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[Issue 20] Discuss Romantic Poetry Contest


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I hate my life,

Why all people hate me.

my life is nothing,

I want to go home.

but I'm living on the street.

There is a black hole in my hard.

I dont have any friend.

 

But than I have see the light by the end of the dark cave,

I got one friend and a girlfriend.

I'm so happy.

There is finally someon who loves me.

That black hole in my hart is gone.

The time of love is begine.

I got a house and a girlfriend,

I'm the happiest man in the world.

 

I'm going to marry with my girlfriend,

That was the best day of my life.

I pushed her face into the cake.

She said I love you,

And I said that too.

We got children one boy and two girls,

We are very happy with our children.

Dude (or girl), this is the DISCUSSION topic for the contest!

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im sorry, my love, ive found another heart

 but be my dove, fly like my dart..

i love you, and i wont stop saying that unttill you love me too

 

and when i say, my love please stay,

 then she replies, well i may

i love you, and i wont stop saying that untill you love me too!

 

so......love me too  :wub:

Edited by deathstrike2003

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Just because it doesn't rhyme means it is bad. Rhyme may give you good marks in judging, but may also not. You will still be judged upon it.

You kinda worded it to mean the exact opposite of what you intended

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Do you know when the results of the romantic poetry will be posted?

 

 

Thank you for your time

When next press section issue comes the list of winners will be shown. 

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