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Restart from basics please... painting an entire pic is not an easy task. The most blatant mistake is that nothing has any texture.

If you want me to start from the beginning, then say how your "Pro" expertise is.What's wrong with the textures I've thoroughly sketched nothing missing.

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not all that bad but still better than before, you really wana avoid making those black strokes all over your work, makes it way too detailed, as in the using topaz clean at its maximum ughh, you wana pay attention towards what tone you pick to color, you wana use dark tones for the ares where much light wont fall, brighter tones where the light hits directly, and median tones where its equally balanced, a good example of this would  be:
 

 
 
 
 
^Deretre
 

 
see how dark tones and light tones of the same colors are used, 
as well heres one of my psd of one of my TAT work, im sure youll get to know a thing or two ive included color tones which ive used in the image
 

 
will put the link to psd in a day or two, nets' slow 
 
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If you want me to start from the beginning, then say how your "Pro" expertise is.What's wrong with the textures I've thoroughly sketched nothing missing.

Most noticeable is that the entire picture is 2D. It looks like someone took a paint bucket tool and splashed it everywhere. Colours in real life are not entirely solid, there are light reflections, shadows, blur, and much more that makes an edit look 3D.

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What's the point of hiding the name? They both are ur accounts, you're usine Chrome to join the battle and the client to take the screen. xddd

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What's the point of hiding the name? They both are ur accounts, you're usine Chrome to join the battle and the client to take the screen. xddd

thats my sister's acc and she wont allow me to put her name here and there or her account details. idk why she also dont wanna show her name to anybody ._.

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