It was an accident." Jamie says, "Why'd ya leave me. You swore you'd protect me. I told you all my secrets, about how my family left me. You said you'll be there for me, all the time. And then you left me. Dude, I just can't... Bye..." He turns around, and leaves me alone. My best friend has turned his back to me and has left me alone. There is a rustling behind me. I turn my turret to see three tanks with the black paint, and have Railgun and Hunter. They all have a red rose in their turret.

 

"We are the Night-Sisters."

 

That's all I hear; then everything fades into white. 

Edited September 25, 2017 by Hexed

[Hex 11,520]

Approved!

 

Just some minor edits to make the story seem more dramatic, loved every bit of it.

[Cancer 416]

I appreciate your effort 

[g-force 1,000]

This is probably going to be one of the best tanki novels.

[jalaj_003 121]

Very well done

[Possibility 282]

Stop stealing my frikking ideas!!!

 

K, joking, really nice story, and you used my night sister idea pretty well :P

Okay, tell me something about this that you enjoyed, and I'll use it in my next story. 

 

Anyway, congratulations on rankup. What, you rank up every 5 months? 

[Stratosphere 2,234]

Nice story and well formatted! Also congratulations on your 400th post! :)

Edited September 28, 2017 by Stratosphere

[bes146 281]

nicely written !!1

[bes146 281]

Stop stealing my frikking ideas!!!

 

K, joking, really nice story, and you used my night sister idea pretty well :P

congrats for rank up 

i also rank once in 5 months xD but im gonna rank after 4k xp meaning 3 days !

[Possibility 282]

Hey guys! Huge announcement! I just got a brand new HP laptop yesterday, 9/27/17. I'll be writing much more since I wont be having to fight my brother for control of my computer.  But yeah, you'll see much, mcuh more of me now!