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Just edited the page please give some nub feedbacks :P

Page looks much better now. Good job.

 

What's the point of "owners" section? Everyone can already see that you are topic owner and move Sunlight's name at the bottom of post.

 

 

Player @Aces a proud Pakistani,Is admin/founder of 1of the only 2unofficial tournamnet organizations. Link: http://en.tankiforum.com/index.php?showtopic=351603

This line need some spaces and fix typos. And proleague isn't active in TO now. Change it to: Player @Aces a proud Pakistani was admin and founder of an unofficial tournament organization ProLeague.

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what do you guys think for the discord group,should we make a new one,or there is already one huge group of pakistanis but there are few indians there too...hmm?

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what do you guys think for the discord group,should we make a new one,or there is already one huge group of pakistanis but there are few indians there too...hmm?

I think that Ubaid's server "Gaming Group" is a good server, most of the members there are pakistani, add its link on main post.

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Here are some more mistakes...The broken links should be corrected in the following paragraphs.

 

 

1. Hyphens should be added to the word “Assalam o Alaikum”, in the welcome note.

2. Owners’ title should be placed before “Oldest member”.

3. Players should be arranged in an alphabetical order.

4. Some players have no links attached to them.

5. The facts’ paragraph should be made color vibrant.

6. The “Latest member” should be replaced with “Newest member”.

7. The “Newest member” (Big-Mate) has a square bracket after his name which should be removed.

8. In “Original founder”, f should be made small. Similarly, “Page Previous Owner” should be replaced with “Previous page owner”.

9. The whole “Achievements” paragraph should be replaced with this text. I do not know as to what esqd or wrs is, so I left them as they were.

 

 

  • Player PAKISTANII, the leader of the clan “All Kind”, represented Pakistan in many eSports tournaments. He managed to get the legendary eSports paint “Gladiator” and is the one and only veteran.
  • Player Aces was the admin and founder of an unofficial tournament organization ProLeague.
  • Clan "Evil Genuises" is one of the best Pakistani clans. Its leaders; Builder & Amaze, are very good players.
  • Following are the most active Pakistani eSports players:

The names should be sorted alphabetically.

Builder (ex-member of “Supremacy”/wrs)

Diverse (member of clan “Supremacy”)

Holy.Hero (member of clan “Warriors”, ex-member of clan “Vavilon”)

Sunlight (member of clan “Warriors”/esqd)

Wit (member of clan “Supremacy”)

 

 

10. The thing is eSports, not Esport. They should be amalgamated with previous eSports players with a side note about the paint. These players should be sorted alphabetically.

11. Again, eSports players should be named alphabetically.

12. The clan names should be sorted alphabetically.

13. The moderators should be sorted alphabetically

14. The fifth note should be deleted. Same thing has been written twice.

16. The joining note should be replaced with:

 

 

...If your name is not enlisted in Pakistani Players' section above and you want to join this club, then simply write "I am a Pakistani.". This should do it. If not, then PM me.

...If your nickname has changed, then PM me.

...If you see something missing or misleading on this page, feel free to contact me in order to rectify that mistake.

...If you are a non-Pakistani visitor, then wish our country and club. Cheers!

As always, Pakistan Zindabad.

 

 

17. The font should be changed to any regular font like Calibri or Arial. The current font represents a rather informal look.

18. The official media icons should be replaced with smaller, and updated icons as following. The more the original, the better.

19. Last but not the least, the entire font color should be same throughout, either white or standard brown-black color, with the exceptions at certain points like that of the facts and the welcome note.

 

 

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Page looks much better now. Good job.

 

What's the point of "owners" section? Everyone can already see that you are topic owner and move Sunlight's name at the bottom of post.

 

 

This line need some spaces and fix typos. And proleague isn't active in TO now. Change it to: Player @Aces a proud Pakistani was admin and founder of an unofficial tournament organization ProLeague.

done thanks )

 

Here are some more mistakes...The broken links should be corrected in the following paragraphs.

 

 

1. Hyphens should be added to the word “Assalam o Alaikum”, in the welcome note.

2. Owners’ title should be placed before “Oldest member”.

3. Players should be arranged in an alphabetical order.

4. Some players have no links attached to them.

5. The facts’ paragraph should be made color vibrant.

6. The “Latest member” should be replaced with “Newest member”.

7. The “Newest member” (Big-Mate) has a square bracket after his name which should be removed.

8. In “Original founder”, f should be made small. Similarly, “Page Previous Owner” should be replaced with “Previous page owner”.

9. The whole “Achievements” paragraph should be replaced with this text. I do not know as to what esqd or wrs is, so I left them as they were.

 

 

  • Player PAKISTANII, the leader of the clan “All Kind”, represented Pakistan in many eSports tournaments. He managed to get the legendary eSports paint “Gladiator” and is the one and only veteran.
  • Player Aces was the admin and founder of an unofficial tournament organization ProLeague.
  • Clan "Evil Genuises" is one of the best Pakistani clans. Its leaders; Builder & Amaze, are very good players.
  • Following are the most active Pakistani eSports players:

The names should be sorted alphabetically.

Builder (ex-member of “Supremacy”/wrs)

Diverse (member of clan “Supremacy”)

Holy.Hero (member of clan “Warriors”, ex-member of clan “Vavilon”)

Sunlight (member of clan “Warriors”/esqd)

Wit (member of clan “Supremacy”)

 

 

10. The thing is eSports, not Esport. They should be amalgamated with previous eSports players with a side note about the paint. These players should be sorted alphabetically.

11. Again, eSports players should be named alphabetically.

12. The clan names should be sorted alphabetically.

13. The moderators should be sorted alphabetically

14. The fifth note should be deleted. Same thing has been written twice.

16. The joining note should be replaced with:

 

 

...If your name is not enlisted in Pakistani Players' section above and you want to join this club, then simply write "I am a Pakistani.". This should do it. If not, then PM me.

...If your nickname has changed, then PM me.

...If you see something missing or misleading on this page, feel free to contact me in order to rectify that mistake.

...If you are a non-Pakistani visitor, then wish our country and club. Cheers!

As always, Pakistan Zindabad.

 

 

17. The font should be changed to any regular font like Calibri or Arial. The current font represents a rather informal look.

18. The official media icons should be replaced with smaller, and updated icons as following. The more the original, the better.

19. Last but not the least, the entire font color should be same throughout, either white or standard brown-black color, with the exceptions at certain points like that of the facts and the welcome note.

 

 

Thanks but i wont do it today or tommorow. arranging names in alphabet is hell hard aur pakistan zindabad ku mein urdu mein likhna e koshish karon ga. jin playerrs ke link nahi hai unko hata raha hun keonke unhon ne nickname change kar liya hai

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done thanks )

 

Thanks but i wont do it today or tommorow. arranging names in alphabet is hell hard aur pakistan zindabad ku mein urdu mein likhna e koshish karon ga. jin playerrs ke link nahi hai unko hata raha hun keonke unhon ne nickname change kar liya hai

take ur time brotheer.... no need to rush

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