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    [AR] Arabian Players

    الله يرحمه ويجعل مثواه الجنه
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    A love story (Part 1)

    Hello reader, First of all, I'm writing this essay because I want to use English language and improve my understanding in the English language. Okay, I'm an eighteen year old student from Palestine. I've been learning English for about two to three years. My favorite hobby is learning English and listening to music. By the way, I forgot to mention that I'm in eleventh grade. Of course, I'm going to brag that I'm the best student in my class. Now time to talk about my family. I have got a brother he's eleven years old and he's in fourth grade. After school he's going to church because he prepares for the first communion. Basically I would like to write something about my mother's job, but I don't know where my mother works, but our relationship is pretty good. Even though, I didn't write something special, I don't know what I could write more. Besides, I had to use my dictionary four times while I was writing this essay because I forgot some words. Please assess me and let me know what do you think about this small essay. I'm just curious. Have a awesome day. I am posting a story on this blog for you all. This story is a little different from the previous ones; I hope you’ll like it! Once upon a time, somewhere in a town, there were two friends named Jake and Jack. They both knew each other from their childhood and their families were close to each other too. Jake and Jack both went to the same school, they both had same kind of backpacks, both had same kind of likes and dislikes. They both were kind of brothers from another mothers. They both used to get same type of grades in exams. They were inseparable. The one day, Jake went to a family trip for a week, so he had to stay away from Jack. When he returned ,Jack went to meet him. On his way to Jake’s home, he saw a girl who was probably of the same age but was new to the town, so he didn’t knew her. He just smiled at her and moved on. The girl smiled back at him formally as she wanted to make friends in this new place. She was fair with black hair and golden strips, just a bit shorter than Jack. She was a modern type of girl and used to wear all types of brands. Jack reached to Jake’s house and gave a bro-fist. They both had a walk for an hour and talked about the stuff happened when Jake wasn’t in the town. Jack didn’t mentioned the new girl because he didn’t thought it was necessary. Both had the usual talks and then went back to their home. Then on another day, Jack got the news that the girl which he saw the other day joined the same school they both used to study in. He found out that her name was Natasha. That day, Natasha came into the classroom and was trying to figure out where to sit. So randomly or not no one knows why, she sat next to Jack and Jake. Jack told her that he saw her that day to which she remembered and nodded. Jake asked Jack about her so he explained him that he saw her the day he came to meet Jake. This happened for a few days and Jack became friends with Natasha. They both started to talk on Facebook. She used to sit with Jack. Jake was happy to know that Jack liked Natasha and wanted to get close to her. So he suggested to be friends for some more days and try to get to know her as much as possible. So Jack started to go out with Natasha everyday. They started sharing 'good morning messages' with each other. The three of them used to go to school together. They started sharing their homework, their lunch, their seats, and even the time Jack used to spend with Jake. ~To be continued~
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