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In background some city (buildings etc), but on the other side two weird effects - desert dust + fire.

Usually dust is going behind the vehicle (lil from sides), but surely not in front of it. And why was there need of putting fire with low opacity, which made it look totally fake?

 

You do have great skills, no doubt, but you don't have good logic. Try to improve these things. :) Good luck.

 

 

 

Before some haters come to open my head, I want to let you know that I'm just giving you a friendly advice. Critics usually help people to improve, so take it in a positive way.

 

 

Thanks Mia! I will try my best next time :)

I love feedback & tips to improve my work from people (like you)

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CAN ANYBODY HELP ME WITH MY CLAN CREATIVITY AS I DONT KNOW HOW TO APPLY CREATIVITY ON THE PAGE ... IT IS NEW CLAN WHICH WAS APPROVED YESTERDAY .

I WOULD BE GLAD IF SOME ONE WOULD COME FORWARD .

IF YES , PM ME

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CAN ANYBODY HELP ME WITH MY CLAN CREATIVITY AS I DONT KNOW HOW TO APPLY CREATIVITY ON THE PAGE ... IT IS NEW CLAN WHICH WAS APPROVED YESTERDAY .

I WOULD BE GLAD IF SOME ONE WOULD COME FORWARD .

IF YES , PM ME

I have to things to say- 1. Stop shouting 2. Since you're asking for a favor obviously you should be the one to send Pm.

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I think you made background too dark, I know its night but in real world its not that dark. Just keep as it is :)

And you only made left blue light coming from only 1 beam (the front light) ;)

Decrease the opacity of railgun shadow on hornet. 

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I think you made background too dark, I know its night but in real world its not that dark. Just keep as it is :)

And you only made left blue light coming from only 1 beam (the front light) ;)

Decrease the opacity of railgun shadow on hornet. 

Thank you for your Feedback.

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Before some haters come to open my head, I want to let you know that I'm just giving you a friendly advice. Critics usually help people to improve, so take it in a positive way.

 

 

wait does this mean you are having brain surgey ?

idk what else you would have your head opened for...  eeeeeee

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wait does this mean you are having brain surgey ?

idk what else you would have your head opened for...  eeeeeee

Feels exactly like that when some people start talking.

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Good shadows, Whats with the halftone pattern, you making a comic?, Text is rather good, if you like that western bar signs..., 

Never knew of a eclipe moon before.. Always thought they were round..., Whats with the blurred out background? Blur is fine, but not ATOMIC blur! :lol:

*Hint* Its criticism.  :ph34r:

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