Guide [Issue 5] All You Need To Be a Pro - Community

[Lhamster 4,081]

Hardly anything new; I say that because there are no new toics by chriswu' date=' just series topics.[/quote']

 

So you don't like series? I guess you just read the first Harry Potter and LOTR then. :roll: The artiles aren't the same, they just have the same theme.

 

Anyway, I really like the article Chris.

[Meliora 1,652]

Listen, I didn't ask for the whole newspaper team to come and criticise me. I say ONE negative comment, and look. How on earth am I supposed to give you feedback? If all you want are good comments you should say and so we can all lie to you, OK? Because it seems like you hate negative feedback. I just don't like chriswu's series, and, as chriswu or whatever that guy said, I am just another commenter in your 'pool' or whatever he said. Now, if I am just a 'random person' to you that just happened to give a negative comment, why are you all being such hujlas? As I was saying, chriswu's series topics seem to drone on and on. @Lhamster, you do not know me properly, my age nor my personality. So, you do not know whether I even LIKE HP or Lord Of The Rings. In this case I do, but those are proper books written by proper, experienced authors.

[chriswu 25]

Why do you complain about getting responses from the staff, whom you're complaining to? Your "feedback" was harsh and superlative enough to generate an equal and opposite response.

 

Now, all in good favor, would you please elaborate on how you think my articles "drone on and on?" I don't have any problem with you thinking so; everyone is welcome to voice their opinions, and as reporters, we should seek to please the audience while maintaining professional integrity.

[Meliora 1,652]

Chriswu, I was only complaining anout YOU! See, and that's where the rest of the team go hen-pecking! I did not ask any of them to come and be such hajlas! They just took it in themselves to come and interfere. Now, my understanding is that you don't see each other's topics until release date. If so how can your buddies defend you?

[chriswu 25]

Chriswu' date=' I was only complaining anout YOU! See, and that's where the rest of the team go hen-pecking! I did not ask any of them to come and be such hajlas! They just took it in themselves to come and interfere. Now, my understanding is that you don't see each other's topics until release date. If so how can your buddies defend you?[/quote']

 

If you're only complaining about ME, then that isn't feedback. If you won't kindly and politely send meaningful feedback, you're wasting my time. We can all see each other's work. I don't even know what your problem is. I asked for your elaboration, and you can't even give me a coherent answer. Maybe it was for the best you weren't chosen as the next reporter instead of Ranger.

 

Also, don't go on and try to dismiss my fellow reporters. I really appreciate their support. Their support means a lot more to me than your criticisms, which lack any form of cogency whatsoever. I don't understand why you can't just read the material, instead of looking at the title. Also, just out of curiosity, do I know you on any alternate accounts? I can't pinpoint the reason you have this issue with my series, and not any of the other series in the newspaper. I expect this conversation to be over, as you don't have anything useful. If you have further comments, pm me.

[Meliora 1,652]

OK, maybe I'm not complaining about you, but your topics, which ARE written by you, yes? Right, you want me to elaborate properly?

Boring: Since they all have the same theme, and in this issue you (YOU) have only done series topics, it becomes quite predictable what is going to happen if, as you said in your above post, there is always a resolution. The start of your series topics (the very first ones) have the most enthusiasm, a brand new idea from the great chriswu, but after that, we have two pathways.

1. You struggle to find another topic for your series.

2. You do an article on something predictable (eg. Hulls after guns, or the middle of a story).

What happens when they happen:

1. Since you only just managed to find a topic to write on, it lacks elaboration (eg. you do not describe everything in detail).

2. Everyone knows what we will see even before the release date.

Solution: Think of many, many new topics beforehand, and if it is too much do only one series.

This is the last time I'm giving any feedback here in this forum. You can't say something negative without anyone (not always you) coming and criticising you. Bringing in Ranger v Me v No. 3, let me tell you something. Probably the most likely reason I didn't get in was because my story was less on-topic, but the obvious and easiest thing to do would have been a beginner 'growing up', but since I already half-did that in my public entry, I didn't want to look 'out of ideas', as you do to me.

I hope you understand my problem now.

[Lhamster 4,081]

and in this issue you (YOU) have only done series topics

 

http://forum.tankionline.com/posts/list/148830.page

http://forum.tankionline.com/posts/list/148971.page

http://forum.tankionline.com/posts/list/146998.page

http://forum.tankionline.com/posts/list/149673.page

 

All Series.... :roll:

[chriswu 25]

Bringing in Ranger v Me v No. 3, let me tell you something. Probably the most likely reason I didn't get in was because my story was less on-topic, but the obvious and easiest thing to do would have been a beginner 'growing up', but since I already half-did that in my public entry, I didn't want to look 'out of ideas', as you do to me.

I hope you understand my problem now.

 

Selena, you make me laugh. I KNOW why we didn't choose you, because it was me, Tommy, skitee, Lhamster, conan, and Les all voting for the best article. While you can guess at why you weren't picked, we reporters in our Newspaper Material forum know exactly why, and we all had a say in who is and isn't the next reporter.

 

Oops! So sorry! It looks like you don't have permission to view that forum! :-o

[Meliora 1,652]

Urchins :roll:. You think that you are older than me, correct? Most likely you are wrong, so learn to use respect.

[chriswu 25]

Urchins :roll:. You think that you are older than me' date=' correct? Mos likely you are wrong, so learn to use respect.[/quote']

 

HichigoShiro gotta take the credits for this one!! Thank you Hichy!! You are such an inspiration to me, and such a wonderful resource! I praise your wit and ingenuity in finding just the right response for every situation!!!

 

 

:lol:

[Meliora 1,652]

No wonder no one likes you.

[Lhamster 4,081]

Bruce voted for best article as well. And, for the record, I like Chris, otherwise I wouldn't be in his clan.

[chriswu 25]

Urchins :roll:. You think that you are older than me' date=' correct? Mos likely you are wrong, so learn to use respect.[/quote']

 

DEAREST Selena12121,

 

I would so LOVE to tell your WISE, AGED, SAGACIOUS intellect that I really don't know how OLD you are. I know you are "MOS LIKELY" older than I am,

but your age doesn't show when you post your comments, nor does it factor into the impressions people get of you. How about if you tell us your age, so we can respect you better?

 

SINCERELY,

 

chriswu

[Meliora 1,652]

Bruce voted for best article as well. And' date=' for the record, I like Chris, otherwise I wouldn't be in his clan.[/quote']

 

I was not talking to you, AGAIN! Now, when I go onto server two when most English people are on, they're saying 'I want to chop off chriswu's head', or 'chriswu thinks his clan is so perfect'. This is the exact image I am getting of you. And, it is true. I usually don't believe that stuff, but it has proven itself.

Now, @whatever chriswu said, you are proving yourself to be a model person, aren't you? If I had to pick it would be either Tommy60 or skitee, probably the latter.

[Tommy60 406]

Don't feed the troll, guys.

[Meliora 1,652]

Don't feed the troll' date=' guys.[/quote']

 

You will feel very sorry soon, wait.

[FederalBureauFBI 2,881]

The following in-game activities are not permitted:

Are personal conversations (use PM for private discussions).

[Fjelstad1678 186]

Don't feed the troll' date=' guys.[/quote']

 

You will feel very sorry soon, wait.

La de da dum.... Ehem, oh! Is that my que or.... Wait no its Tommy60. Nevermind. Back under the bridge.

[Meliora 1,652]

Ты нуб, идти, ок?

You are not wanted.

[FederalBureauFBI 2,881]

Сел, да ладно? :mrgreen:

[Meliora 1,652]

Sel, yes ...

All I understood ^.

We're not supposed to speak Russian here, but while I wait I guess it can't do me any harm.

[chriswu 25]

Well, at least my article was able to generate a good demonstration of its content in action. Selena, again, I tell you: PM me if you want to talk the way you've been doing so far.

 

Thanks everyone for bearing with us. :-)

[FederalBureauFBI 2,881]

I personally like the article very much. :thumbup: Good job, Chris!

Selena can post her opinions, she can post whatever she wants (no Rule-breaking).

Now guys, really, please stop those personal discussions.Use the PM.

[yonsneg 0]

That is not constructive criticism, it is just criticism, but how I want him to improve?

And, if you are (yes I know you're not, but it's English) accusing me of being a troll, then there is absolutely no freedom of opinion here. I don't think there's anything good about the article apart from the grammar and punctuation being spot on.

Stop doing series things and do new stuff instead, because it seems like he has run out of ideas.

I thought you would have understood the word boring, but oh well. Anyway, there is nothing interesting, a new story or something would be interesting, not knowing what we'd see, instead of thinking all the time before every issue 'Oh, I bet it's gonna be another 'All You Need' thing, we've had enough of those already.' Hardly anything new; I say that because there are no new toics by chriswu, just series topics.

So try you to write something new and interesting or shut up!

[Lhamster 4,081]

Bruce voted for best article as well. And' date=' for the record, I like Chris, otherwise I wouldn't be in his clan.[/quote']

 

I was not talking to you, AGAIN! Now, when I go onto server two when most English people are on, they're saying 'I want to chop off chriswu's head', or 'chriswu thinks his clan is so perfect'. This is the exact image I am getting of you. And, it is true. I usually don't believe that stuff, but it has proven itself.

Now, @whatever chriswu said, you are proving yourself to be a model person, aren't you? If I had to pick it would be either Tommy60 or skitee, probably the latter.

 

Where is the rofl emote? JSYK, Skitee is also in Chriswu's clan. :mrgreen: And I highly doubt they are saying that.