Contest [Issue 26] Continue the Story! [Chapter 1]

[r_Annihilator01270 4]

Joining the Tank Military :tank:

By: Annihilator0127

After a tough day of training, I and my fellow men went to our cabins. We were on the training course using our tanks to battle the enemy. Oh yeah, you don’t know my name. My name is Zach, and ever since I was in 5^th grade I wanted to join the military. My best friend, who also is in the tank military is Jake. Well, after training that day we went to bed.

 

 

The next day we were to choose our tanks. Our hull options were Wasp, Hornet, Hunter, Viking, Dictator, Titan, and Mammoth. Our turret options were firebird, freeze, isida, twins, ricochet, smoky, thunder, rail, and shaft. I chose the thunder turret with the viking hull. Our instructor told us I as we got more skilled and earned more money we could but better modification of turrets and hulls. He also told us that in the course of time we could paint our tanks. This going to be some interesting military career.

 

 

Today, was our first real battle with our tanks. I also learnt about the special ability of thunder. Splash damage!!!!! :o The battle was fairly challenging. In the my mates and I managed to drive the enemy out of our territory. We didn't exactly win. You know how it is. You show the enemy who's boss the the run away. That's about how week 2 went. More and more practice day after day. I also heard that these new things called supplies and micro-upgrades are being introduced next week :D . Ohhhhhh, I cant wait to start upgrading this tank.

Edited September 8, 2014 by r_Annihilator01270

[Thekillerpenguin 1,731]

Woot!

 

My submission is pretty long, so for convenience, I'm going to wrap my post in spoiler tags.

Cataclysm, Chapter 1

 

 

“Lunar Base Delta, this is Lieutenant Rickers piloting LEU-A15. I’m with Corporal Raleigh, piloting LEU-A22. Requesting permission to exit base and go to the following coordinates, over.”

“This is Lunar Base Delta, we hear you, Rickers. You are cleared to go.”

The burgeoning doors of the airlock slowly opened, revealing the barren lunar landscape. Rickers and Raleigh drove their tanks out of the confines of the base, the Earth looming above. They were to obtain some mineral samples for analysis.

 

These tanks were not ordinary tanks; Lunar Exploration Units, or LEUs, were modified Wasps equipped with green lights and clad in white paint. They were equipped with Isidas to mine materials and clear debris.

 

After about half an hour of driving, they arrived at their destination. A hole had been dug in the ground the previous day by another team. Rickers and Raleigh both switched on their Isidas and carefully excavated a mineral deposit. They both felt a mild rumbling.

A voice came on Ricker’s radio:

 

“This is Lunar Base Delta to Lieutenant Rickers. We’ve detected some minor seismic activity in your area. We’d like you to plant a seismic probe into the ground so we have a better idea of what’s going on, over.”

“Lieutenant Rickers to Base Delta, copy that. We’ll get the probe ready in a moment.”

 

Raleigh’s Wasp drove into the hole and started planting a seismic probe. It was halfway done when the ground started vibrating.

“Raleigh, something's wrong! Get yourself out of there!”

“I can’t! The probe’s pinning me in place!”

“Dammit! Uh, press the probe release button!”

It made little difference. The sides of the hole caved in, and debris came crashing onto his tank.

 

“Rickers! My tank’s stuck! I’m buried underground! What do I do?!”

“Hold on there Raleigh! I’ll try to dig you out. Hang tight, I’ll get you out of there!”

Rickers switched on his Isida to full power and starting digging away.

“This is Lunar Base Delta to Lieutenant Rickers. We’ve detected heavy seismic activity in your area. Status report!”

“This is Rickers. Seems like there was some sort of earthquake! Raleigh’s been trapped underground, and I’m trying to free him.”

“Acknowledged. Report back to base, and we’ll figure out what to do.”

 

Rickers worked feverishly, but the ground started shaking again.

 

Giant fissures sprouted near the two tanks. One of them appeared directly under Raleigh.

“Uh, Rickers, my tank’s starting to slip! HELP! HELP! DO SOMETHING! AHHHHHGH---!!!“

Raleigh plummeted into the abyss as the crack reached the surface. The heavy shaking continued, and the piece of rock Rickers' tank was on started to crumble. He contacted the base.

 

“This is Rickers! Raleigh got swallowed up! I’m stuck! What should I- OH MY GOD! THERE’S SOMETHING HUGE COMING OUT OF THE GROUND!! I-i-i can get a clear view of it now! It looks like some sort of a………”

 

Rickers paused for a long time.

“Lunar Base Delta to Lieutenant Rickers, what were you saying? Hello? Are you there? Lunar Base Delta to Lieutenant Rickers, do you respond!”

 

There was no reply.

 

 

Edited September 6, 2014 by Thekillerpenguin

[FaaiqBilal1 795]

In the void

 

You are the prey. You are helpless. You are alone. There is no escape. You are doomed to be a part of this. There is no choice, you do not care, you know your goal, it is tiring, it is repetitive, you do the same things over and over again. You do not like it, yet you do it, like this is your job. You do not like those around you, but you are with them. You consider these people your friends, but you know that they might become the reason to your failure. You live a lie, you chose this lie. You chose it because there is no other option, you follow the fashion, you follow others. You are the locust, you are the crop. The same fashion goes with everyone around you. You are in a race, you will not look back. 

 

You look back to see a person you have just passed by, you do not see him. He is already in front of you. You know you cannot do what you intend to, but you run after it.  You try to convince yourself that it is possible. You were taught this when you were young, this is your instinct, this is where your humanity is lost. You have forgotten life, you have forgotten people. You try to show that you care about others, but deep inside, you know you do not.  You are selfish, you are a coward, you are immoral, you envy others and do not show it. You are proud of who you are because you beat someone, you ruined a rival's day. You are happy, you have no regrets. You know you should be guilty, yet you are not. 

 

This is your life, this is the lie you live. This is every day of your life. You wait for the day to end, you wait for the night, you wait for the time you can go to rest. Sorry, let me correct myself: You wait for the time your body goes to rest. Your mind strains with the weight of your thoughts. You do not wait for the next day, you do not want to, you just want the day to end. You cannot think a way out of this, you just prepare. Do you know the worst part about this? When you wake up, it starts all over again. 

 

'Just another day' you whisper. 'Just another day'. 

Edited September 8, 2014 by FaaiqBilal1

[Tanker1928374655 133]

The Soldier (410 words -.-)

The smell of death was in the air, and the sound of tanks and artillery rolling in. It was a rainy and miserable day in the battlefields. The trench was wet and muddy and enemy’s firing their guns constantly. The conditions were terrible, and the food, just as bad. Mice had infested the trenches. The trenches were filled with the smell that is indescribable. The worst conditions a man can ever face. But, the men must do their job and inch by inch push into enemy lines. The soldiers are desperate to keep themselves alive, and are firing their machine guns at the enemies nonstop. The enemy’s shells are raining down and have already claimed hundreds of lives already. Jake and few of his colleagues are still clinging on their lives, but they knew it would be gone soon. Jake had been drafted into World War II, just like many of his friends. Jake is terribly crushed by the overwhelming pressure of the war. Jake wished he could turn back. His friends had mocked him and pushed him down and had called him a coward. Jake was reluctant to fight, but still did it for his country. His friend he made in his platoon was his only friend that he could talk to. Jake’s friend John empowered Jake to do his best. John stood up to those who mocked Jake, and fought side by side with Jake. John and Jake had become brothers. But Jake would always think of his family, and would feel like going back to his home, Great Britain. Every day, Jake would fight in those trenches against those Nazi soldiers. For days, weeks, and months Jake would shoot until he ran out of ammo. Until one tragic day, John said he wanted to take a view on the German positions. Jake went to get a sandwich and he heard a shot. John fell flat on the ground bleeding. John asked Jake if he is going to always be his friend, even when he dies. Jake replied yes with deep sadness in his heart. John fell to the ground and stopped moving. Jake fell to the ground weeping. Just then Jake’s leader of the platoon told them to charge. Jake saw his chance to run home and see his family. He thought for a long time. He thought of John and how the Nazis had killed him. He ran through No Man’s Land…

To be continued...

[shadow33344 2]

time to prove yourself:     one day a fellow tanker on the blue team called in his friends for a nice day at parkour his friends jumped on it was a nice sunny day in the small town of rio but parkour got interrupted by a mammoth m1 with twins m2 he was not part of the parkour.  he stood there watching like a elephant it happens to be one tanker had a railgun m2 and m1 hornet the mammoth was not alone 1 by 1 his friends field in. now one of the parkour tanks happen to be named the_liveing_ledgend and he was really scared of druggers so he had a choice either die or call in 1 last friend .apparently none was on so he tried to fend off the tribe of druggers he had no success then out of nowhere a railgun m3 bullet whizzed by him  he thought this is the end but by then his warlord friend got on he invited him.he showed up this warlord was named the-cadillac-killer he saw an m3 bullet go right by him "so trying to be a drugger overlord eh?" the mammoth with twins said "yes i do" "you are not going to last long" said cadillac slayer "we will see u only got an m1 i got an m2so hahaha" the cadillac slayer was not scared of nothing although the twins did startle him 1 by 1 he killed them all but he was not expecting a m3 fully upgraded so he was scared ...to be continued

[colonel314 167]

Are we allowed to edit the chapter after we post it until the end of the month?

[Thekillerpenguin 1,731]

Are we allowed to edit the chapter after we post it until the end of the month?

I think so.

[amnrox 0]

                                                                             HERO OF THE TEAM

 In one ctf in rio, the score was 98 and 91 out of 100. the red team was winning. the time left was 15 min more and the fund was 24000. There were many tankers in that battle. the blue team was very disappointed and were just defending. the red team were happily trying to take flag. Many tankers were trying to get the red flag but were unsuccessful.

         once a siren came: gold box will be dropped soon....

so everyone were fighting where gold box can fall. One hero from blue team did not care for the gold box and ran to capture the flags. till gold box fall he captured 6 flags and now the score was 98 and 97. the time left was 6 mins

 who will win????? will the hero of blue team take them to win??????or it will be a draw????? :blink: :blink:  :blink:  :blink:  :blink:  

 

          end of 1 chapter......

you will be knowing the ending in the results of this issue if I win some crystals..... :lol:  :lol: :lol:  :lol:  :lol:  

Edited September 7, 2014 by amnrox

[tanker538N 394]

''I DID NOT DO IT!!!!" I yelled at my parents. But as usual they just thought that I was lying. For the rest of the day i wept in my room. I din't talk to anyone and soon many dark patches formed under my eyes...

 

A few hours back...

 

"Honey! We are going out now!" Mom yelled. " Now you listen to me young man if you cause any kind of trouble -" dad said. "I know, dad. You will ground me for a month." I groaned. "Very well then, be sure to take care of your little brother and NO MISCHIEF AT ALL!" Dad yelled. The second they went I jumped on to a soft cushion and played some games. What game you ask? Tanki.  Then my little brother, Alex came to me. " BIG BROTHER!" he yelled. "Not now Alex. Cant you see I am playing?"  I said in a irritated tone. "But my ball fell in the basement. I am scared to go there." "Ugh, Very well I will help you." I said. Our basement had the kind of doors that close when you press a button on the door nob. But when I went in, my brother by mistake pushed the golden button thinking it was a magical button that brought superman (He was 6 and into that stuff)... And I was stuck inside a rusty and old basement.I didn't notice until later when i tried to get out and heard my sounds of shattering plates. But there was nothing I could do .....

Edited September 6, 2014 by tanker538N

[Penguin40 1,714]

  The Smoky XT and the Thunder M3

 

In a normal yet unusual battle taking place at Bridges CTF, there was a Smoky XT. It's competitors were many M3s, but it was not difficult for the Smoky to take them out and capture the flag! Suddenly, the blue team's flag was taken. Blue Team was the one the Smoky XT was in, and he quickly rushed for the flag. A Railgun M3 with micro upgrades quickly took a shot. It was very accurate, and it was obvious that the Railgun took out the Smoky and taken out any chance to stop the capture of the blue team's flag. However, the Smoky miraculously not only survived but escaped the whole shot. He took away the flag and quickly confronted the other flag-carrier on a bridge, a Thunder M3. Suddenly, the notification that increased the heartbeat of all tankers, the "Gold box will be dropped soon" notification came. All tankers went to the drop locations of the gold box. The box quickly fell, and the Railgun who earlier tried to shoot the Smoky was just about to catch it when an explosive shot hit the Railgun and threw the tank behind. Another explosive shot destroyed it completely, and one of the sudden attackers caught the gold box. "It's nothing when the fund is so high. Now, get destroyed and lose! I WON!" the second attacker shouted.

 

 

 

Will be continued......

[light234 1]

                                                                                  THE MYSTERIOUS tank 

 

                                                                                                resvered

[TNTRicohat 41]

story taller B)  it's old days?

please start something intresting mods

[overlord2789 0]

Tanki In Space (239 words)

 

Once upon a time there were two space empires , Klingon and the Federation,  who fought in space and on land..both the leaders knew that if we kept on fighting like this the war would destroy the planet and themselves..so they called for a meeting and the leaders decided that they win the war in the old and traditional way.... THE TANKI WAY!!!.... They used the plant known as Serpuhov CTF-10 to proceed with the battle...they assembled the strongest battle group of tanks in their empire.... The tanks from the Klingon side were " Ricocheting Hornet", "Thundering Hornet","Smoki(ng) Wasp" and  "Mammothic FireBird"... the tanks from the Federation side were " Thundered Viking" , "Dictator with a Railgun", "Smoki(ng) Viking" and “Railgunning Hornet”….

 

The Battle was fierce both teams were evenly matched…they had to score 10 flaggs. The klingon had got 9 points already and the federation had got 8 points…Then Suddenly it said “ GOLD BOX WILL BE DROPPED SOON" ( gold box contains of a super power,whoever gets it will be indestructable) everyone gathered near the spots were they thought it would drop.. the gold box dropped 900 metres away from all of them they all rushed killing each other and racing like Death Race.... now 6 tanks are almost 45m away from the golden box they rush and then it says in their control panel " Thund.......... 

 

Guess how it would end and thanks!!! 

[Arbimota 0]

twas a normal day in tanki the sun was shining I WAS EXPLODING.People were destroying each other.I was the only Warrant officer 5 in a generallissimo match.so as you expected things were not going real well.Then this guardian angel of a isida came side by side with me and started to protect me and heal me.i was like Whhhhhhat I am not the pro of the match this guy named ilya123 was.I was hornet m2 freeze m2 And then this Isida came.I went to capture a couple of flags.this firebird Started to burn me I killed him but the burn was affecting me Then that isida came and healed me then i realised the isida had no name!when i talked to some people in the match The reclusive isida was not seen by them and the other team swore that a dude named happytanker123sed was in place of the isida and all the opponents were saying that everyone had names!!then i saw the isida leave And after that 5 Gold boxes fell down on my position!!!!then when i asked a administrator he said that this was not the first time this case was raised!!he said a total of 17 people saw the isida throughout tanki and all of them were WARRANT OFFICER 5!!!!!!

 

 

To Be Continued........

[anigod 0]

i'll start the coarse

[AcE0SniiP 140]

as i was playing in a normal battle in server 5,i got an invitation from semyon kirov after joining the battle,i realized it was a private one,i asked semyon what is wrong.he said:dear laolee, i am telling you this because i believe in you.hacker have attacked tanki online and created a team full of fully mued tanks with load of drugs.they have invited us to a battle.whoever loses has to leave tanki forever.so thats why you are here,to gather 20 of the best tankers in the whole english community to fight them.so i went to all the servers and collected 20 skillful people.as i give the list of the names to semyon he said he has collected 5 of the most skillful admins to help us.after asking their name,i realized that almighty01 and Godmode_ON were among them,i was happy to meet bruce again.on sunday,14 of semptember,while other tankers didnt know what is going on and were celebrating tanksman day,25 of us went into a battle with the hackers,it was  min preparation and 30 minutes battle,so we were preparing when we realized that their paints have 50% protection from everything,after telling this to the tankers,bruce stepped up and said:they have tanks,but do they have skill.we can beat them.just plant mines all over the field.

after 10 minutes of mine planting,the battle started,we started pretty good,and semyon and bruce captured a flag together.after that i realized that godmode_ON didnt use mammoth,he was using the famous xp combo plus his paint.so he rushed to the enemy base at full speed took the flag but went over 2 mines,now he had only 30 hp left as he was coming to me a thunder shot him he had 20,then a rail did another shoot,only 5 when another shot from thunder and his dead,i took the flag and rushed to their base i saw a hacker using speed hack and racing with my wasp m2,then i realized what bruce said,i went in front of him and layed a mine, after stepping on it he flipped,i was close to capture but

(to be continued)

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Edited September 9, 2014 by AcE0SniiP

[r_danielbeton0 9]

                                      ghost tank in battle                                    stadium

 

 

hi this was happened in real story

there was 3 guys named has hero0,mas7,noob66 where playing battle stadium alone the battle was already full so... suddenly hero0 was  to see his scored he know battle is full but he saw a player ghost--kill-666 he was little scared and he think a monidator and he inform to everyone one everyone think how it will be possible huh.. asked by noob66 sunndely everyone saw ghost noob66 go and near to him closed and ask im hi how are you how you comed he ask gently ghost--kill--666 was have a different gun like thing noob66 ask him what type of gun suddently ghost shoots him then they have little amount of smoke and they saw noob66's paint written has 666 

they scared and try to leave the battle but suddenly they can't leave the battle they run each other suddenly hero0 was got by noob66 he was stsrts dshoot that time mas7 was push him and the 666 bullet goes to him soo mass'stank paint turned to 666

only left is hero0 he was run suddenly ghost---kill---666 noob66 mas7 was coved him 

suddenly hero0 got a idea and push his tank revered and he used nitro and go fast as he can and he goes very fast and go to conner of the wall side when suddenly everyone find him  he was hidding there so everyone go to near to him...suddenly his friend U.S.A21 is called him he was gotten a nice change to escape and he went to battle he feel happy that he escapes from his ghost but he still worry about his friends U.S.A21 ask him are you in fear you seen something a scaryed he asked hero0 thinks its just a thoughts soo he replyed ask no! but suddently he saw ghost's tank he frighted and U.S.A21 was near to him he told to him see the ghost--kill--666 let we run fast but U.S.A21 paint was turned into 666 he didd not know that ghost--kill--666 was shoots him...... that battle who are played the paints was turned into 666 he was got stuck everyone surround him and escape is not working behind is a wall and he can't escape........to be continued

by

danielbeton

[478words]

Edited September 13, 2014 by r_danielbeton0

[MMS169 0]

The Tanks of E.S.T {Elite Skilled Tankers}

 Our tank base on mars was being attacked and we needed to go there and save it from THE ALIENS , we packed up and got ready to go to space. We were about to take off when we heard a BOOM!!. Hornet! our base is being attacked, But we couldn"t do anything our plane already took off. We tried not to show our expressions we were 10 min. away from mars just then we got pulled into a blackhole we tried to maneuver it back but we were to weak.We were getting pulled in the middle BOOM!!

we were in the middle of the blackhole but we were alive there was something beyond the hole it was a... World...We were surprised and scared but we were the E.S.T we wanted to explore. ZING ZING ZING wasps health was getting low and suddenly he.. he exploded it was an isida but it got away.we were sad we lost hope but then.........

Edited September 6, 2014 by MMS169

[eminemrapgod 16]

Satank vs Jestank

One night in moon silence it was so cold I cant even descripe how cold it was but it was colder than the water that titanic sinked on as far as i know. There was jestank he has one goal and one goal only and that was to save all living tanks. Now you must be wondering what do you mean by saving? He wanted to save all the tanks from Hell.He had 400000 angels. And how much people were in heaven? Only a few cause only a few tanks would follow jestank he warned everyone in silence that a day would come where they would be now but no one listened to him and ignored him. Not  everyone but alot didnt listen to him.So you must be wondering how can his angels and him save all those suffering tanks. Read to find out. Now about hell. There was a tank named satank he was a monster. He had 1029333 angels and over 1200000 tanks in hell. What were the tanks doing in hell? They were suffering. There tanks slammed againist buildings, they burned forever in fire hotter than the sun, they had their turrets cut off and so much more i cant even say it in words they already hurt. Satan's angels were weak though the were so weak thats why he had so much of them. Jestank's angels were so strong they could destroy all satans angels in a flash, and look how much angels satank had and how much jestank had. Yes a big difference. So one day Jestank saw satank leave the battle as he cried for the tanks suffering.Satan left to change his turret and hull to the fat mammoth and the terrifying steaming hot firebird. Jesus rushed to his angels telling them the news. Then they didn't even have to come up with a plan they just destroyed satan's angels in a flash. Then they saved 75% of the suffering tanks. How did they save them? Then had wings and held it on their turrets. Then satan came back satan saw what happend and he saw all his angels were gone, completely gone, and he saw there were less tanks suffering. Then he said "What is the meaning of this". Then went of heaven.

 

Chapter 2

What will happen to Satank in heaven

Edited September 6, 2014 by eminemrapgod

[r_Santoz180 0]

 ‘I cannot believe we got locked in!  Locked . . . in a library!!’

 

‘Look, James, I’m not the only one who forgot time.  You were so stuck in that game, you looked as if you’d slipped into a coma.’

 

James’s heart thumped at his chest, and – strangely – reminded him of what the old machine guns must have sounded like during the First World War. 

 

‘You are letting your imagination run away with you,’ said Ben.

 

 

At that moment, a copy of ‘Worlds Greatest Tanks’  fell to the floor, followed by a copy of ‘Worlds Best Game’ by Tanki Online.

 

‘Crickey!!’ choked Ben, a knot of adrenalin bringing a tingle to his finger-tips (and, oddly, to his ear-lobes, too).

 

‘What?  WHAT IS IT?!’  asked James.

 

‘I CANNOT BELIEVE IT!!  Who would have thought it?  Well . . . something is definitely odd about this place.’

 

‘Yes . . . yes . . . that’s what I’ve been trying to tell you, Ben!!  We need to get out of here!’

 

‘No, no, no.  Not until we have put these books in the correct order.  I cannot believe our librarians would over-look this.   Now, THAT is creepy!!’

 

‘I cannot believe this, Ben!  We are stuck in this place all alone, and . . .’

 

‘Firstly, James, we are not ALONE.  If there’s one place where a person is definitely NOT all alone, it’s a library.  We are surrounded by computers here. I haven't even got my daily prize yet!!!!!

 

Suddenly, a SNAP, CRACK and a POP splits the coal-blackness. James and Ben felt the hairs on the nape of their necks stand to attention, as a desk-light turns on, painting surfaces in a sulphur-yellow wash.

 

‘Can I help you boys find a computer?’ said the resident librarian, eating her favourite bowl of cereal, Rice-Crispies  ‘Librarians never sleep boys.  Too many tanks to kill.  I’ll sleep when I’m dead.’

 

 

 

And that was when Ben noticed:

 Miss ‘Resident Librarian’ cast no shadow. 

 

 

:lol:

[L.a.u.r.e.n 144]

:tank: Historical Tanki Online :tank:

 

A year ago from now a young tanker called GeneralHarvey was gaining crystals from everywhere even he did there was so sad moments when he had suddenly lost an account.However, Tanki online had helped so much that he had got his account back again.This may be a good moment to tell you that he has been making loads of friends and has been in a clan which appreciates him and also been ranking so fast that we probably cant even count .But something bad has happened again you guessed it?? Well,it was the rusty barrels competition and he got declined into the competition.The next morning, a new day, a new start for GeneralHarvey when he had his first time doing parkour he realized that Tanki Online may sometimes annoy you but sometimes they make you realize how good it is. 

 

What do you think will happen next :ph34r:  ? Tanki Online salutes you :tank:

by GeneralHarvey

Edited September 6, 2014 by L.a.u.r.e.n

[B.R.A.V.E 734]

The 'Twins'.

A Normal Sunny Day for Twins , Walking in the Garden with His Girl Friend , Learning the Secret Spell That Could make AnyTank Invisible for a Specific Amount of Time .. She told the ingredients required to cast the spell .

A Bunny Hoped in thier way , Isida Told him that its a mischievous sign . Knowing that she had special powers , the twins Didn't Show interest in her words . Some devotee's of the Great Thunder Suddenly Attacked them and kidnaped the Isida .. they left Twins injured on the bridge . Twins woke up , trying to recover his Wounds meanwhile in the Castle , isida being tortured because she deny to expose the secret spell that made tankmen Invisible . She Didn't want the spell to fall in wrong hands .

 

 Twin gets First aid by his neighbour The Hunter' . He then Plans to Save her Friend .

He Trains himself to escape the pesky Smokey and Firebird Guards.

He learnt new Tactics from Hunter and Gets Rewarded with Loam to stay alive for long.

 

Twin Makes his Way To the Castle , Battling smokeys and Firebirds in the way ..

He Reaches the Evil Thunder , He Told Thunder to release her or else ..

 

Thunder , in arrogance , Shot Him. 

Twin being another captive of the Thunder was held in Basement Prisons.

 

A Suspicious Wasp and Railgun Sniping his way to the main enterence ..

He shoots once and till it reloads, gets dissoled in the darkness ..

His speed like Lighting ..

 

Evil Thunder Says ' Who is This Guy ? '

 

Chap #2 Soon.

Edited September 6, 2014 by B.R.A.V.E

[GeneralNapoleon 3]

          The Dream of the Diamond Thief

 

 

Many years ago, there was a man named John Burner. He was a train engineer. He was very good but, he argued with his colleuges and even with his employer Mr Dock. One day Mr Dock called John inside his office after having a brawl with another employee. He was FIRED. He Argued for a good Half an hour with his employer. But Mr Dock called Security, he was dragged out and thrown onto the street. He walked back to his house angry and upset. He walked past a lane with a row of goldsmiths shops and looked longingly at the money on the counter. He had a dream that night of a Diamond Thief just like him. When he woke that morning he thought he might try to take a look around the goldsmiths stores to see how easily you might be able to break in. He found one called Stable and co. Goldsmiths he took a look around. He noticed the windows at the front was not that thick. He walked bak home agian now it was lunchtime he walked back and had a sandwich. he thouht a lot over what he could do, he had all the tools for a jop like that perhaps he might be able to do it next sunday. Nobody would be around at all that day (This is set years ago when everybody went to church on sunday and didn't work on that day). It was friday today, he could buy a balaclava and a few more peices of equipment. he thought it best to go for the jewels on display as he could grab them out and run back to a hideout. OH NO I hadn't thought that I need a place to hide the jewels he said to himself. I know near the railway there is a broken down shed nobody ever go's in there. I will do it at 11 o'clock I must go and buy some dark clothes.He bought all of his needs, he was running out of money it slipped through his fingers. On Saturday he just slept. Sunday Night at 22:45 he put on his coat and hid his tools within them he decided to wear his balaclava when he got to the lane not to look suspicious. When he got there he pulled his mask over his face he walked to wear the goldsmiths shop he got out his hammer he could hear his heart beating and with one strike he smashed the glass he quickly pulled out the jewels and stuffed them in his coat pocket he ran and ran he heard someone behind him shouting HEY YOU THEIF STOP he got to the broken shed and ran in he saw a shelf and a chair he looked for a broken part of the wall he found a hole where he put the jewels he ran back home and slept for the rest of the next morning. He decided to look for a new job to look normal. A month later he got the jewels and sold them for a 1000 pounds

 

  THE END

 

                                      By GeneralNapoleon  A fiction story

[doctofanan 17]

In a hotel 

In one day of the month of March in a past 

A customer came to his hotel room and asked him, Is No. 49 ..... free :ph34r: ?? 

Yes, replied the owner of the hotel it's free :wacko: !!! 

Is it possible that he asked only for a one night :ph34r: ? 

Answered yes :wacko: ! 

And already booked the room and went up to it :ph34r:  

But before you climb a request from the owner of the hotel knife black and white silk thread length of 49 cm and an orange one weighing 72 grams  :ph34r:

Exclamation hotel owner requests exotic, but it brought him and ascended to his room and did not ask do not eat nor drink nor anything else :wacko: !!! 

Unfortunately the owner of the hotel room adjacent to the room 49 ... :o  

After midnight  :(

Heard the owner of the hotel is very, very strange noises inside the room ..... :o !!! 

Voices like predators and heard the voices cracking and beaten 

The hair was the room became a pile of ashes ...... :o !!!! 

sleep at night thinking about what is happening inside a room 49 ... :wacko: ? 

In the morning before leaving for the customer .... :ph34r:  

Asked the hotel owner :wacko: to inspect the room before leaving and already ascended to the owner of the hotel room  :wacko:

But he found everything as it is :( and silk thread in place and an orange as it is and black Knife in its place .. :blink: !!! 

The customer's payment account Tonight with multiplier as he gave :ph34r: a tip more than the expense of the room .......!

                          TO BE CONTINUE... :rolleyes:

[EA_KING 20]

                                                  The LAST STANDING ALONE MAN

 

      its just like a normal day, go to a 77 flag silence. we all go with all passion and no stop. there is hell out there , we cant stop

capturing enemy flags. my team do the best. oh see your back a hornet rail is coming from back and the freeze defender blow up less than a second he taking flag. his speed is great. the rails shooting him but he continue his way to top and all team seeking him... bang.

what does happened? yeah the last defender shaft killed him and flag returned. The blue team cant tolerate this heavy lose 37-6.and the game continues till we killed them all and go to upper level and own their base. they are leaving 1 and 1 .oh man whats happened ????

the drugers are coming. they all drugging and ruining all I made. whats happened??? they are killing my teammates and even me you cant do anything against 4 drugers and others are capturing flag. we are surrounded by drugers oh we cant do any thing. now my teammates are leaving but I cant accept this lose. I cant leave all I made.they are killing my teammates like drinking water and I cant even kill one druger.these isidas are charging them and now I am the last man standing against all them and they are still druging for 1.

yeah 10 vs 1.where is back up? where is all my teammates leave me alone???? maybe tit for tat but I never lose my help I fight till my last drop of blood. may I lose but lose like a man.im out of drug against these drugers and still fight just like a stubborn.....

 

you think they won.....haha you are wrong they captured 54 flags. now we are 54-39. what happened ??? all generalissimos are coming my side. oh see that titan smoky lying on flag.that ruthless man firing until critical damage come. oh see that twin mammoths firing like a machine gun. and that firebird melt these isidas in no time.we going to win. they cant even capture 1 another flag till we become 77 and my best win strike in tanki online.

 

                                                                                                    THE END

 

(Based on a true story.in that fight I won 4k crystals and my score was about 3500 and I never again go in long battles specially 300 minutes battles )

     

Edited September 6, 2014 by EA_KING