Contest [Issue 26] Continue the Story! [Chapter 1]

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The golden sun was falling and the pale yellow moon was rising.I was in my truck driving down a country road that was my customary route during peak-season.As i continued on,I began ascending what most folks call 'Knoll Mountain.'The leaves from the trees that hung above the road were falling as I drove by.I remeber looking down the beautiful hallows below the road full of red,yellow and orange leaves.So on I went driving up that steep mountain.Eventually I began to descend down the hillside and into the area folks call the 'Crow Creek Crossroads'.The crossroads split into four different roads:Peek Drive,Henry Road,Ground Hog Road and Darkened Drive.All the folks around here travel on each road-that is, except for Darkened Drive.The name certainly fits its,but there's just something else about that one road.People around here have claimed hearing strange noises coming from the woods that follow along the road.They say at night you can hear ghoulish howling and the echoes of knocking.Of course,on an evening like this,I just could'nt resist driving down that raod.

 

With darkness falling upon me,and being alone easily creates premonition.The trees were leafless as I drove by them  and I could see the sun falling behind me in my rearview mirror.Sure I wanted an adventure,but nothing like what was about to happen to me.Suddenly I drove past a sign covered Virginia creeper and a dark road leading into the woods.I stopped and put it in reverse.As i slowly drove backwards I was looking into the woods.My heart honestly felt something to me...calling me to go in.I backed up so that I could read the sign-it had two words that aroused my curiosity:''Spooknite Valley.''That road already had a frightening name,but the name on the sign was even more ominous.Soon enough,the sky was becoming a darker gray and the wind began to pick up.What was i thinking?

 

Off down the dark road I went,venturing into what I had no idea,but it was going to be my worst nightmare.As i was driving down the road,out of the corner of my eye I spotted this tall hairy...

 

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Edited September 10, 2014 by aBdUlLaHkInGg

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                                                                   The Haunted Road

 

The golden sun was falling and the pale yellow moon was rising.I was in my truck driving down a country road that was my customary route during peak-season.As i continued on,I began ascending what most folks call 'Knoll Mountain.'The leaves from the trees that hung above the road were falling as I drove by.I remeber looking down the beautiful hallows below the road full of red,yellow and orange leaves.So on I went driving up that steep mountain.Eventually I began to descend down the hillside and into the area folks call the 'Crow Creek Crossroads'.The crossroads split into four different roads:Peek Drive,Henry Road,Ground Hog Road and Darkened Drive.All the folks around here travel on each road-that is, except for Darkened Drive.The name certainly fits its,but there's just something else about that one road.People around here have claimed hearing strange noises coming from the woods that follow along the road.They say at night you can hear ghoulish howling and the echoes of knocking.Of course,on an evening like this,I just could'nt resist driving down that raod.

 

With darkness falling upon me,and being alone easily creates premonition.The trees were leafless as I drove by them  and I could see the sun falling behind me in my rearview mirror.Sure I wanted an adventure,but nothing like what was about to happen to me.Suddenly I drove past a sign covered Virginia creeper and a dark road leading into the woods.I stopped and put it in reverse.As i slowly drove backwards I was looking into the woods.My heart honestly felt something to me...calling me to go in.I backed up so that I could read the sign-it had two words that aroused my curiosity:''Spooknite Valley.''That road already had a frightening name,but the name on the sign was even more ominous.Soon enough,the sky was becoming a darker gray and the wind began to pick up.What was i thinking?

 

Off down the dark raod I went,venturing into what I had no idea,but it was going to be my worst nightmare.As i was driving down the road,out of the corner of my eye I spotted this tall hairy...

 

TO BE CONTINUED...      

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Spine Chillers-      First Chapter

The night was chilly. I remained still, refusing to shiver. Any movement would be heard by the preternatural prey I stalked. Even my breathing was slow and regulated, so as not to mist in the unnaturally cold air—though my heart wanted to hammer its way out of my chest. My body wanted to fidget, every instinct telling me to move, to do something, preferably to run away, but I waited. Listening. Watching.

         

The chattering noise echoed through the trees, and I knew I had struck proverbial gold. Excitement threatened to force my breathing into irregular gasps, but I remained controlled. The wind carried their shrill voices—the strange, animalistic language resonating through the interwoven branches overhead—and I knew they were coming closer. I dared to turn my head, ever so slowly, to peer around the tree trunk that was my camouflage. Two pairs of glowing eyes, the only parts of the creatures visible in the limited light, were bouncing in my direction. I would have only seconds.

         

They drew closer, and I allowed my muscles to tense, prepared for the swift movements of my blade that would rend their malformed heads from their shoulders. They would pass within feet of me, and then they would be mine............. 

 

End of First Chapter

Edited September 7, 2014 by r_Incipio0

[RodrigoLimaSLB 2]

Once upon a time , there was a  recruit who really wished to be Generalíssimo, the number 1 guy in the rating , the next big thing ! As a first map he took over Cross , and ranked-up... His first Gold Box was a Gold Box with 5000 crystals , right in Tanki's birthday in Dusseldorf , he just came back from school and he was playing with his cousin, he was really happy ! In the next day he went to Serpuhov , but now there was only 1000 crystals Gold Box , and guess what happened !!! 

 

End of chapter 1 !

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   The Start

 

The start, the start of it all. It was a usual battle, I and my friends were coming back from capture the flag. This of course was in the the world oof TO. Out of the blue, I heard thunder outside my room in greenland. My parents yelled at me to switch off the computer. I being obstinate , did not listen. I heard the thunder getting closer. Still I did not pay attention to my parents or the incoming storm but clicked on another battle, just as i clicked enter .Then, It happened, the lightning hit my computer and me along with it , I became unconsious . When I woke up, I woke in a place just too familiar. It was the infamous arena of silence.i did know what happened or how it happened , but there I was a member of the blue team.I tried to look at my hands and feet but I could not see them . Instead I saw wheels for feet and a firebird for hands. I had become the literal version of BE THE TANK. Suddently, I saw another tank of the opposite team racing towards me . I did that came on my first instinct.

 

                                              End Of Chapter 1

Edited September 7, 2014 by harry69066

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Edited September 7, 2014 by harry69066

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                                         The Return Of Evil

 

As dialy i was playing tanki in polygon...

And iam  in the lead 

so kept my rail m1 and hornet m1 

As it was a tdm then suddenly the rail m2 

dictator m1 enteded the game i forgot his name

he killed and destroyed evry one then me the main

player destroyed him then again he....................

[ORDINARY_DUDE 44]

 

Arnold Kampreiser

 

Chapter 1

Who is "silent soldier"?

 

 

 1st of September, A fine day when I (CRIME_GUY) was playing tanki online.There was quit a lot of battles in server 3. After careful consideration I decided to go to the silence CTF. Turns out It was one hard core battle, even  generalissimos were there. When ever there are high rank players I knew there would be a lot of battle funds. I was playing in Freeze and viking, and of course the second I came to the battle there were druggers.  The score is 10:8 the opposing team were in the lead. And then just when I was about to go to capture the flag a player approached me. His name was Silent soldier. He was in thunder m2 and viking m2. With my usual tactics I tried to kill him with double power but no use he just stood there and with 1 shot he blew my m1 viking. I was confused normally my viking gives a little more fight against another tank. We lost the battle, so I went to the forum and searched for "Silent soldier"

nothing came out with the results. I tried going to the Russian forum and searched for "Silent soldier" as usual nothing came to my screen. I tried the German one as well but the result was the same.I went back to the game and sent a friend request to him.

He didn't approved it, and then i knew something was up.I have heard of the rumors about  such mysterious players, he was quit like GOD_MODE_ON but I went back to the battle and hold 'tab' to see the battle statistics and he was in the top of the list with 66 kills and 0 lost. I was totally confused and 

I knew it was time to improvise. I played like crazy aiming for one desire to destroy Silent soldier.

I was defenseless against his never ending attacks. And then the tables changed my friend death tiger showed up to the battle. We stand unite against our offence and defense. We called that strategy the "Dual demolition" When I went in the offence he stay to defense. When I stay defense he goes on the offence.finally our team was in the winning streak. We both went on the offence and tried to find silent soldier, but our efforts were worthless. he must have been a master in parkour and he was in the highest peak in  silence besides he was SNIPPING. 

​We went out to a Private  battle and death tiger asked " Who was that dude?"

"I have no idea" I replied. "Then I guess it's time for investigate."

 

With our efforts we were able to find that His real name was Arnold kampreiser. It was hard to find information about him. The only way to find information is from GOD_MODE_ON it was really hard but he spilled the beans. He lived in England, London to be exact. And he also said that Arnold is CURSED because he was the best tank man in the history of tanki online. The other players was jealous because he was the best. So they turned towards a sorcerer who lived in the forests of Acetir , and his curse has made Arnold a crazy player in tanki online.

He never sleeps,  He never rests till his enemies are destroyed not even a single post, a single letter in the chat is he really the zombie tanker??  

end of chapter 1

 

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                                     'THE MYSTERY OF THE UNKNOWN NOISES'

                                                                           Chapter 1

It was a cold night .... the winter made people stay snug in their home, but a lonely man makes his way through the woods .... He trudges through the lonely path as he hears eerie noises .... 'unknown noises', as the people of his town describe them , the fear of everybody are those unknown noises which come out at night. Nobody has been brave enough to find out the source of the noises, those 3 brave people who went had never returned ... since then the 'noises' have been the talk of the town, but the young man was determined to find the source of the noises. He was a brave warrior and a clever one too ....  he was not afraid of the superstitions made by the people of his village and was determined to find the mystery of the strange noises and the secret behind the disappearance of the people from the village. Slowly he made his way to the woods. 

The eerie noises came closer and closer. As he passed through a thicket, he suddenly heard someone move behind him ... he tried not to be scared and he muttered enough courage to look behind ... was this the source, he thought. As he turned his around he was beginning to feel scared .... finally he looked back and what he saw was astonishing. He wouldn't have believed it if he wasn't seeing it with his own eyes. But what did he see?? ...

End of Chapter 1 .... to be continued

Edited September 7, 2014 by general1699

[bonecrusher2222 2]

Parkour Masters (part 1)

There once, was a young tank born, named bonecrusher2222, in a place called 'Parkour DM'. Legend says that whoever is born in that place, once in every V-LOG emergence, he will have great power to do any dive or flip he wanted. The young tank got that very same powers, but he was not very good at it. He wanted to learn more about it, so he had to do a difficult task. He left his parents in order to learn more . He cried on the inside but did not show it to anyone, and there started his journey. On his way, he met a person. He was Blowmygoat. Crusher asked him about some parkour tricks, he gladly accepted to teach them.With great effort, he learned most of the tricks like he flip and the spin etc. Blowmygoat gave him Railgun and Wasp M1.Happily he tested his new skills in a mountain which's end is very very deeeeep inside.He was not afraid and went. He jumped and fliped, not going fast enough, he was falling down. But suddenly..............

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A Horseman in the Evening

One sunny afternoon in the autumn of the year 1861 a soldier lay in clump of laurel by the side of a road in western Virginia. He lay at full length upon his stomach, his feet resting upon the toes, his head upon the left forearm. His extended right hand loosely grasped his rifle. But for the somewhat methodical disposition of his limbs and a slight rhythmic movement of the cartridge-box at the back of his belt, he might have been thought to be dead. He was asleep at his post of duty. But if detected he would be dead shortly afterward, death being the just and legal penalty of his crime..

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                                                       Angel

                                                               Of

                                                                  Death....

 

A raven circled the night sky above me.

Ever so often, its black eyes gazed down below at the vacant road and then

back to my cold gray eyes. A long time ago, my mother once told me that

blackbirds are the reminders of the lost souls. They soar the heights of

heaven to view the life they used to have and are in search for a new one to

take away. Back then I thought it was just a silly fable to scare me away from

the woods. Now, I know that it's the truth.

I reached for my gold pocket watch and right on cue, the blackbird flew down

to my shoulder. I glanced at the raven and imagined its beak formed into a

grin as it looked down at the watch ticking towards death.

As the minute hand reached thirty, a car's headlights came into view

breaking the darkness as promised. With a subtle nod of my head, the raven

soared into the dark sky. I closed my watch, placed it back inside my black

coat and heard a rustling noise from behind. I turned around and saw a fawn

hiding behind a weeping willow. I already knew the events that were going to

unravel before me, but it still amazed me how precise everything always

went.

The car rounded the corner and the raven was poised at ready, eagerly

waiting for the few seconds to pass. The raven glided down to the white car

and landed right on the windshield as instructed. The driver abruptly stopped

the car and profanity escaped her soft lips. After the few failed attempts of

whisking the bird off her car, she continued to drive not caring about the

obnoxious bird that was tilting its head while it stared at her through the

window.

She was in a hurry and I knew why. Her soon-to-be fiancé had a romantic

dinner planned were he was ready to take her hand in marriage. She was

clueless to the proposal and only anxiety filled her stomach while she drove

back home. The thought of seeing her lover quickly vanished from her mind  when the sound of wings flapping against the windshield consumed her

ears. The raven flew off her window only to reveal a frightened fawn crossing

the road.

Her instincts were fast, but not fast enough. The car swiveled by the sudden

maneuver and then tumbled upside down by the force due to the spinning.

The sight before me would cause tears in anyone's eyes, but my own. She

groaned softly as she tried to escape this deadly accident.

"Sir, help me," she cried while squinting her eyes to get a better look of me

through the shattered window. The raven flew to the ground and walked over

to her side before I had the chance to do it myself. Catching sight of the

appalling bird caused her to whimper out of fear and hatred.

"Please help me," she begged. The raven flew back up to my shoulder as I

knelt down to take a look at her. Her pleading green eyes were going in and

out of consciousness as I examined the state she was in. Blood trailed down

her auburn hair, causing it to stick to her pale face; her strength was

weakened from the crash making it difficult for her to retrieve herself from the

prying hands of the car.

"What's your name?" I asked. I already knew her name, it was Jessica, but I

had to make sure.

"Jessica," she replied weakly as if life was already drained from her.

I sighed and extended my hand to her heart, letting my fingers brush her

skin. With just one touch, her heart stopped beating, her lungs shriveled up

and her soul became mine to collect. This is the task I am designed to do, no

matter how hard I tried to fight against it. For years, I was cursed with this

power and it will stay that way for eternity....

 

 

To

    Be

        Continued......

 

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                                                       Angel

                                                               Of

                                                                  Death....

 

A raven circled the night sky above me.

Ever so often, its black eyes gazed down below at the vacant road and then

back to my cold gray eyes. A long time ago, my mother once told me that

blackbirds are the reminders of the lost souls. They soar the heights of

heaven to view the life they used to have and are in search for a new one to

take away. Back then I thought it was just a silly fable to scare me away from

the woods. Now, I know that it's the truth.

I reached for my gold pocket watch and right on cue, the blackbird flew down

to my shoulder. I glanced at the raven and imagined its beak formed into a

grin as it looked down at the watch ticking towards death.

As the minute hand reached thirty, a car's headlights came into view

breaking the darkness as promised. With a subtle nod of my head, the raven

soared into the dark sky. I closed my watch, placed it back inside my black

coat and heard a rustling noise from behind. I turned around and saw a fawn

hiding behind a weeping willow. I already knew the events that were going to

unravel before me, but it still amazed me how precise everything always

went.

The car rounded the corner and the raven was poised at ready, eagerly

waiting for the few seconds to pass. The raven glided down to the white car

and landed right on the windshield as instructed. The driver abruptly stopped

the car and profanity escaped her soft lips. After the few failed attempts of

whisking the bird off her car, she continued to drive not caring about the

obnoxious bird that was tilting its head while it stared at her through the

window.

She was in a hurry and I knew why. Her soon-to-be fiancé had a romantic

dinner planned were he was ready to take her hand in marriage. She was

clueless to the proposal and only anxiety filled her stomach while she drove

back home. The thought of seeing her lover quickly vanished from her mind  when the sound of wings flapping against the windshield consumed her

ears. The raven flew off her window only to reveal a frightened fawn crossing

the road.

Her instincts were fast, but not fast enough. The car swiveled by the sudden

maneuver and then tumbled upside down by the force due to the spinning.

The sight before me would cause tears in anyone's eyes, but my own. She

groaned softly as she tried to escape this deadly accident.

"Sir, help me," she cried while squinting her eyes to get a better look of me

through the shattered window. The raven flew to the ground and walked over

to her side before I had the chance to do it myself. Catching sight of the

appalling bird caused her to whimper out of fear and hatred.

"Please help me," she begged. The raven flew back up to my shoulder as I

knelt down to take a look at her. Her pleading green eyes were going in and

out of consciousness as I examined the state she was in. Blood trailed down

her auburn hair, causing it to stick to her pale face; her strength was

weakened from the crash making it difficult for her to retrieve herself from the

prying hands of the car.

"What's your name?" I asked. I already knew her name, it was Jessica, but I

had to make sure.

"Jessica," she replied weakly as if life was already drained from her.

I sighed and extended my hand to her heart, letting my fingers brush her

skin. With just one touch, her heart stopped beating, her lungs shriveled up

and her soul became mine to collect. This is the task I am designed to do, no

matter how hard I tried to fight against it. For years, I was cursed with this

power and it will stay that way for eternity....

 

 

To

    Be

        Continued......

 

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                                                                       Full Metal Alchemist 

 

 

 

I hear crying from the next room, getting out from my bed I make my way

down the hall until I reach the door leading into HER room, opening it slowly

until I see her sitting up in her bed with tears streaming down her face, I

stand there until our eyes meet and I slime lightly

"Hey, what's wrong?" I asked

She wiped the tears away

"Did you have another bad dream?" I asked

She nodded and coughed

I sighed

Walking over to the bed, I climb into it and pull her into a hug

"Its alright.....we'll be fine, there's no need to cry" I stated

"I....I miss her Amara" she stated and coughed

I nodded

stroking her long dark hair

"Yes....I know.......so do I" I stated

"I wish dad was here" she stated and coughed again

I nodded again

"Well he's not......we don't need him......and he doesn't need us" I stated the

last part to myself

She sniffs and cries some more

I hush her and hold her closer as I hum a song Mother used to sing, rocking

lightly until she finally goes back to sleep

"its just us now......there is no one else.......I'm so sorry.......I wish that there

was something I could do......I really do....." I stated to myself

As I walked back into the hall and slowly closed the door again, I tried to go

back into my room but I was no longer tired......even if I tried to go to sleep

I'd only have nightmares of THAT time....

I shudder at the thought

Now even more awake than before as I feel the tears stream down my face

as well

"Thankfully I can keep my composure so well.....otherwise I'd of broken

down along with her and I Can't do that.....not yet, not until she's strong again and i'm more able to take care of her" I thought

I sigh

Going into the living room and turning on a lamp as I flip through some of

Father's old books

I raise an eyebrow

"How the Hell's anyone supposed to understand this crap?" I wondered

Flipping through the pages sightly faster than before

I already read through most of them already and I found i've got a pretty

good memory so I didn't have any need to read past them again

Sighing as I look out the window, I scoff, its barely even dawn and I'm

already up and about for the entire day....

I shake my head......How senseless.....rolling my eyes

My gaze is caught by a picture hanging on the wall, from a another place

and time.....one where we were all together and happy, at least for the

moment

"I Miss You" I whispered

grabbing some random blanket, I wrap myself in it before I lay back onto the

couch and close my eyes praying the memories will just fade with the sun's

rise.....

 

 

To Be Continued.

   

 

 

 

[sahra12 0]

 

                                                                       Full Metal Alchemist 

 

 

 

I hear crying from the next room, getting out from my bed I make my way

down the hall until I reach the door leading into HER room, opening it slowly

until I see her sitting up in her bed with tears streaming down her face, I

stand there until our eyes meet and I slime lightly

"Hey, what's wrong?" I asked

She wiped the tears away

"Did you have another bad dream?" I asked

She nodded and coughed

I sighed

Walking over to the bed, I climb into it and pull her into a hug

"Its alright.....we'll be fine, there's no need to cry" I stated

"I....I miss her Amara" she stated and coughed

I nodded

stroking her long dark hair

"Yes....I know.......so do I" I stated

"I wish dad was here" she stated and coughed again

I nodded again

"Well he's not......we don't need him......and he doesn't need us" I stated the

last part to myself

She sniffs and cries some more

I hush her and hold her closer as I hum a song Mother used to sing, rocking

lightly until she finally goes back to sleep

"its just us now......there is no one else.......I'm so sorry.......I wish that there

was something I could do......I really do....." I stated to myself

As I walked back into the hall and slowly closed the door again, I tried to go

back into my room but I was no longer tired......even if I tried to go to sleep

I'd only have nightmares of THAT time....

I shudder at the thought

Now even more awake than before as I feel the tears stream down my face

as well

"Thankfully I can keep my composure so well.....otherwise I'd of broken

down along with her and I Can't do that.....not yet, not until she's strong again and i'm more able to take care of her" I thought

I sigh

Going into the living room and turning on a lamp as I flip through some of

Father's old books

I raise an eyebrow

"How the Hell's anyone supposed to understand this crap?" I wondered

Flipping through the pages sightly faster than before

I already read through most of them already and I found i've got a pretty

good memory so I didn't have any need to read past them again

Sighing as I look out the window, I scoff, its barely even dawn and I'm

already up and about for the entire day....

I shake my head......How senseless.....rolling my eyes

My gaze is caught by a picture hanging on the wall, from a another place

and time.....one where we were all together and happy, at least for the

moment

"I Miss You" I whispered

grabbing some random blanket, I wrap myself in it before I lay back onto the

couch and close my eyes praying the memories will just fade with the sun's

rise.....

 

 

To Be Continued.

 

Ive Read Yours :) Ha, Its really good, Good Luck Dude.

[nbkzeezu2 3]

CHAPTER~1

~The Last Moment~

 

I glanced up and down the street. I saw nothing and no one move.

Still, the darkness seemed to encroach on my mind. It rendered me too
terrified to move for a moment. The wind picked up and whipped between
the two towering buildings. It made a whistling sound that seemed to
shriek just over my head. It grabbed at my clothing as if it were
trying to rip them from my body. I shuddered, although I am not sure
if it was out of fear or cold. I turned back, determined to follow
through with the task I had assigned myself. Three more blocks, then I
would be safely back at our hotel, closed up in the sanctuary of my
room, with all of my friends within an arms reach.
                                     

The game of truth or dare had put me in this position, but now the hard

part was done. I had taken the flower from the graveyard. I held it
even now, clenched in my hands. I held on so tight that the stem was

broken and mushy in my hand. I took one step. Then another. The wind
seed to grow even louder, now it sounded like the shriek of a woman
bound for execution. I took another step, and begin to speed up. The 

quicker I arrived at the hotel the better. Suddenly, I felt..........(TO BE CONTINUED)

 

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Edited September 7, 2014 by nbkzeezu2

[UndefeatedTanker 5]

The Brave

It was getting dark as the tanks were driving into enemy territory. The night sounded a bit too quiet. The crickets were chirping and the owls were hooting, but everyone was getting ready to shoot the enemies when they had to. All of a sudden a bush was moving around. And one tank fired and hit the stowage of a tank that was leading the battalion. The leader of the battalion quickly communicated to the rest of his battalion to start firing their shells. Multiple tanks caught on fire in the blaze. All of a sudden the firing of the shells died out, and the battalion continued to cruise into enemy territory. Then they saw it, a sea of thousands of Nazi tanks. The leader quickly communicated to have the warplanes come in. They hid under the hill and waited for the planes to drop their payload. Then they heard it, the bombs fell, and they charged. They started to fire. The German artillery blew up the Allied tanks and was desperate to win that battle. The German tanks and Allied tanks charged…

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The Soldier (410 words -.-)

The smell of death was in the air, and the sound of tanks and artillery rolling in. It was a rainy and miserable day in the battlefields. The trench was wet and muddy and enemy’s firing their guns constantly. The conditions were terrible, and the food, just as bad. Mice had infested the trenches. The trenches were filled with the smell that is indescribable. The worst conditions a man can ever face. But, the men must do their job and inch by inch push into enemy lines. The soldiers are desperate to keep themselves alive, and are firing their machine guns at the enemies nonstop. The enemy’s shells are raining down and have already claimed hundreds of lives already. Jake and few of his colleagues are still clinging on their lives, but they knew it would be gone soon. Jake had been drafted into World War II, just like many of his friends. Jake is terribly crushed by the overwhelming pressure of the war. Jake wished he could turn back. His friends had mocked him and pushed him down and had called him a coward. Jake was reluctant to fight, but still did it for his country. His friend he made in his platoon was his only friend that he could talk to. Jake’s friend John empowered Jake to do his best. John stood up to those who mocked Jake, and fought side by side with Jake. John and Jake had become brothers. But Jake would always think of his family, and would feel like going back to his home, Great Britain. Every day, Jake would fight in those trenches against those Nazi soldiers. For days, weeks, and months Jake would shoot until he ran out of ammo. Until one tragic day, John said he wanted to take a view on the German positions. Jake went to get a sandwich and he heard a shot. John fell flat on the ground bleeding. John asked Jake if he is going to always be his friend, even when he dies. Jake replied yes with deep sadness in his heart. John fell to the ground and stopped moving. Jake fell to the ground weeping. Just then Jake’s leader of the platoon told them to charge. Jake saw his chance to run home and see his family. He thought for a long time. He thought of John and how the Nazis had killed him. He ran through No Man’s Land…

To be continued...

 

Bro, that is good.

[Shard-01 0]

Here's my entry...

 

 

Darkness. Blinding fire. Darkness again. This was the largest battle that had ever been fought. And the most intense, too. The Casualties were high, and both sides had gone nearly broke buying crystals. But let me start at the beginning.

It all started when Goldmode_on became bored with Tanki online. He left the game with one final challenge: his famous paint would be passed on to the clan who could defeat all the others in combat. At first it was a friendly battle, with both sides sharing jokes and bantering. But then druggers arose, and those who didn't have the drugs to spare started complaining. And from these complaints arose the hackers who proceded to ruin the whole thing. One clan, wrathful toward the increasing hacking, hired a deadly assassin to eliminate the hackers. Like literally kill them in real life. The other clans, refusing to allow themselves to be slaughtered, higher their own assassins, ninjas, robot armies and superhuman units to destroy the other players before they could log onto Tanki. The casualties were high. Soon the government saw it as their duty to stop the increasing violence, but it ended up taking sides in the battle. Different nations sided with different clans. World War Three began.

Meanwhile, far out in space, a shadowed creature sat in front of his computer, staring at the Tanki home page. He would wait until all the earthlings wiped each other out, before deliver the crushing blow! The Goldmode_on paint would be his!  :o 

 

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[rothro3 50]

The Best Battle Chapter 1

 

            There was much debate, but no decision.  Capture the Flag?  Team Death Match?   Pro Battle?  My friends and I had just spent three hours discussing what was the best battle in Tanki Online.  The discussion had gotten to where we were stumped on one subject: Game mode.

            Finally we decided to settle the issue by setting up eight twenty minute games of four on four, or eight players, with two maps: Polygon and Cross.  In each map there would be four games: Death Match, Team Death Match, Capture the Flag, and Control Points.  The winning game mode would be determined by size of the battle fund. We would start the next day at 12:00 UTC.  

That night I lay on my bed wondering about the next day.  How does one sleep when there is a lingering question on one’s mind?  The house creaked as it settled down for the night.  What should I use tomorrow while playing those rounds?  The room grew darker.  Would my opponents play as Freeze, the gun I can never beat?  An eerie silence settled in the room.  Questions went through my mind unanswered. Storm clouds covered the moon.  What would happen tomorrow? 

[Scarrock 4]

The Death Battle

 

Very few people know about the glitch map known as Death, developed by a glitch tank known as the Anti-Tank. You will know the Anti-Tank when you see him. Equipped with the Hornet and Thunder, bearing a special golden paint the color of a gold box. His map appears to be a normal map from the battle page, but upon joining you realize there is something strange. You are in the middle of a circular pit and right in front of you is the mysterious dreaded Anti-Tank. after 5 seconds, your game lags. Upon re logging, you have zero crystals, NOTHING in the garage, no experience, and you cannot join battles. the only thing you see in the chat is No tank survives, All tanks must die. No one knows how the Anti-Tank is. If he is a virus in the tanki software, or just a mean player trying to ruin someones day. Developers have tried to secretly remove him and his map from the game but he just returns with more hatred and anger then before. Many have fallen into the dark pit of despair he creates.You see, the Anti-Tank is angry and wants to be the only tank. He takes the experience and crystals of the poor tankers who become trapped in his map. This is the story of how the Anti-Tank came to be...

 

There was a kid named Johnathan. He was a very serious gamer und played under the name Tank-God. He enjoyed spending his free time playing one game in particular, Tanki Online. While playing Tanki he thrived. There was not a battle he lost and he was the number 1 ranked player in the game. That all changed one day when a tank by the name of lolyourdeadXD joined a battle Tank-God was in...

Edited September 8, 2014 by Scarrock

[BigDaddy_tanker_PRO 2]

                                                                MY GOLD BOX

 

                3 minutes and 45 second left and  I was brutally damaged with only one hit left  before  my tank gets destroyed. I was getting closer and closer to my post with the flag on me and I just barely made it when a tank shot me. Soon after that  I heard a siren and saw the words in the sky written in gold " Gold box will be dropped soon". I got excited and really happy because I was just a beginner at this game. I went everywhere and saw a whole group of tanks huddled up trying to get something. Soon after that the gold box came down and i moved on top of the tanks, but another tank was doing the same thing that I was doing. Since I only had a smoky with hunter and he had a shaft on him with hornet charging. Finally when he fully charged he shot destroyed me right after  the gold box touched both of us. I looked up at the sky and what it said made me joyful. My name was up there it made me the most happiest tank alive. On my main screen it said I have gotten 50,000 crystals. I went and joined serpuhov game and Boom when i first spawn.

 

 

 

 

to be continued.......

Edited September 8, 2014 by BigDaddy_tanker_PRO

[sean0402 1]

Chapter 1

Whats that!!!

Clang!!!

I wake up and get out of my bed wearily. I look around for what that noise might have been. I go into my brothers room and wake him up.

'' Huh? '' said my brother.

'' I heard something, you want to help me find it? '' I said.

'' Okay '' he said

We walk down the stairs to the kitchen and find a pot on the floor. I was just about to pick it up, when I saw a note in it. I read it out...

 

Dear ...,

You have been challenged to a 12 round competition. These 12 rounds will be set by me. If you fail a round you will either perish or severely injure yourself.The competition will start when you get a phone call from this number.

0983745632

If you get a call a message will be sent to you through SMS informing you on the first round. If you are to use help from police or anyone you are to explode, since I have hacked into your phone.

 

From 

Your Worst Nightmare.

 

'' What should I do should I call the police? '' I ask my brother.

'' Remember what the letter said you shouldn't or you will die! ''

'' I know ''

 

I go back to bed thinking of what to do. I fall asleep after a while and in the morning I get woken up by something, my phone is ringing. I get it and look at the number its the number from last night.

 

I answer it...

 

'' Hello, it is me, your 1st round begins. You are to go to the town hall and go to male bathroom. Go to furthest toilet from the WC entrance. When you get there more information will be given to you later. ''

Edited September 11, 2014 by sean0402