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Dr.Twins, I wanted you to actually use Twins! lol! I thought it was a great guide. I loved the little "aiming" spots. Your tips were the only ones that were neccessary, good job. +1 on that guide.

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Before you absolutely hate me, remember this is a friendly critique and is not made for being offensive. I feel that your voice was very clear. In my opinion, those tips were a little....dumb, and you didn't really show skill with the turret you were using. You did make a guide, unlike canadarules, but I don't think you'll be the winning one. For lighter hulls, you only need a third, then run away and take cover. For Medium, which actually includes Dictator, you only need half, and for bigger, only Titan and Mammoth, you need three-fourths, then run behind a wall. You didn't really show anything against Smoky or Twins and for Thunder, you have to ACT like you're out of power and run up to them. Let them shoot you, then burn, burn, and burn. To me, it acted like you didn't care about if he self-destructs, maybe you do, but you didn't show it at all. 1 kill is very important when they all rack up. Also, at times it felt quite pointless, like when you were at Ping-pong, it's really small, and you didn't need to run around the whole map without saying anything making it boring for the audience. There were other/better ways you could've shown the shoot-through-tanks effect. You could've done it in a real-battle situation and that helps the audience know what kind of situation they'll get in to show that skill and it would help them more. This is one audience member's opinion, not trying to mean to make it offense. Thank-you for putting time into it, but it could've been better.

Have you ever heard the term "If you don't have anything nice to say then don't say anything at all"? You say it's not meant to be offensive but it was very offensive... Mind you that I did this all in a day and because it was due within 2 days and I needed to get it up. I didn't have time to go get actual battle footage that was good of each of these examples... considering there were 12 different examples and, again, I only had a DAY. Also, did you notice that I wrote no hate like 5 times at the bottom of my post? It kind of indicates that I wasn't really asking for any hate yet you delivered it anyways. Good work there! The only opinion I care about is the developers'. Lastly, I don't need you to point out to me that I won't win. I spent a day working on this put I put in a lot of my effort into it pretty sure that I wouldn't win. I don't win these sort of things but I did it anyway because my friends urged me to do it saying 'I could have a chance'.

Thank you for saying my voice sounded fine, (did you notice how i didn't hyphenate "Thank You"?) but your opinion won't be taken into consideration because I DIDN'T ASK FOR IT.

Edited by lizerdgirl108

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That's not offensive, it was constructive criticism... and if you can't handle that; you will never improve.

You have some decent tips, but the video didn't really showed it; it might work out different in real battles.

Edited by splitterpoint

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Before you absolutely hate me, remember this is a friendly critique and is not made for being offensive. I feel that your voice was very clear. In my opinion, those tips were a little....dumb, and you didn't really show skill with the turret you were using. You did make a guide, unlike canadarules, but I don't think you'll be the winning one. For lighter hulls, you only need a third, then run away and take cover. For Medium, which actually includes Dictator, you only need half, and for bigger, only Titan and Mammoth, you need three-fourths, then run behind a wall. You didn't really show anything against Smoky or Twins and for Thunder, you have to ACT like you're out of power and run up to them. Let them shoot you, then burn, burn, and burn. To me, it acted like you didn't care about if he self-destructs, maybe you do, but you didn't show it at all. 1 kill is very important when they all rack up. Also, at times it felt quite pointless, like when you were at Ping-pong, it's really small, and you didn't need to run around the whole map without saying anything making it boring for the audience. There were other/better ways you could've shown the shoot-through-tanks effect. You could've done it in a real-battle situation and that helps the audience know what kind of situation they'll get in to show that skill and it would help them more. This is one audience member's opinion, not trying to mean to make it offense. Thank-you for putting time into it, but it could've been better.

 

This is a great critique; I say thank you on his behalf.

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That's not offensive, it was constructive criticism... and if you can't handle that; you will never improve.

You have some decent tips, but the video didn't really showed it; it might work out different in real battles.

I understand... and I take constructive criticism if I want it... I would have asked as SV.ENS.TWAN did above. Also, as I stated before I didn't have any time to get the footage in real battles. Not to mention I do not plan on doing another contest video therefore I don't need or want the constructive criticism.

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Not bad lizerdgirl, it could have been better, but not bad. I think I may buy firebird. :) Your voice sounds fine too.

I do find him better than my version; his english was perfect in combination with decent video.

Seriously, don't worry. I think you have this one in the bag. But thank you. ^_^ I don't really like my voice, but I guess everybody feels that way ;)

 

Posted my video, what do you guys think about it?

Very good. I still think splitterpoint's is the best Smoky, but hopefully you and I can get chosen as extras :lol:

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Have you ever heard the term "If you don't have anything nice to say then don't say anything at all"?

Yes, I felt it was nice that I did that.

You say it's not meant to be offensive but it was very offensive...

It was? It certainly wasn't meant for it. Sorry that I didn't know you were very sensitive.

Mind you that I did this all in a day and because it was due within 2 days and I needed to get it up. I didn't have time to go get actual battle footage that was good of each of these examples... considering there were 12 different examples and, again, I only had a DAY.

You had 2 days, and you could've put more time into this. When I look at these videos, I really expect to see a guide, and a good one that someone worked hard on. I believe you worked hard, just not enough so that you would really excel.

Also, did you notice that I wrote no hate like 5 times at the bottom of my post? It kind of indicates that I wasn't really asking for any hate yet you delivered it anyways. Good work there!

I did see that, and I listened to it. Oh, and your welcome for not hating your video. Also, you can't prevent others to not hate your video, if it was bad. Splitterpoint or Reiki could've said "no hate" because no one hated theirs at all. Not saying yours was bad, but I was listening to what you said at the bottom.

Lastly, I don't need you to point out to me that I won't win.

Never said you wouldn't, look what I said...

I don't think you'll be the winning one.

 

I spent a day working on this put I put in a lot of my effort into it pretty sure that I wouldn't win. I don't win these sort of things but I did it anyway because my friends urged me to do it saying 'I could have a chance'.

Thank-you for putting time into it, but it could've been better.

 

 

Thank you for saying my voice sounded fine, (did you notice how i didn't hyphenate "Thank You"?)

Your welcome, and I don't care....

Your opinion won't be taken into consideration because I DIDN'T ASK FOR IT.

If you can't handle that; you will never improve.

Edited by jonathanjoseph

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May i remind you tankman,

 

4. The video guide should be supported by a voice commentary in any language but with english sub-titles.

 

All those robotic voices, just does not work :)))

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The Rules state 5:00 minutes long video. Remember that Devs will be judging the videos so you might be carefull in those details :)

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No one has done a vid on Ricochet, ya know..

 

Well, I don't think so anyways.

Edited by Remaine

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guys how much more time is left for the contest . like how many hours more . 5 , 6 , 7 ,8 how many more hours are left ? please help me .

You have 3 hours and 13 minutes from the time of this post. EDIT: Nevermind, it said the "fourth of June" and since this is an English contest, I'm guessing it means UTC +0. Therefore, from the time of this post, you have 7 hours and 10 minutes. (according to my computer time)

Can i upload the video tomorrow?

Nope, the topic will be closed tomorrow Edited by jonathanjoseph

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