Story [Issue 78] Fear the Nipah

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Fear the Nipah

 

 

 

It was 2071 when everything started. The Nipah virus was reasonably well contained within the continent of India, but governments of the world were still trying to develop a cure to fully eradicate the virus. They almost had the cure, but the bacteria got crossed with something and resulted in a hyper virus which could transmit itself from one person to another very quickly. And in extreme agony, the likes of which could only otherwise be achieved through unimaginable and unspeakable horrors. Eventually, the virus spread throughout the world, decimating world populations. As with all infections, there was a specific population of which was immune to the virus and wasn’t affected by it. 

 

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As Elizabeth drifted back to consciousness, she felt a migraine coming on. All around her was concrete with bent and rusted metal rods coming out, and lots of shattered glass. She tried to recall what had happened but all of it eluded her. Her memory was shortened to only her name and the name and face of a boy. She slowly got up and the pain started to kick into her stomach.

 

“Up and about now, princess! I want all of your credits now! Hand them over or else…” the man leveled a gun at Elizabeth’s head. Without even thinking, Elizabeth smashed her hand into his neck, shattering his spine. The man instantly collapsed. Elizabeth now felt even more afraid. Suddenly, she felt another hand on her shoulder. As she turned around, she noticed that it was the boy who she remembered. 

 

“I… I… I did this Steven. I don’t know how. It was almost swift as a machine, I just looked at him, and before I knew it, he collapsed to the floor.” Elizabeth mumbled. Steven held her hand and looked into her ocean-blue eyes.

 

“He’s gone, Elizabeth. You can’t save him. Quick! Helicopters are here, there’s no time for us to talk, we need to get out of here or else we’re dead.” Steven grabbed Elizabeth’s hand and sprinted. By the next morning, they managed to reach what was left of Detroit wholly exhausted. 

 

“One second Steven.” She clenched her head and yelled in pain. Suddenly she was in a room. The room was furnished with all sorts of technology, and a picture of Steven. She looked around, searching for the Detroit which had just been in front of her. She found a pistol in her hand. 

 

“Commander, we must go now. The immunes are here, and they’ve brought along two Wrecker cannons.”

 

“Two?! Alright, get the laser beams ready. We have to destroy them.” Elizabeth reached for a gun in her drawer. Then, she and the assistant left for the battle. Soon enough, they were firing away on the front lines. Then, a Wrecker Cannon shot at Elizabeth, but Rachel pushed Elizabeth down. From then on, all Elizabeth could feel was the left side of her flesh being seared off and Rachel’s charred body, until darkness took her. When she woke up, most of the upper left side of her body was covered in metal.

 

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“We’re sorry Elizabeth. You were going to die, the only way to save you was this. Luckily your brain, heart or left lung didn’t get severely damaged, but most of the bones were burned to ash when we removed them.” Then, Elizabeth felt more throbbing pain.

 

“Elizabeth, are you okay? You were screaming for the past 10 minutes.” the familiar voice of Steven said.

 

“I saw something, Steven.”

 

“Well, what was it?”

 

“I think I understood why-” Before Elizabeth could finish, a man punched Steven to the floor and pulled out a knife.

 

“If you don’t give me everything you have in the next minute, I’ll gut you alive, like a pig.” the man said. Steven wasn’t too muscular, so he didn’t move. The man raised the knife, and before he could bring it down, the blade was smashed into his body.

 

“I swear, I’m not doing this on purpose,” Elizabeth said. The man spat out blood as he crumpled to the floor in a puddle of blood. 

 

“It’s… okay” the man said, “Can you come closer, I have to tell you something.” Elizabeth inched closer to the man's face. 

 

“What?”

 

“Do me a favour by… dying!” The dying man raised his nails and scratched Elizabeth’s face. Elizabeth fell back in pain.

 

“What… Why did you do that?!”

 

“I have the virus. I was a dead man anyway. You just eased my pain. Afraid I can’t say the same to you though.” The man fell. Instantly, around seven more men came near Elizabeth. Steven was still in pain.

 

“Please! You don’t understand! Don’t attack me. I don’t want you to die!” A tall and pale man reached pulled out his gun pointed at Steven. Steven just looked at the pistol and saw his life flash before his eyes before hearing a gunshot. Soon, he saw Elizabeth standing in front of him.

 

“What?! How are you still alive? I shot you in the face!”

 

“Oh. That was what happened!” Elizabeth exclaimed and smiled at the men. She got up and repeatedly punched one before throwing him at a small stall. Still, another tried to grab her neck, before getting elbowed in the face and then getting hit by Elizabeth’s knee. Soon enough, all of the men were incapacitated or dead. Elizabeth almost collapsed but managed to stop herself from collapsing.

 

“Elizabeth! No!”

 

“I’m fine Steven!”

 

“No, you’re not. Someone who had the Nipah virus scratched you. Good God no!” Steven put his hands on his face in exhaustion and stress.

 

“How long do the symptoms take to appear?!” Elizabeth yelled, scared as ever.

 

“They should already have! Unless you’re…”

 

“Immune?”

 

“Yup.”

 

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Sounds like Part 1. Will we get more?

 

Anyways. Good story!

[C.O.N.Q.U.E.R.O.R 3,845]

Feels suspiciously like the Maze Runner...

[LOLKILLERTOTHEDEATH 1,921]

Feels suspiciously like the Maze Runner...

I figured someone might say that. Nevertheless, I don't intend to go anywhere near Maze Runner.

[P.4.R.K.O.U.R 329]

Lol imagine entering a juggernaut battle and it reads on top:

Nipah has claimed its first victim!

[cosmicdestructor 41]

 

It was 2071 when everything started. The Nipah virus was reasonably well contained within the continent of India, but governments of the world were still trying to develop a cure to fully eradicate the virus. They almost had the cure, but the bacteria got crossed with something and resulted in a hyper virus which could transmit itself from one person to another very quickly.

So apparently some BACTERIA got crossed with something and a hyper VIRUS was produced...

You might want to change that...

Good story overall, has potential as a creepypasta...

[fordmustang12345 3,910]

Feels suspiciously like the Maze Runner...

true..... Only thing is the disease in the Mazer Runner was actually intentional, but the government that released it never thought it would get as bad as it did being it mutated

[C.O.N.Q.U.E.R.O.R 3,845]

true..... Only thing is the disease in the Mazer Runner was actually intentional, but the government that released it never thought it would get as bad as it did being it mutated

spoiler alert xd

[fordmustang12345 3,910]

spoiler alert xd

oh c'mon, this long after the books have been released anyone that want to read em should have by now :P and yeah that shocked the hell out of me when I read the prequel Edited September 13, 2018 by fordmustang12345