Contest [Issue 20] Discuss Romantic Poetry Contest

[Nathan316 2]

Roses are red,

violets are blue,

I love Tanki Online 

and so should you!

 

This game is great,

my nickname is Nate

for those who do not know 

I am quite frankly late.

 

In my garage I had some trouble

all my m1's turned to rubble,

rubble rubble rubble rubble

why am I saying rubble its like I got these idea's

from Barney's grubble. 

 

Please do not hate,

on those who are great,

were just better than the ones 

that are always so darn late.

 

Thanks for listening

 

Sincerely

Nathan316

[Finesse 968]

^ Entries here http://en.tankiforum.com/index.php?showtopic=187818&page=11

This topic only for discussion

[killbean213 0]

cool  will be the first   :fire_r:

[noahreckers 0]

Tanki online you are sublime

I know that you will always be mine

I love you,you know all of the time

 

I think of you in the morning

I think of you at night 

I think of you when I'm in a really good fight

 

They burn me with fire

They freeze me with ice

They try to make me think that you are not nice

 

Tanki online, You are perfect and refined

With drugs you are kind,

You are fun all the time

 

Wasp and Railgun

You are the ones

To help me become top gun

 

You increase my skills

To get me more kills 

And when I win, it thrills

 

Your forum is great

There is writing on it

It gives me tips to beat my opponent

 

So that is why

I play you, Tanki online

You will always be mine

[Crazy.From.Algeria 8]

Gold box will be dropped soon

[proRELSAuser 1]

eu vou tentar

[mouser77 9]

I love my Viking

the shine of the metal gleams

Prodigi paint sigh

 

Powerful motor roaring

Engage the loader handle

 

I love my Viking

Now where is that Wasp hiding

look behind the wall

 

The burst of fire immolates

remains slowly fade away

[canadarules 1,938]

 

I love my Viking

the shine of the metal gleams

Prodigi paint sigh

 

Powerful motor roaring

Engage the loader handle

 

I love my Viking

Now where is that Wasp hiding

look behind the wall

 

The burst of fire immolates

remains slowly fade away

 

this is the discussion not the contest doh

[yolo2468 0]

  here is my one<3                                     

 

Whenever you hug me,

Whenever you're there,                                                     
I feel so secure,
I know you really care.

At times we're together,
Not knowing what to say,
All we do is hold hands,
Then our love lights the way.

There are instances we argue,
But time's granted to ponder,
Then we work things out,
It makes our love stronger.

I've nothing to worry about,
Gone are moments, I thought we'd part,
Thinking of you makes me smile,
You'll forever be in my heart.
 

 

 

Edited February 16, 2014 by yolo2468

[r_JCar0 289]

My poem is based on a true story of my life.

[ali.alam 2]

          I MAY AWAY BUT

 

               I M SURE...

 

          EVEN WHEN WE ARE

 

                 FAR APART...

 

          DISTANCE CAN NEVER

 

                  CHANGE...

 

          THE LOVE I HAVE FOR U

 

                 IN MY HEART...

 

    THINKING OF U...    

[Pathfinder 1,690]

All plagiarised - just Google the first few lines of each  <_< 

 

Sort of expected better from abusufian and samsondsouza...

 

Hats off to for a great (and completely legit) entry, and to for his garlic bread awesomeness.

 

Thank you :) I have since improved it! It has doubled in length!

[kevqw 0]

I will win lol

[kevqw 0]

worst poem ever lol

 

Beautiful Railway Bridge of the Silv’ry Tay!
Alas! I am very sorry to say
That ninety lives have been taken away
On the last Sabbath day of 1879,
Which will be remember’d for a very long time.

’Twas about seven o’clock at night,
And the wind it blew with all its might,
And the rain came pouring down,
And the dark clods seem’d to frown,
And the Demon of the air seem’d to say --
“I’ll blow down the Bridge of Tay.”

When the train left Edinburgh
The passengers’ hearts were light and felt no sorrow,
But Boreas blew a terrific gale,
Which made their hearts for to quail,
And many of the passengers with fear did say --
“I hope God will send us safe across the Bridge of Tay.”

But when the train came near to Wormit Bay,
Boreas he did loud and angry bray,
And shook the central girders of the Bridge of Tay
On the last Sabbath day of 1879,
Which will be remember’d for a very long time.

So the train sped on with all its might,
And Bonnie Dundee soon hove in sight,
And the passengers’ hearts felt light,
Thinking they would enjoy themselves on the New Year,
With their friends at home they lov’d most dear,
And wish them all a happy New Year.

So the train mov’d slowly along the Bridge of Tay,
Until it was about midway,
Then the central girders with a crash gave way,
And down went the train and passengers into the Tay!
The Storm Fiend did loudly bray,
Because ninety lives had been taken away,
On the last Sabbath day of 1879,
Which will be remember’d for a very long time.

As soon as the catastrophe came to be known
The alarm from mouth to mouth was blown,
And the cry rang out all o’er the town,
Good Heavens! the Tay Bridge is blown down,
And a passenger train from Edinburgh,
Which fill’d all the people’s hearts with sorrow,
And made them for to turn pale,
Because none of the passengers were sav’d to tell the tale
How the disaster happen’d on the last Sabbath day of 1879,
Which will be remember’d for a very long time.

It must have been an awful sight,
To witness in the dusky moonlight,
While the Storm Fiend did laugh, and angry did bray,
Along the Railway Bridge of the Silv’ry Tay,
Oh! ill-fated Bridge of the Silv’ry Tay,
I must now conclude my lay
By telling the world fearlessly without the least dismay,
That your central girders would not have given way,
At least many sensible men do say,
Had they been supported on each side with buttresses,
At least many sensible men confesses,
For the stronger we our houses do build,
The less chance we have of being killed.

[Ar7b 35]

when the last date ?

[jokersus.cava 1,503]

hey guys, what do you think of my poetry? Its first

[Theawesomecooldude 108]

Well just entered mine. I think it has a chance. :D

[canadarules 1,938]

Will enter mine on weekend

[Akeal 10]

i wrote one~

[perro-salvaje-3 0]

"podrá nublarse tanki eternamente

 podrá serrarse el server mucho tiempo

 podrán caerse los tanques del cielo

 podrán haber muchas batallas

 podrán desgarrarme en los juegos

 pero este amor que siento por tanki

 nadie me lo va a quitar" ^_^

 

"TE AMO TANKIONLINE"

:wub:

[barbiegirl19 48]

Ahmed9xt Great Work !! 

[DeebanofSpadez 5]

I like flae's and Bayern so funny XD

[flae88 948]

I like flae's and Bayern so funny XD

:33 I don't like bayerns...

 

I luv it :33

 

[DeebanofSpadez 5]

:33 I don't like bayerns...

 

I luv it :33

 

FLAE WILL WIN IF NOT

Go cry in a hole

[flae88 948]

FLAE WILL WIN IF NOT

Go cry in a hole

._.