Please Give Feedback

[ThisDictator 23]

Hi,

I was playing around with photoshop today and I was making a banner for a clan i'm gonna make when I reach 1st lt. I know that is a long time away, but it's fun to make. Please give me feedback.

 

Edited March 28, 2013 by ThisDictator

[SilentShadow 104]

It is a very good basis, but the tanks could use some work, for example don't have them so close together, and try to crop them more closely (pertaining to the "crop lines")

 

It is also quite simple, a little bit of flair could go a long way (for example, a bit more color in the background, or perhaps other decorations)

 

Other than that, it is a good start, congratulations. ^_^

Edited March 28, 2013 by SilentShadow

[slash1524 74]

i don't know what to say.

It is not bad.

[MONKBLOB 33]

It's pretty good, i really like the title. But the outline of the tanks is very wonky. Also add a bit more colour to the background.

[ThisDictator 23]

It is a very good basis, but the tanks could use some work, for example don't have them so close together, and try to crop them more closely (pertaining to the "crop lines")

 

It is also quite simple, a little bit of flair could go a long way (for example, a bit more color in the background, or perhaps other decorations)

 

Other than that, it is a good start, congratulations. ^_^

Thanks for the feedback. Yeah, one of the things I was unsure about was the tank cropping. I'll put a bit more effort in to that next time :)

It's pretty good, i really like the title. But the outline of the tanks is very wonky. Also add a bit more colour to the background.

Thanks again. I agree, changing it now :)

[SpreadLoveNotHate 374]

Looks amazing!

[Frost.Angel 221]

Its cool, but Armageddon clan already exists :rolleyes:

[ThisDictator 23]

Its cool, but Armageddon clan already exists :rolleyes:

Oh really... darn. Thanks though.