I really like this one, considering I'm a Percy Jackson fan. Nice job.

Thanks, but after seeing LaserSharks second post, I've decided to stop trying. Maybe another contest...

I dont have any advanced software so I used paint and I suck at hand drawings so this is the best I could do. :(

My Entry: (or should I say Mine Entry)

Who's going to judge this contest, Night-Sisters or Zenith101?

The Story of Smoky In the year 1738, when Tanki was created, there was a turret by the name of The Fear Machine. It was created by the Devs, an ancient tribe, and was only usable by the Devs. It could kill even a M4 Mammoth with a shield on in 1 shot. The Devs ruled the Tankiverse. The players needed something to counter this machine. So they invented firebird. It was powerful and it could destroy those with Fear Machine, if they could get close enough. The Devs learned to stay away. So the players got together once more. They needed something that had range so it could destroy tanks without having to get close. They came up with a turret, shorter then Fear Machine, but with a fair amount of damage. But once again the Devs learned to stay far away, to snipe the poor souls. The players got together again to see what they could do. They did not have enough crystals to create another turret but they did have enough to improve what they had. So the players came together once again, they thought of many good ideas, but none were good enough. Then an elder stood up to speak. He was an orange and he was very stressed (StressedOrange, my great-great-great-great grandfather). He thought that if they could knock off the aims of the Devs, they would have a better chance. And so, with the last of their crystals, the players added an impact force to Smoky. It could now knock the aim off any sniper, only if one could hit the corner of the tank. After a good two years of craftsmanship, the new Smoky was ready. All it needed now was a cheeseburger for the core. But cheeseburgers were not invented then so they had to make do with some uncooked pasta. It did more damage, had a new feature of critical damage and it had a massive impact force. Before setting off again, the players trained hard to improve their aim, to be sneakier, and most importantly to knock the Devs aim off. Anyway, they were ready. So off they went, and no Fear Machine ever found its target again as long as a Smoky was nearby. It did well but not well enough to stop the Devs. If only they had a cheeseburger… And in 1926, when Lionel Sternberger invented the cheeseburger, they had one. This was the creation of the mighty SmokyXT which belonged to StressedKiwi (my grandfather). And so off he went with his SmokyXT and after a long, grueling and bloody battle, the Devs kneeled down before him in defeat, and handed over the Fear Machine to ANoLongerStressedKiwi so that he would spare the rest of their kind. He took the Fear Machine, reduced its damage, changed its name to Railgun, mass produced it and became rich. Only a fraction of his fortune remains today, in my possession, a mere 582 crystals. But it does not matter how poor I am, or how poor I will stay unless if I win this contest but it was very important I pass this story on.

This is my entry.