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tweezers replied to Flexoo in Writers' Corner
Back in my day, payment for good articles was to not be locked in the SockRoom™. I spent a lot of time in there. -
Ayyyyyy I knew it! And nah, since you actually wrote the whole story it's all cool :P
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You wouldn't happen to read Calvin and Hobbes, would you?
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Loved the conversations!
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Thanks :D finish your story too nubmult
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The pen is willing, but the mind...is not.
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Skateboards covered in stickers, shearing paint off railings. Cans rattling in hands, colours blossoming on walls. Lanyards dangling from keys, engines howling into the night. Laces trailing from hi-tops, locomotive lights illuminating faces in tunnels. A collection of souls, appearing seemingly at random, taking over a city, taking back a city, enshrouded by darkness. Keyboards dusted with crumbs, clicking as symbols appear on screens. Papers, slowly curling, sighing as they are stacked on one another. Books covered in ink, whispering as hands leaf through them. Fabric, coloured in hues unknown, stretching as it is fitted. A collection of souls, appearing on schedule, taken by a city, giving up to a city, enslaved by light. A man walks down a street lit entirely by neon signs. He wears a suit, and carries a briefcase. A woman walks down an alley populated by A/C units and empty boxes. She wears a business jacket and has a handbag on her shoulder. He walks onwards. She turns left. They collide. Awkward apologies. Brushing of shoulders. Sidesteps, and onward motion. But it is too late. They know. They know. It’s in the way the man’s briefcase rattled when it fell to the pavement. It’s in the way that the woman’s handbag did the same. It’s in the way that they’ve both memorized the timetable of the police patrols roaming the streets, and have timed their respective journeys with the gaps between them. A hidden smile spreads across both of their faces as they keep walking. Two walls bleed starbursts of colours behind them. The same goes for the women who cross each other in a car park, and recognize the lanyards emblazoned with performance logos clutched in each others hands. A scent of burnt rubber and fuel permeates the air around them. Two young men in their office cafeteria take note of the other’s tattered shoes and light stance. In their cubicles, identical board stickers colour the walls. A man standing on a subway platform notices the way a woman on the opposite platform peers off it and subconsciously measures the distance from the edge to the track. At night, the tunnels come alive to the light of their fluorescent lights. Their jagged edges call out to each other, creating a partnership unlike any other. Colours, speed, music, adrenaline; they form a key that unlocks the night and allows their souls to step through, out into the freedom of the darkness. Within those souls is held what unites them all. Spirit.
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RFL to Rafael. At least, I think so :ph34r:
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SQUEEEEEEEEEEEEE name puns!
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...not drive them? cri
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Because I is choppy writer :P
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But relative speed and direction at the last point of contact sounds so much cooler... Besides, to me at least, velocity makes it sound a lot faster than it actually is.
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Loved the technical analysis!
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Thankee! I'm going to start a collection of those stories one day. And yeah, lumpily is a word, although I think US spellcheckers disagree. :wub: Thanks for the kind words!