Contest [Issue 26] Continue the Story! [Chapter 1]

[hshs2010 2]

Error game

On the day you're above the one the houses of the process of parkour then descended five Gold Xbox I got over the House Abve you're above it and then you robbed quickly and did not know it was there fault a game and when the second day I opened the account I did not find the five thousand Crystal and marvel of the piece, and when I opened the values ​​found 300 forces of everything I said and why I went five thousand Dat I have you have purchased by 300 troops from everything and did not know it was the administration of the game but you Vassallo one of my friends on Skype and she told me of the game I was really remarkable coincidence

[Athboy123 11]

 

Forgotten 

 

Bright sunny day, fresh smell of air and chattering birds. A perfect day for taking a walk.Lisa takes the long route. This is her absolute favorite place for a Sunday walk.  Summer homes along the river bank give it a cozy feel. The river brings peace and calm to her soul, a respite from the daily grind.  She lets her mind wander as she walks,  one thought leading to the next going nowhere in particular. The soft clump of her sneakers on the pavement provides familiar comfort.

 

Then—a loud snap of a branch to her right startles her.  Looking over, she expects to see a squirrel or a bird. No movement, and she continues on.

 

Another crackling of branches, the crunching of leaves and a rustling noise come from the right.  Lisa begins to walk faster, imagining an animal, or maybe even someone hidden in the bushes.  The rustling stops.  Now she hears voices, and they are coming from down toward the river. She stops walking and listens. The first voice is rough and deep, with a hint of an accent.

 

“Hey, put it down here and cover it up. Make sure it’s covered good.  No, not there, over this way.”

 

There is no response from whoever he is speaking to. Then she hears a diffident voice.

 

“It’s too heavy to push over there.  Let’s just cover it here and leave it.” This one has a husky, cigarette-smoking voice.

 

“Nah, can’t do that. Gotta get it out of here.  It’s gotta go with the rest, into the truck. Come on, don’t be a slug, help me out here.” She hears grunts and groans and lots of rustling. Curious, she creeps closer to the edge through a small space between some trees, where she can just catch a glimpse.

 

What she sees causes her to freeze.

 

Three big and burly men, pushing at a mound of something, she can’t see what.  The men are too close together for her to see through them.

 

“Move!” She silently shouts to herself.

 

As if they had heard her, they step aside for a moment. Then she can see part of something big and long being rolled up.

 

She backs away. What on earth has she just seen?  What are they trying to get rid of, way down by the river?  She wants to get a better look, but fear has her wavering. Should she walk away or stay and look closer? Her sensible side says to get out of there now!  But curiosity is a strong force. She gets even closer to the edge, holding on to a branch so she can get a better look.

 

Just past where the men are gathered she sees the back end of a small truck, parked along a dirt road that leads down toward the river bank. She had no idea the road even existed.

 

One of the men glances up her way.  Fear seizes her. She jumps back and starts walking away, inwardly cursing herself for being so stupid. Now what?....

 

Jtipt ahem....I kno..you cant hide it from me..

[Legend_of_Kosovo 2]

A Man had 3 beautiful girlfriends but didn't knowwhich one to marry.As a test, he decided to give each woman $5.000  to see how they would spend it.

The 1st girlfriend went out and got herself a complete makeover.She told him. "I spent the money so i could look preety for you because i LOVE you so much!" 

 

The 2nd went shopping and bought the man new golf clubs, an Ipad and an 80-inch flatscreen television.She said, "I bought these gifts for you because i LOVE you so much" !!

 

The 3rd woman took $5.000 and invested it in the stock market, doubled her investment, returned $5.000 to the man and reinvested the rest, She said, "I'm investing the rest of the money for our future because i LOVE you so much"!

 

The man thought long and hard about each of his girlfriendshad spent the money, and then he decided to marry the one with....  -_-

.....TO BE CONTINUED  GladiatorBEHRAMI

Edited September 13, 2014 by Legend_of_Kosovo

[Legend_of_Kosovo 2]

                                                                                                 THE MYSTERIOUS TANK

 

I'm in a XP battle

 

I said " where is he " ( because i don't see THE BLUE TANK")

 

One player of my team said "he try to capture the flag kill him".

 

I kill him but he have prodigi and i need 3 shoot of raligun m3 and i know i need 2 raligun m3 i said " help me guys please kill him" and they don't understand because they're russian.

 

He will capture the last flag but i kill him. B)

 

When i kill him he said " i'm going to fly" and he did it appeared to me curious about tanki online and after 10 secondes one of my friends kill him and he said " I will destroy this map and you can not play on tanki online on your account as they will block :o

 

To Be Continued :)

[boyice 18]

  

 

                     THINGS NEVER CHANGE.     

                                                                                      

                                                                        ~~CHAPTER 1~~

 

 

Noise of a houling dog disturbed my sleep at approximetly 6am.I walked down the stairs to 

get ready for my school.I took my time. I thought that it would be a normal day.But 

something changed my life that day.As our new academic year started just a few days ago

we didn't knew that  our sections will be shuffeled.

 

I didn't knew much of mates of the other section.When our teacher read out the names to be transfered to other section,

our teacher called out,

 

"Ashley! looks like you are gonna be the first who should 

say goodbye to your friends and depart"

 

"No problem mam " i replied in a low voice.

 

Although i was not that populour in my class, but i didn't knew that my popularity 

would increase and and my life would be turned on its head after arriving in the

 section 'A'.

 

And there i met Emily Rule.I don't have a habit of talking  to girls. One of my mate told

me that she is a very brilliant student.Although she was not that good looking

But that night,the whole night i don't know why i was thinking about her.

 

 

END OF CHAPTER 1........plzz this is a love story....i wrote everything what i experinced.....names are changed
 

Edited September 17, 2014 by boyice

[DeSandro 0]

Sounds like an awesome idea, i am definitely going to give it a shot. I was just wondering where i would submit it?

[yehonatan144 18]

 The Curse Of The Tanker!

He was a player. A regular Tanki Online player, but he didn't know that the game of his Tanki Online life was about to change. He saw the perfect battle "gold box battle". Since he needed 1000 crystals for m3 hornet, he thought he could catch with the other seven players failing. When he came in the battle, he saw something weird. On the chat, he saw other players were respecting one big tanker as " the chief of the village". ' Weird', he thought, 'These people are acting like this type of tribe. All the tribe members had to respect their leader or they would get cursed in the thing they were doing forever. Unless, of course, some type of antidote i don't remember'. So he played on and he saw, nobody was killing the respected person on the chat, and he wasn't as good to the respected tank player. Some time went, and the words on the screen were finally the ones he wanted "gold box will be dropping soon". He got excited, but he saw the well respected player wrote on the chat " don't get gold or else". The gold fell but he thought ' I can take the gold . I am not part of their "tribe" '. So he took the gold . One minute until the game ends, the respected person said on the chat " you will get a curse because you did something the chief told you to do. The game was over and everybody left. He went to lunch and when he came back, he saw that the game says he didn't buy hornet at all! He worried a little, ' oh well', he thought, 'must be a glitch and tomorrow it will be back. He played with dictator, for now. He played in a battle and saw the rare and once a decade " 100 gold boxes will be dropped soon". He thought he was lucky, but when the first gold fell, he lost a thousand when a player caught it! When the 100th gold fell, he lost a hundred thousand crystals! He worried ' which hacker would do this to me, or... nah'. He should have thought of it, because the next day, it said " player ______ is banned forever. The reason was faded in black. Reason:  Disrespecting his chief!!!  He was really worried now. He ant in the battle and he saw smokey m0 with m0 hunter with no paint. He pressed the garage to change but it said " because you disrespected a leader, we will not allow you to change in garage. ' I knew it! it was the tribe I was thinking but the only way for the antidote is...!!

 

Listen to next chapter if you want to know the antidote and how he survived the Tanki Online curse, on chapter 2!

Edited September 16, 2014 by yehonatan144

[theimpaler101 0]

A bunch of kids were doing what kids do and making a den behind there house. Now one of the kids the smarter one is diggin a hole for a fence when "clunk!". He looks down and finds himself looking at a large slab of rock. He calls his friends over and gets them to help lift the slab. Underneath decended a ladder into an antold darkness. Kids being kids decide to go down without telling anyone where they were goin. Once at the bottom the kids find them selves in a slimy tunnel that slowly sloped downward. The treck down is a wet, slipy and rather disgusting one, but when they reached the bottom they discovered what looked like a submarine door. After struggling with the door for 10 minutes they finaly open it, and what they saw, they would never forget......

 

 

Hi to get the rest just add me and i will give you the rest

 

theimpaler101

Edited September 8, 2014 by theimpaler101

[No.Game_No.Life 73]

ok i gave my best shot

[Guest Maserati]

Best chapter ever :P You should try out and become a reporter as im pretty sure you would do an awesome job

 

 

It was a dark, cold and shadowy night. My friends and I were walking down the street. The city was pitch-black, with the only serviceable light source being the full moon. I was walking with Robert and Boris which at times posed an inexorable dilemma – they were covered within the night. I was well out of breath, to such an extent that I was trudging down the grotesque street. It’s infuriating because it was never like this before. The town of Bymist was highly revered for being as clean as a whistle but it appears it’s been debased by today’s youth.

“Anton, speed up the pace!” said Robert vehemently. He’s known for a while that I’ve been at a disadvantage when it comes to walking. You see, I’m a big lad; I’m not really a fan of exercise or anything that involves excessive movement. Due to that, I never really had a great childhood. My stature was a comedic gold mine. For years, I tried to whittle away at the pounds but it always amounted to nothing. That’s why, given that Robert and I have known each other for decades that he would acknowledge this and slow down for me. However, it seemed that was too much to ask.

“HURRY UP!” Robert then screamed. “If you don’t speed up the pace, I’m leaving without you!” After hearing that boisterous voice, it became apparent that my unhurried demeanour was a problem here. “Leave him alone, Robert!” Boris then said in a venture to stick up for me. “Fine then!” Robert finally replied. “I really can’t stay here. I’m out.” At this point, it was certain that Robert was perturbed it was down to Boris and I to get to the root of the problem. “What’s the matter?!” Boris asked, clearly proving our thought patterns were similar just then. Robert just ignored him, however; he wasn’t prepared to give anything away.

“Come on, we’re your friends!” I said, more enthusiastic than I’d been in a while. “Please stop!” barked Robert. “I don’t want you to be affiliated in anyway!” By then, I was able to break it down; I had concluded someone else was involved. “Who is it?” I said in a straight tone. “Who is troubling you?” By the expression that beamed off Robert’s face, it appeared that I was right. “I’ve said too much, I’ve got to go!” he then replied, before quickly storming off. Verily someone was bothering him, but we didn’t know why, and more significantly, who. I arrived at my trench and gave Boris the necessary send-off before slumping off inside.

“Take my hand, dear” said my mother, in a futile attempt to get me out of the state I was in. I’ve known Robert from way back so seeing him like that really hit home. There was absolutely nothing I could do. "Please, dear" my mother then said. It appeared she was very worried about me. "You needn't worry" I responded, in an endeavour to reassure her.

 I didn’t know anything regarding the case, but one thing was certain; it’s that I would not rest until I found everything out.

 

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•  

[danrock99 1]

CHAPTER - 1

 

Today I am

plodding tired,

a day-long’s

listless languishing.

My frowsy fingers tapping

sluggishly along convoluted,

complex computer keys.

Will I succeed to

the next stroke?

 

I make the move

My head held high on the pride filled dictator

And i see it

I see the golden treasure of king hades falling right at me

I stood there with the enemy gathered round me

 

But.... Whats this its a trap i had fallen into it

I close my eyes

 

And My murky mind

of floating thoughts

drifts through

muddy waters

empty sluggish efforts

 

I open my eyes and whats this the keyboard at my finger tips is no more

And it didnt take me long to realize that i was no more in world i used to be

I was lost in a world never known to mankind

I was in the land of the ....... (Aaaaaaah)

 

- TO BE CONTINUED.

[noobster_GT 89]

In the intense, pitch black, unlit darkness beneath the brutal and violent seas of the pacific, despite the crashing power of the waves, muffled under the dense waters below. The overcast of frothy pollution coated ocean waters created a chilling atmosphere. The pale algae hazed the sea floor making it difficult detect anything that lay hidden in the undergrowth.

 

I gliding through the empty sea, unaware of the dormant dangers that may lurk nearby, Bearing in mind to take caution.

 

Drifting along the weak flow of the current; exploring beyond this perilous, deserted underworld, swimming virtually without motion, almost limiting my breathing for a moment. The water smelt and tasted pungent with salt.

 

Then all of a sudden it emerged out of nowhere. The most tiniest minuscule of movements I had detected seeming that I hadn't been in contact with civilization for years, alerting my starved body with the simulating taste of food and blood, reminding me that I hadn't eaten for five days.

 

I knew what this meant.

 

This flooded my organs with bodily hormones and adrenalin, failing to sustain the excitement. I broke in desperation and burst into instinct and infiltrated though the clouds of algae. Despite the prohibition of my sight, it was guaranteed my aim was on target. I penetrated through the thicker waters, climbing to the surface towards the dim glow of daylight. The crushing weight of the ocean sea released me as I surfaced for my kill.

 

I perceived perfectly and instantly sunk my teeth into flesh and bone, spearing the unwilling victim in the torso and thrashing the body around in triumph, I knew the body was not a fish. The meat was warmer and succulent. The blood began to bleed heavily and ruby red goodness that was driving me to madness stained the ocean surface. The creature attempted to recede and escape, useless limbs pushed and thrusted against my head in frustration, followed by piercing wails in agony.

 

I've heard similar cries as I ever heard them on the surface before, sharp and intense noises.

 

'CRAACKK!'

 

The splashes continued and the cries grew louder down as I instinctively fastened my teeth into the creature’s abdomen, avoiding releasing my grip. Sooner, I’d sense others spotted our brawl in the far distance on the beaches, shouting in response. The animal gradually fell silent and departed. I withdrew underwater in distress with the carcass, hopefully without much detection from rivals who like steal my prize.

 

I was victorious, carrying the blood-drenched corpse in my jaws. My adrenalin dropped and I was once calm again.

 

I savored the flesh as most predators would, slowly chewing the rich tender innards first. I then swam back through my familiar hunting grounds away from the coast line to the secluded coral bays to consume. I go there because it’s a recognizable environment for me. With the dark, rocky coral for the benefit of my camouflage, the pests and bottom feeders cower in nearby crevasses as they see me float past.

 

Near dying as the sea is, I wish I wouldn't have to venture to the surface to survive, but at the same time, ameliorating my methods to reach further gives me the power to remain dominant in my kingdom...

 

 

(This was part of a piece written by me in secondary school for creative writing I've touched up on it a bit and sent it here)

 

Thanks

 

-noobster_GT

Edited September 9, 2014 by noobster_GT

[TANKE-DESTRUCTOR 0]

CHAPTER 1

 

One day..

[r_blackflag2220 15]

I got epilepsy trying to read this ;_; 

haha.

[destroyer806 2]

                                  Chapter 1

There was a guy who liked alpacas. The end

[destroyer806 2]

                                  Chapter 1

There was a guy who liked alpacas. The end

i like it!!!!!!

[TheLonelyEpic 212]

~reserved~

[girlzruel 1]

Im sorry if its too long!!!!!!!!!! i got to into it

 

 

  I was running in the small alleyways from some guy who I had stolen from (I quite good at it). I took some beans and he wanted them back, well, do any of you guys know the story of the magic beans? I do and i was planing on planting those beans and hiding away from this life. Anyway, I make a few tricky turns that I knew the fat guy couldn't do.

  I ran around the corner and into my secret hole. I could hear him huffing and puffing (Get it? Like the 3 little pigs?) . I heard him walk right over my hole. He was yelling 'Boy! Give me those beans back or I'll. . .I'll. . .I'll sent you to jail for thievery and murder!' and I thought fine you can have your beans back! and I put them in my pea shooter and well, I guess you can figure out what happened next, right? Well if you don't know I'll tell you.

  Okay so, you remember that I put the beans in the pea shooter and that the store keeper was walking over my hole right? So, I put the beans in one at a time and spit them at him (You guys are luck that I did this a lot). HE turned around as the last bean was shot and it hit him square in the forehead, just like Goliath from the bible, he fell. And you know the 'bigger they are the harder they fall' right? As he was falling I shot out of my secret hole, still falling, I burst past him, he fell, I jumped, he yelled as the air left his lungs, I skipped, around him. And you know what? He made a mini earthquake. The pebbles jumped and landed as I turned the corner. I got a small glimpse at him, he was out cold. I raced away.

  I got home. I was yelled at, beaten, kicked, smacked, and worst of all my little brother had to watch me get beaten. I saw his face in glimpses between my father punches. It was the most horrible thing I had ever seen. He was crying and he tried to help but I told him not to because we both knew who would die. But he loved e too must to just stand there.

 He ran full speed screaming the most fiercest battle cry (or a cry a child about 5 yrs could scream) and he launched him self at dad, they fell, the beating stopped for a moment, then the sound I would never forget was that poor cry of death form my little bro. My heart broke full of pain, illness, and love of my brother. He was only 5, and that's when the animal came. I could see clearer but i couldn't thing as all my anger, fear, and hatred turned me into a monster. And that the sound I WILL NEVER forget. My battle cry of rage and the look on my face (and the animal) was enough for my dad to realize what he did. But it was too late, my brother was dead, and I was going to kill him for it. I lunged and beat him, I kicked and kicked and punched the way he did to me countless times. My punches rained down on him, he tried to defend himself but was too shocked of my rage and that I, me, summoned a spirit animal after I had taken the nectar 3 years ago.

  The animal finally stopped me, but it was too late, I had killed him. I wept for my brother, and just then I had a thought: Why had the animal come now? My mother left and both the people I had lived with since then were dead. Why now? Is it my brother?

The animal was a fox, its coat was darker than any foxes coat should be. His back ears, tail, nose, and legs were black as night, as black as oil, it was jet black. His name I noticed then was Midnight.

  Midnight and I came to an understanding and in a flash he was on the back of my neck. I packed everything I needed and left the house nevery to return...never. I snuk though the allies and back roads in a walled city of Erua. I snuk out a left that city. It was filled with hopelessness for me. I left in the dead night, nothing stirred...nothing. It was surprisingly quite and still. I reached the wall and climbed over without hesitating. I ran on and on and on.

[tatianacucos 0]

 

The Arena Kings

Chapter - 1

Once upon a time, there were three friends. There names were FireHorn (Firebird and Hornet), ThunderMoth (Thunder and Mammoth) and VikingFreeze (Freeze and Viking).  They were playing around a DM in Arena. They were totally bored and were waiting for something special. Suddenly GodMode ON appeared on the ground! Now, they were very excited. GodMode ON is a tank with a special paint, which makes it extremely difficult to kill him. The three friends made a plan to work as a team and Kill GodMode ON. GodMode ON was in its full form and was not in a mood of being destroyed very easily. Firehorn, ThunderMoth and VikingFreeze covered GodMode ON from three sides and started Hitting..

To

     be  

         Continued...                    

                                              

Stay Tunned!

:excl: END OF PART 1 :excl: 

 

Cool!!!

[godmode_dead 2]

                                                    THE STAR THAT FELL FROM THE SKY

 

:) Chapter 1 

                The Legend

 

‘’A long time ago a star fell from the sky. It was found by ancient people, who build a temple for it and then they preyed it as a god every day until their lives ended. Some legends says that the star still lies in the ancient ruins in the temple’’, my grandmother said.

 

Eventually Kevin and I decided to find it. We went on for search this legend on a full moon night without even telling to their parents.

[rockstarvalled 2]

No replies?  :(  Even if you think it's bad at least let me know and give a suggestion or two.  B)

Friend me too but it,s down voting your,s better than me good luck.

[r_mohammadnasef0 0]

I 

 

 

The Arena Kings

Chapter - 1

Once upon a time, there were three friends. There names were FireHorn (Firebird and Hornet), ThunderMoth (Thunder and Mammoth) and VikingFreeze (Freeze and Viking).  They were playing around a DM in Arena. They were totally bored and were waiting for something special. Suddenly GodMode ON appeared on the ground! Now, they were very excited. GodMode ON is a tank with a special paint, which makes it extremely difficult to kill him. The three friends made a plan to work as a team and Kill GodMode ON. GodMode ON was in its full form and was not in a mood of being destroyed very easily. Firehorn, ThunderMoth and VikingFreeze covered GodMode ON from three sides and started Hitting..

To

     be  

         Continued...                    

                                              

Stay Tunned!

:excl: END OF PART 1 :excl: 

 

I Like it ;)

[Gangham_Style 213]

Deleted :D

Edited September 23, 2014 by Gangham_Style

[nowimcool 1]

                                                                             Silence of the Tanks 

                                                                                  CHAPTER 1

 

It was a day in the Polygon and all the tanks were battling.They battled and battled until they waited for the gold box to fall.Eventually,the top of all the tankers screen said gold box will be dropped soon.Everyone was excited as it was tanki online's 10th birthday.Only Godmode_ON.He went for the gold box.He got there and was guarding it.Nobody got to it and all he did was destroy everyone.And when he did no one re-spawned.Was this the extinction of tanks? End of chapter 1.I hope you liked reading it! I made it myself.My name is nowimcool

[SammieG8422 10]

someone got into my account and wiped out my crystals, i don't know how to change my password. it says it has insructions but it doesn't. i really need help because i do not want to start all over, please tell me how i can change it