[Forum Game] Correct The Sentence

[r_aby120 25]

Rules:Rules are simple a user makes a wrong sentence then then next user corrects that sentence then comes up with a new so the next person can correct it.

Ex: Misteaks r Misteaks. The correct way is Mistakes are mistakes.

Rules: No Trolling,Flooding e.t.c.

 

Hall Of Fame:

1.Loackie-4

2.okfighter-2

3.Ochai_back-1

4.tomukas2957-1

5.SOAD_Chop_Suey-1

6.Okwan1-1

 

I'll Start;

Misteaks r misteaks weather its majer or sily.

Edited April 19, 2014 by r_aby120

[okfighter 331]

Mistakes are mistakes whether its major or silly.

 

I had a grate tiim on tanki tooday.

Edited April 16, 2014 by okfighter

[Loackie 269]

It should be "I had a great time on Tanki today."

 

My messed up sentence: "I dislike mischevious railgun-hornet users. They tend to be annoyng."

[Ochai_back 61]

Correction " I dislike mischievous railgun+hornet users. They tend to be annoying"

 

My messed up sentence " I lyke tu play tnki but best thing is parkur"

[okfighter 331]

> I like to play tanki but the best thing is parkour.

Thies sentenche contans lotes of misteaks, I hop yoo can correck ite. <

[Loackie 269]

It's supposed to be: "This sentence contains lots of mistakes, I hope you can correct it."

 

My messed up sentence is: "This game is aweosome and alot of fun but it lags a lot on my computer, I might need a knew won?" (This is more challenging :))

[ll.DonT.Even.Try.ll 513]

This game is awesome and fun, but it lags on my computer, so I might a new one.

 

I wuold realy apreciate if u bye my som cristaIs.

[SOAD_Chop_Suey 11]

I would really appreciate if you buy me some crystals.

 

It wil be hard to find the mistake here...

[Loackie 269]

It should be: "It will be hard to find the mistake here..."

 

My messed up sentence: "The mammoth is going to run into the enemy bases when each team was one kills away, but I managed defeated a stragglers to win the game."

[Okwan1 4]

Correction " The mammoth is going to run into the enemy base when each team was one kill away, but I managed to  defeat a straggler to win the game."

 

 

My messed up sentence: "  mee and mi frend was betling in a mep but sudenli a goldboks dropped but  he let mi take it "

[I.WalkAlone 548]

Me and my friend were battling in a map, when suddenly a gold drops but he let's me take it.

 

AOFox is thi bestt palyer on tanki onlnie.

[Loackie 269]

It should be: "AOFox is the best player on Tanki Online."

 

My messed up sentence: My friend is going to get scammed, but I warned him in time. Good luck finding the mistake here. Here's a hint: It's similar to my last one.

Edited April 19, 2014 by Loackie

[darkman14 5]

It's me aby12 someone hacked my account,till I get it back this game will be closed!

[emporertank 3]

It should be: "AOFox is the best player on Tanki Online."

 

My messed up sentence: My friend is going to get scammed, but I warned him in time. Good luck finding the mistake here. Here's a hint: It's similar to my last one.

should be: My friend was going to get scammed but i warned him in time

my meesed up sentance: i hate thunder m3 with double power, good luck with this one

[Loackie 269]

Finally! Someone got the error right!

Nontheless, it should be: "I hate Thunder M3 with double power."

 

My messed up sentence: "Can people still post there, even if this thread is closed?" (It's not really grammatically incorrect, but it doesn't make much sense when you read it. Also, this is also a question I have.) (i just read it a few days earlier, and now it makes sense...)

Edited April 25, 2014 by Loackie

[MrTactics 219]

Can people still post there, even if the thread is closed?

 

 

Should be the instead of this... Cause you are regarding the topic as a foreign object, not personal so should be the instead of this. (May not make sense haha).

 

"My Bugatti Veyron isn't as good Mercedeses."

Edited April 20, 2014 by MrTactics

[crackgold2 399]

my buggati veyron isn't as good as Mercedes.

Edited April 20, 2014 by crackgold2

[MrTactics 219]

Oops I meant it as if Mercedes was a person I was relating too.

[ariking777 940]

My wrong sentence: "I'd go to the guitar shop if you wer'ent afraid of it". What's the mistake?

[aperaiderpistol 459]

It should be "I'd go to the guitar shop if you were'nt afraid of it".

Here's my messed up sentence "my frend thinks dat the mammoth is the best hull evah, but i dont think so."

Who'd like to correct me?

[Loackie 269]

It should be: "My friend thinks that the Mammoth is the best hull ever, but I don't think so."

 

My messed up sentence: "prehapsineedtomakemymesssedupsentencesmoreobvious, andwaspistotallythebesthullever, and hornetisoverused, and thisisnotspam."

[Tenderfoot 41]

Perhaps I need to make my messed up sentence more obvious, and Wasp is totally the best hull ever, and Hornet is over used, and this is not spam.

 

My incorrect sentence: "my cumptar uto corrects everthing for me soo gud luock"

[alex_is_the_best 87]

> ''My computer can correct everything for me so good luck.''

My incorrect sentence: alix iuos thiey biast anjd hiopie all tankman hav fan,

[jokersus.cava 1,503]

alex is the best and hope all tankman have fun

incorrect sentence: amma noob

[okfighter 331]

CS: I am a noob (:P)

IS: Rael and Hornett is my favourite combo in Tanki Onliine.