Contest [Issue 17] Double Stanza

[Remaine 4,687]

^ Wow. Barring the grammar mistakes, that's actually a pretty good poem.

[r_DidYouKnowThat0 1,662]

The Ice Age

 

Freeze

Oh with unrelenting coldness

It always is a displease

It charges with such vicious boldness

 

Wait

That is what you hear

Before locked in a frozen Fate

Unable to shed a decent tear

 

Oh the woe

A cold Frost

With the grace of a doe

Brings all enemies to a lost

 

 

There is nothing to say

As it takes the Stage

Silent as I lay

Ice Age

Edited November 18, 2013 by r_DidYouKnowThat0

[Eragon 13,876]

^ Wow. Barring the grammar mistakes, that's actually a pretty good poem.

What mistakes, i couldn't find any!! :blink:

[Remaine 4,687]

caring*

despair*

They're the ones I saw right off the bat.

[Ilia.ArchangeI 6,785]

Please stop discussing each other's posts. I'm thankful for you guys trying to help with spotting plagiarism and mistakes, but there is no need. Your random posts will make it very hard to filter the entries. 

[Remaine 4,687]

Please stop discussing each other's posts. I'm thankful for you guys trying to help with spotting plagiarism and mistakes, but there is no need. Your random posts will make it very hard to filter the entries.

Should I get a mod to delete them (or can Reporters delete posts here)

[Ilia.ArchangeI 6,785]

Should I get a mod to delete them (or can Reporters delete posts here)

Reporters can hide posts here.

[Finesse 968]

Sale

O sale O sale

All the day I do crave for you

Like a thirsty bird waiting for a drop of water

Once there is sale everyone is energised

 

Everybody is happy that they can go

towards there goal

Everybody finds happiness in sale

And thats why devs announces sale.

 

Again and again

Sale will come 

Without sale it will be impossible to get

good equipment.

 

-ts2k-

[theabc 87]

^ First time ever. :)

me too

[r_Firingsniper0 1,215]

I do that becuase half of them don-t have rhymes! They disgust me to look at! Read one of them they dont rhyme! how can a poem be without a rhyme?

I am very sorry to post this Arch, but I have to say eragon, you don't understand the beauty of art and poems. Do you seriously think a poem has to rhyme?

 

What if all the writers always write a poem that rhymes. What d'you expect them to write? Hat bat rat?

[testforum 114]

I am very sorry to post this Arch, but I have to say eragon, you don't understand the beauty of art and poems. Do you seriously think a poem has to rhyme?

 

What if all the writers always write a poem that rhymes. What d'you expect them to write? Hat bat rat?

Arch deleted these posts,,

Poems must rhyme, if you can't do it you don't have the skill, no need to be ashamed, most people don't have the skill, but doesn't mean if you have a story means it is a poem...  

[Sachin.raikar 170]

The Abandoned Hero.

 

'This tank is a total waste for me',

I heard him say with his Index at me ready to abandon me.

Dumped I was without any good reason,

In a place worse than hell, likely a prison.

 

I remember my owner was a Major when I got sold.

The world called "Tanki" was new and boring to be bold.

I recalled my days sitting there at the mart,

the days I served my best, even if blown apart.

 

Rumors of a "new physics update" was in the air,

A guy rushed in the store like a hare.

Handing out a bag he put his hand on my body,

Got painted, fueled and shipped to his lobby.

 

I devoted my life to my new owner to be frank,

To get him and myself to the dream rank.

Now I hear the people shout my name,

Rico and wasp I am, the master of the game.

[r_Firingsniper0 1,215]

Arch deleted these posts,,

Poems must rhyme, if you can't do it you don't have the skill, no need to be ashamed, most people don't have the skill, but doesn't mean if you have a story means it is a poem...  

Let's move the discussion to pm, so arch doesn't have to bother deleting it

[B.R.A.V.E 734]

Tank York ; New City

 

 

where we all shall go 

no place i can find 

some place where we can grow 

some place where reached none mankind

 

voices whisper in my head 

i think i heard that from my  friend 

where theres no baby's bed 

only commands processing overhead 

 

i cant just enter there alone 

i need someone to help me devour the guards 

to get past to where my friend had told 

some place where i can find peace in my mind 

 

i have got past that peskey smokey ,

i think i will have to kill that yellow 

no wait thats my rustle friend

finally met him in this new city of tanks.

[B.R.A.V.E 734]

Gold boxes 

 

my heart is now pumping like a pumpkin

i am also jumping

as soon as i got the news of gold coming

i lost my mind like a stupid soul

 

i upgraded my hands upto m3

cuz i had the gold box to be seen

theres the shadow i see on my tank

i thought i can fill up my bank

 

all started crazy killing each other

cuz theres no way to distribute  each other.

i also killed some i saw near me

they all were not less than a pea

 

i ran to take it but O my fate

a big mammoth killed me just as his bait 

i was the last kill of the battle

gold box never landed on the saddle.  <_<

[rocas02 21]

That sweet gold box!

 

Oh my Sweet gold box

when i see you

my heart starts to ring

like a bell 

it's like the hell

when i lose you

and when i get you

it's a paradise

and a surprise

to me

then i drink an ice tea to celebrate

thn i tell it in my friends

and they're pens falling down

[famtsdd 13]

Try the gun and hulls

An Awesome Game

Never give up

King of online games

In the garage buy anything

 

OMG lots of goldboxes

Nice Game for team work

Lots of maps to fight in

Invite friends

Never quit

Ending with the rank Generalissimo and a smile

[Ilia.ArchangeI 6,785]

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