Contest [Issue 17] Double Stanza

[doughnut2100 763]

Tanki Online-

 

 

I love tanki its so fun

Im always happy if I won

I like to play it all the time

While im playing I eat some lime

 

I like it when they add new things

I just wish I had some wings!

I get excited with a crystal box

Im not kidding it really rocks!

 

This poem is about to end

So now this poem I will send

I really love tanki I really love it

I love it a lot not just a bit!

[clipper1212 0]

Frezee

When I am born again and I see a tanki Hornet M3 with Frezee ever think of attacking the more I see him with enough items not see the
Time to kill him and rid me of that terrible nightmare I was.

Only wasp and twins he was fast and equepado min to kill more thought fast and tried to get something from the back and kills him.

He spent about 2 minutes and could kill him with enough pain got more and went hunting to kill more tanki's.

I got to second in battle fiqui relieved and went to another room to try to overcome this battle mi incredible mind difficult.

[L.T 36]

خلـوها     ... :blink: 

 

ههههههههههههههههههههههههههههههههههههه قـسم بنقلبـها محـآوره بين بن عزيز وبن هضبان ..

دقايق اجيب الاحمـري :wacko: 

ههههههههههههههههههههههه

:D  

منـو بيفهم علـى شطحـآتهم

Edited November 6, 2013 by L.T

[VTP3000 0]

Engage

 

Isida, and Mammoth, that's my combination.

You think it may be bad, but your're dead within vibration.

100 drugs of each, I always use too many,

People call me "Drugger!" I don't care cause I aint friendly.

 

Capture the flag, on this amazing map called "Silence,"

We're losing 3 to 1, those tanks are freakin' giants!

My hope's still high, as time flies by, a new tanker just arrived,

Who knew, he's a drugger too!  Maybe we could thrive!

 

A Mammoth and Isida, my same combination!  

He and I could win this battle, we have high anticipation.

No one else is helping,

No one here to aid,

I guess it's up to us, get ready to engage! 

[mokhtarmozafari2001 423]

                                                                   rail gun style     

​rail-gun,rail-gun,rail-gun waiting to (buy or upgrade) don't like any think else then rail-gun. Oh please oh please Staff member just let me upgrade no one listen i say it's best no one listen.let me(buy or) and then i will show u who dose the rail-gun style.NO one listen just me so thanks to me

[maste98 6]

:)

Silence

 

Nowadays, Silence is so overrated

Due to its replay value.

The other maps must feel so darn hated

And at the same time, taboo-ed.

 

Silence is too mainstream

I'll give you that it's prestigious.

But it's succeeded in its scheme

To make other maps piteous.

 

A combo is never out of place in this map,

Something not applicable to the rest

But we've fallen into its horrible trap.

How much longer will it oppress?

[GoldRock2 290]

 

 

Soldier Boys

They lie not in that empty grave

Beneath the foreign sod.

They do not lie forgotten

In that cold, and desolate Land of Nod.

Soldier Boy ... Solider Boy,

The trumpets blast, and blare;

And wreaths are laid at the Cenotaph,

To show ... that we still care.

But ... there's a greater love than Man's

Who knows the price you paid.

He spared you the indignity,

And lifted you from that cold, cold grave.

He created a Great Celestial Shrine,

And the moment it was done ...

With a gentle hand, placed the Valiant heart,

Of each dear Mother's son.

Soldier Boy ... Solider Boy,

Under Dutch blue skies,

The gentle Breeze of Holland ...

Kiss your grave ... as they pass by.

SOLDIER BOY

by Earl Doucette

 

 

They lie not in that empty grave

Beneath the foreign sod.

They do not lie forgotten

In that cold, and desolate Land of Nod.

 

Soldier Boy ... Solider Boy,

The trumpets blast, and blare;

And wreaths are laid at the Cenotaph,

To show ... that we still care.

 

But ... there's a greater love than Man's

Who knows the price you paid.

He spared you the indignity,

And lifted you from that cold, cold grave.

 

He created a Great Celestial Shrine,

And the moment it was done ...

With a gentle hand, placed the Valiant heart,

Of each dear Mother's son.

 

Soldier Boy ... Solider Boy,

Under Dutch blue skies,

The gentle Breeze of Holland ...

Kiss your grave ... as they pass by.

 

[Xerothermic 44]

 

Remaine's Silence poem

You're not gonna win so I'd give up regarding copying other poems.

But I'm glad you thought my one was good enough that you'd try to copy it.

Edited November 6, 2013 by Xerothermic

[B.R.A.V.E 734]

Stopping By Woods :

 

 

Whose woods these are I think I know.

His house is in the village though,

He will not see me stopping here

To watch his woods fill up with snow.

 

My little tank must think it queer

To stop without a crystal box near

Between the woods and the frozen lake

The darkest evening of the year.

 

The woods are lovely, dark and deep

But I have Gold Boxes to keep

And miles to before I sleep

And miles to before I sleep..

 

( B.R.A.V.E )

[saleh619 45]

      MOON SILENCE

 

          I went to the moon there was strange silence,

with the moon walker on and ricochet m1

I could not grip on the surface of the land

and my tank full of dands

 

one enemy come to the moon

and than he killed me very soon

he was getting so many frags

with hornet capturing our flag

 

and than something appear on the moon

that was saying gold will be dropped soon

the hornet come at the gold spot

waiting for the gold to drop

 

I saw him waiting there for gold

I attacked him with my plasma balls

at last I killed him like an ox

than I run for the gold box

 

Than.......

Hurray! saleh619 has take the gold box!

Edited November 16, 2013 by saleh619

[thespyagent 19]

                                                                       thunder

                                            shooting,shooting,shooting,thunder

                                                   critical smoky shots

                                             thunder becomes surender

                                              surrounds isida

                                             isida shocks affects thunder

                                                       thunder shots affects short hull

                                                      freeze shots affects three turreents

                                                     fire bird affects freeze

                                                      freeze becomes maze

[Royalworld 1,269]

The Fail Robbery!

By an unexperienced noob poet - RW

 

 

Isida at the counter, was counting the crystals,
Three mammoths arrived with some weird kind of pistols.
'Don't try to act smart' said the mammoth with a mask,

'If you want to live, then complete the task'.

 

Isida was scared, she started filling their suitcase,

Suddenly Super Rico arrived, who had arrived from space.
The Mammoths were left with a feeling of despair,

They started reciting their lord's prayer.

 

One mammoth fainted, The other two tried to run,

'Get ready for fun' said Super Rico with his stun gun.
The mammoths begged 'We're sorry! Please be kind'
'NO!' said Rico with a smile looking unkind.

Soon the police arrived, 'Great Job' said officer Semyon
'After many tries we caught them, YES! we won',

And the punishment they got was very harsh,

Their turrets were chopped off and sent to Mars.

Edited November 10, 2013 by Royalworld

[TriNitroToIuene 4,765]

 

The Fail Robbery!

By an unexperienced noob poet - RW

 

 

Isida at the counter, was counting the crystals,

Three mammoths arrived with some weird kind of pistols.

 

'Don't try to act smart' said the mammoth with a mask,

'If you want to live, then complete the task'.

 

Isida was scared, she started filling their suitcase,

Suddenly Super Rico arrived, who had arrived from space.

 

The Mammoths were left with a feeling of despair,

They started reciting their lord's prayer.

 

One mammoth fainted, The other two tried to run,

'Get ready for fun' said Super Rico with his stun gun.

 

The mammoths begged 'We're sorry! Please be kind'

'NO!' said Rico with a smile looking unkind.

 

Soon the police arrived, 'Great Job' said officer Semyon

'After many tries we caugth them, YES! we won',

 

The mammoths were sent to jail,

And we're refused any bail.

 

And the punishment they got was very harsh,

Their turrets were chooped off and sent to Mars.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Awesome royalworld but it is 2-4 stanzas with 4 lines each!

[GoldRock2 290]

 

Sorry, i added two lines extra but removing them spoils the poem

max. limit should be and is always 20 lines

Well, unfortunately, rules are rules; not following them rather defeat's the purpose of 'em. I don't think your entry will be counted as valid as it is, and so I hope you can find a way to cut out the last two lines whilst still including everything you need to.

 

And actually, the '4 verses containing 4 lines' layout is a well-used, simple layout, generally used more than the 20 lines version.

[Xerothermic 44]

 

The Fail Robbery!

By an unexperienced noob poet - RW

 

 

Isida at the counter, was counting the crystals,

Three mammoths arrived with some weird kind of pistols.

'Don't try to act smart' said the mammoth with a mask,

'If you want to live, then complete the task'.

 

Isida was scared, she started filling their suitcase,

Suddenly Super Rico arrived, who had arrived from space.

The Mammoths were left with a feeling of despair,

They started reciting their lord's prayer.

 

One mammoth fainted, The other two tried to run,

'Get ready for fun' said Super Rico with his stun gun.

The mammoths begged 'We're sorry! Please be kind'

'NO!' said Rico with a smile looking unkind.

 

Soon the police arrived, 'Great Job' said officer Semyon

'After many tries we caught them, YES! we won',

The mammoths were sent to jail,

And we're refused any bail.

 

And the punishment they got was very harsh,

Their turrets were chopped off and sent to Mars.

 

Sorry, i added two lines extra but removing them spoils the poem

max. limit should be and is always 20 lines

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Don't think you can evade the rules just because you don't like them. It doesn't work like that.

[JonathanBernatowicz 119]

Maps

With fellow tankmen do I run

Into the Future for great fun

What will destroy this exciting joy

The aggravating sound of the loud Noise

 

The Scope from the Shaft do I see

It wants to make the other tankers want to leave

Going for the flag with great Courage

Oh dear God, save me from those turrets

 

The Isidas help me everywhere I go

Across the Desert to and fro

I'm just a cool tankman trying to Pass

I have nitro, so let me run fast

 

The path I took was amidst the High ways

Will the Railguns snipe me with their long rays

I have a Ricochet to jump off, it shouldn't take long

Maybe I'll go up there and do a little Ping-Pong

Edited November 16, 2013 by JonathanBernatowicz

[Xerothermic 44]

No one bothers to read the maximum of 16 lines rule, do they?

[doughnut2100 763]

No one bothers to read the maximum of 16 lines rule, do they?

Guess not. I did.

[Pikapower101 2]

                                                                            Happy Birthday Tanki!

 

The birthday cake is brought in for each and every tank.

And so there's all the tanks that we should thank.

 

Hear the noise that two guns make.

And so there's a specific paint that might be fake.

 

Or was it on Halloween? We will never know.

But still there are tickets on the movie Tanks, with tanks in every row.

 

So, here is the cake here itself on the table.

With the gun smoky with its lit candles with syrup on it made of maple.

 

The tanks are very eager to eat.

So here come the special treats.

[UNDESIRABLE 147]

The Battlefield

 

Among the roars of the Smoking engines

Across the Flares flooding out the turrets

Between the glistening streaks of light

There stood an audacious Wasp in full flight.

 

Its tracks clinking and clunking

Crippling the Delicate mud underneath

The attack covertly moves forward

Not allowing the opposition to rest.

 

Let them be blinded by the power

Let them beg for Mercy

Let them continue to withhold

For the mighty will be victorious.
 

Edited November 7, 2013 by UNDESIRABLE

[r_khan40 20]

Fail

[Ilia.ArchangeI 6,785]

It's gonna take me days to look through this (facepalm)

 

Anyway, thanks Gold, you're epic!

[WindlessMars 10]

                                                          Tank

                   Destroy tanks and get epic

          Level up your tanks and become a brick

 

                  Get the most gold 

          And get the uphold of your tank

 

                  Get in with your tank

           And destroy tanks to get the highest rank

 

                  I hope you wont spurn 

              You must say you'll come and give us a turn!

Edited November 7, 2013 by WindlessMars

[GoldRock 6,165]

Anyway, thanks Gold, you're epic!

No problem ^_^

[Rael-o-rama 0]

One shot

is all you got

to give that tank

a little spank

 

My shot

is smokin' hot

and your last breath

introduces death.

 

So when you spy

That tank Eyespy

Game over.

 

Play Tanki again?